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Recent Reviews for FRANCES C RODRIGUEZ
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Find Someone New (Poetry) - 1/17/2013 3:09:12 PM
i found your poem very heart provoking i am man who has been as you discribed after many years, I have finaly seen the damage that my lies and disrespect of the mother of my child has done to my family, anyway keep the good work up. you can read some of my poetry in the history section entitled black tourist.
AS A CHILD (Poetry) - 1/26/2009 5:15:37 PM
A saddening writing of the lives of many children in every race, country or religion. Gods creatures can give comfort and protection. They love us till they die!
Can I Tell You (Poetry) - 5/10/2007 11:13:53 AM
I love this poem 'cause im passing trough this and let me tell you is so sad to walk alone in this unfair world....
A Angle in Heaven (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:40:47 AM
Your poetry gives on so m uch meaning that you have to recieve positive feedback from all that review. Thanks for sharing with me and many others here on the lovely Den.
No Color (Poetry) - 1/18/2004 1:48:04 PM
excellent my brother continue to write you word will be herd
The African Man (Poetry) - 1/18/2004 1:47:10 PM
continue to teach my brother
OLDER WOMEN YOUNGER MEN (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 7:58:05 PM
smile"""""""""""" say it again, but you can't miss nothing you can't measure (smile)
BEWARE OF YOUR ENEMIES (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 7:54:03 PM
This is heavey continue to teach I love this full of wisdom.
Daddy's Little Girl (Poetry) - 5/23/2003 3:00:08 PM
The loss of a loved one is difficult I have those down feelings too from time to time. Hang in there keep your head up and eyes forward things will be ok
TO BE POOR (Poetry) - 5/23/2003 2:55:44 PM
Well done ! Keep up the great works
Country Boy (Poetry) - 5/23/2003 2:50:05 PM
Real love runs deep and there is no quench......magnificent poem !
No Color (Poetry) - 5/23/2003 2:47:15 PM
Good write !
My Girl (Poetry) - 5/20/2003 3:03:29 AM
nice!
My Girl (Poetry) - 5/19/2003 12:17:09 PM
Nice Frances. Glad to see you posting again.
[it's bear, not bare]
Daddy's Little Girl (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 8:39:10 PM
your father's spirit always lives within you... that shows the quality of the man...
Daddy's Little Girl (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 8:34:03 PM
Such a beautiful
write....
Trixie :)
Daddy's Little Girl (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 12:31:21 PM
Nicely done. Memories are to keep.
Daddy's Little Girl (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 12:20:16 PM
... Blest be those that keep live memories of their parents, for they will never get lost!
"Daddy´s Little Girl" is poemizied with emotions of love. A true poem that knocks the doors of the reader´s heart.
I thank the Author for posting "Daddy´s Little Girl".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Hey Lady (Poetry) - 5/15/2003 11:06:54 AM
I really like this I am having a problem reading your poems. This is the only one I can get into.
TO BE POOR (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 10:26:19 AM
i can relate to this poem; i am not exactly financially well off myself. i often have to go without, as i don't have the money after paying bills. (((HUGS))) good write, frances! :(
Kitty Cat (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 10:25:09 AM
cute write, frances! :) (((HUGS)))
Country Boy (Poetry) - 5/3/2003 8:07:38 PM
caring, moving poem... well done!
Country Boy (Poetry) - 5/3/2003 2:58:16 AM
Lovely and bittersweet work Frances, and I too yearn to be back in the country once again! It is true, "Once a country boy or girl, always a country boy or girl!"
~Nikki~
Country Boy (Poetry) - 5/3/2003 1:05:44 AM
Nice one, Frances.
Country Boy (Poetry) - 5/2/2003 11:13:04 PM
Very sensitive and touching memories expressed here. Good job.
Juxt A little Girl (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 10:45:48 PM
So many children of this world have the same fate. Abuse comes in many forms. (((Hugs to the this little girl ))) May the angels be with her always.
Juxt A little Girl (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 10:36:54 PM
i know this is true. i know so many suffer this fate, and it sickens me. they are but children and i cannot fathom that lives exist such as this. write on dear poetess you speak for many
josie
Juxt A little Girl (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 9:16:00 PM
this is a beautiful wrtie,
about a very sad fact,
how can mosters like that, still be around?
I have 6 grandchildren and I love them more, them my 3 kids, that are all grown, and they can never say, they were physically abused, I was never the discipliner, I was too busy working to give them the best, I myself never had.
LOVE & PEACE .... WILLIAM
My Good-bye Note (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 12:54:13 PM
Agree with Erica .. im wondering why .. fine write J & J
My Good-bye Note (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 11:09:23 AM
Sooo. sad.... Why must you go? I can hear tand feel the hurt in your write.. Excellent
Find Someone New (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 9:11:28 PM
very well done!
Find Someone New (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 6:53:20 PM
All of it...HOW TRUE!
Find Someone New (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 11:55:37 AM
yes, after a relationship gone bad, you're sure to find that someone better..
My Sweet Baby (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 11:08:46 AM
Sweet one Frances. Your work keeps getting better and better.
[Check your spelling and tenses if you publish.]
Love, Elizabeth
My Sweet Baby (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 11:04:37 AM
completely from the heart
take care
josie
The Lost Poet (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 8:18:40 PM
Way to go, Frances. I lost interest in writing for a year and a half. I even tried haiku. Try to write something, perhaps a daily journal.
Namaste
tony
The Lost Poet (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 6:32:51 PM
Great write, we all go through this, I'm there for now, sometimes whats in my mind may not be made for paper.
Nancy
The Lost Poet (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 3:30:04 PM
Nicely done, Frances.
Homeless Child (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 8:23:54 PM
Frances--this was a superb eye-opener for those of us that live in nice houses and eat healthy. Remember those who aren't as lucky. A great depiction of how the not so fortunate lives. Thanks for keeping them in mind. Jim
Homeless Child (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 7:50:55 PM
Oh wow. Reminds me of the latest Lifetime film, "Homeless to Harvard". I can't tell you how many people I know that have suffered through this. Not many so lucky. (*Tip: innocence is not spelled 'innocents'. Don't hate me, lol ;) *)
I really enjoyed this. Slap of reality for us air heads.
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*
Tell Them (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 12:52:13 PM
Ahhh, lovely, Frances. The changes are perfect. Yes ?? A winner in verse.
~Elizabeth
The Homeless Veteran (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 10:45:04 AM
*tears* this is how a nation treats its veterans? shameful...powerful cry for justice...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Tell Them (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 6:09:59 PM
This would be a very good poem, but the word you are looking for is "them" not 'than'.
You may want to change it so it makes more sense in reading. Blessings.
Tell Them (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 4:20:04 PM
ah
hmm
yes
Tell Them (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 3:36:05 PM
Yes even grown children need this love..this nurturing love...great write...floria
I Can See The Light (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 2:11:04 PM
Lovely one...
Strenght And Will (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 12:42:29 PM
a painful, emotion-filled write; well done, frances! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :)
The Beauty Within (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 11:34:55 AM
you are beautiful
josie
The Homeless Veteran (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 7:03:09 PM
God bless your warm heart. Wonderful write.
Thank you
Former Homeless Veteran
Tom
The Mother-in -Law (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 6:19:27 PM
Heehee! Good one!
Oh! I'm just happy that she doesn't sound like my mother-in-law.
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Daddy's Girl (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 3:27:17 PM
This is so warm and loving...I wish I would have had a dad like that..nice write..Floria
Daddy's Girl (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 12:49:14 PM
heartfelt write! :) (((HUGS)))
Self-Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 10:03:43 AM
Ah, wrote a poem about this some time ago.
Will have to post it again for you.
Nicely done,BTW.
Self-Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 9:35:20 AM
Yes...I understand, as well.
Heart-touching write, Frances...
Self-Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 9:05:58 AM
Oh my, I understand so well, so glad you can work through this,
Lovely,
Reindeer
Self-Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 9:00:04 AM
how true, Frances! we look at all the wrong things in our life and never take a minute to cherish the loved ones in our life and all the good things God has given us - but one moment in out life comes when we realise wat life is all about ... friends, family, loved ones, everything around us! fabulous write!
Self-Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 8:44:20 AM
lifes confusion, naw no tears, felt and understood
josie
Getting OLD (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 5:34:18 AM
Lovely write...I have always said..one is not born a woman, but becomes one. It is during our age process that we stand the proudest as women with wisdom and full hearts.
Getting OLD (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 9:58:55 PM
Nicely done. Youth is wasted on the young.
[I say that a lot these days]
Getting OLD (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 8:59:28 PM
Wonderful and heartfelt write!
Allen
Getting OLD (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 8:23:38 PM
Dear Frances, You are still young enough to write lovely poetry. I am probably older than you. My thinking is no matter what age you are, when your time comes to go, you will to a better place. Thank You for your sensitive piece.
tony
Getting OLD (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 7:47:14 PM
True, touching write...
(getting there myself)
Love On My Mind (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 10:58:59 PM
when our lover is absent yes there is the cell phone... get on it! ;)
Love On My Mind (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 3:52:45 PM
You need to get a cell phone. ROFL
Good one Frances.
~E
WIFE (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 7:30:08 PM
Good write and great message!
Sandie Angel :o)
WIFE (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 6:31:54 PM
very lucky man indeed ;)
WIFE (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 2:11:41 PM
Sweet one, Frances.
~E
HIV (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 1:17:20 PM
I hope this isn't a true story and just a well written work on HIV.
~E
HIV (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 11:33:18 AM
I'm so glad that you have your hubby's loyalty and support and feel loved. Great hubby and great write!
Sandie Angel :o)
Guitar Man (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 9:55:00 PM
hope things are sober now. :)
Guitar Man (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 7:49:39 PM
i think thayt thdey Zrshgcg
My special Friend (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 7:18:47 PM
Lovely sentiment. : )
Grandpa Told Me Stories (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 7:01:25 PM
Great memories and wonderful tribute of your Grandpa!
Sandie Angel :o)
The African Man (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 6:58:52 PM
i know some Nigerian men who came to the US and have become very successful business men... it's all what we make out of it and the cards we're dealt... that is Amerika...
Memories Of Her Love (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 6:11:08 PM
Sad memories! Good write!
Sandie Angel :o(
Country Blues (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 5:55:16 PM
I so hope some day that cycle ends. Sad write.
Dreamweaver
A Smile On My Face (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 5:27:29 PM
Beautiful thoughts, and how lucky you are to connect so well and so peacefully. You have a strong faith.
Enjoyed reading.
~E
Beware My Child (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 5:11:16 PM
Powerful and poignant..floria
Hey Lady (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 6:12:26 PM
Yeah, sure. ROFL.
This is good.
~E
My Dream Of Peace (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 5:21:28 PM
mankind is still in its infancy... one day when we are all gone from the face of the earth, he will mature... excellent write!
My Dream Of Peace (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 5:05:00 PM
Why Frances...yes why...when our blood all runs red....why look at color when the men in the front lines are all colors all faiths...this is fantastic..God bless..Floria
My Dream Of Peace (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 4:52:11 PM
Thanks for sharing this..very nice.
My Dream Of Peace (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 4:38:51 PM
This is a thoughtful poem, Frances.
When you find the answers, shout it from the rooftops.
[smiles]
~E
The Soldier That Cried (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 3:44:19 PM
My Son The Soldier (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 1:32:17 PM
Excellent write Frances! You are making your son feel very proud!
Sandie Angel :o)
My Son The Soldier (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 1:30:08 PM
Oh my..this drew tears..how strong a woman you are..your faith must be powerfull. this is truly heartfelt and I will remember your son and your family in my prayers...Floria
My Son The Soldier (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 12:26:42 PM
Wow, that is a powerful and loving poem
Glad I stopped by to read.
~E
Beneath My Blankets (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 5:19:12 PM
Excellent Write, Frances.
tony
Beneath My Blankets (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 5:03:49 PM
Go for it, girl.
This was a pleasure to read.
Glad I stopped by.
~E
A Special friend (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 6:39:01 AM
amazing simply superb
The Greedy OLD Men (Poetry) - 2/28/2003 1:34:16 AM
it's all about black gold and national security... old men are always the war wagers... wonder if they would ever fight in one...
The Greedy OLD Men (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 8:20:36 PM
I think your writing is on target. The hate mail starts from the greed! Who cares they say if a young Marine is killed. There pockets are lined with corruption! Thank You for your writing.
Tony:)
The Greedy OLD Men (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 7:57:26 PM
What is it with you liberals, someone says something you don't agree with and you censor them?
Little Boy Can I ? (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 7:54:08 PM
excellent write on the pain and suffering of abuse...
Little Boy Can I ? (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 4:33:38 PM
Inspiring piece. Thanks.
Little Boy Can I ? (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 3:03:34 PM
another outstanding piece by you,
excellent write
William
Lady Can You Be ? (Poetry) - 2/25/2003 7:52:57 PM
Very nice loving poem.
TY
Tony:)
Lady Can You Be ? (Poetry) - 2/25/2003 11:50:09 AM
A moment captured is a precious thing. I love the moment you captured Frances.
Adam
Women In Prison (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 10:19:03 AM
Sad...could feel the emotion in this...
Women In Prison (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 9:57:39 AM
very well written of a touchy subject
Women In Prison (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 9:47:58 AM
Deeply moving. I pray this happens to no one.
Michael Jackson (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 1:19:53 PM
A sad reflection. Nice write.
Michael Jackson (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 1:10:19 PM
Proof positive that money does not buy happiness...or peace of mind...I don't know if he commited crimes or not and if he did he should pay.. I am no mans judge...but like Karen I do feel very sorry for him...He despised his childhood so much that he doesn't even want to look like himself..how very sad...I hope he gets the help he needs..Floria
Michael Jackson (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 12:16:26 PM
only his millions are keeping his deviant behavor out of jail,
in this society, "money talks",
William
Michael Jackson (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 12:09:56 PM
i feel sorry for him! he has so much, yet he is continously unhappy! sad write about a sad individual who just happens to be famous! :(
My Wedding Day (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 9:42:21 AM
So much sadness in this beautiful write...Floria
My Wedding Day (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 9:29:21 AM
Lovely lovely write...BHUWAN
My Wedding Day (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 9:14:04 AM
A lovely piece , well written
william
A Solider 's Letter (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 8:37:47 AM
So sad, but so beautiful.
Jill
A Solider 's Letter (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 8:32:45 AM
Such sadness
Mama's Little Girl (Poetry) - 2/19/2003 2:16:10 PM
I like the poem i love to read poems.so to you i will say good luck and keep up the good work.
Black Man (Poetry) - 1/27/2003 9:58:01 AM
amen and amen
and you will find allies, friends and partners where you least expect . . .
good write:
john+
The Other Side (Poetry) - 1/17/2003 10:39:14 AM
Thoughtful write.
I Will Be Your Friend (Poetry) - 1/9/2003 4:37:04 PM
This is very heart warming.
To Be Some Ones Fool (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 6:53:48 PM
There are a lot of these around. Just be more careful the next time you fall in love. Saying "I love you!" is nothing if the person does not act like he cares or he saying "I love you!" to everyone you know.
Great write! Hope you'll feel better soon.
Sandie Angel :o)
To Be Some Ones Fool (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 6:25:10 PM
this is toching, great emotions!
A Innocent Man (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 5:02:29 PM
My son and I've often talked about this same thing--equal justice for all, regardless of wealth or the lack of it...
My Blues (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 12:53:13 PM
Love the way this ended! Thanks, Frances, for sharing it...
My Blues (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 11:35:22 AM
Very nice Frances!
Sandie and Buddy :o)
The Child (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 10:00:32 AM
Wonderful poetic topic.
The Child (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 1:36:41 AM
Another moving write...
I know there are some who try to help,
some individuals and organizations--
however, surely not enough...
The Child (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 9:04:03 PM
Poignant write, Frances! Sad what children have to go through sometimes in this world.
Erin
:)
The Child (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 8:57:16 PM
Great write Frances!
Jack
The Child (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 8:56:17 PM
Good!
My Little Prince (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 7:44:12 AM
cute, cute!!!
I feel your love and laughter through this!!
Good job!
sally
My Little Prince (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 1:13:25 AM
A beautiful children write, I loved it..... thanks,
William
My Little Prince (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 7:18:31 PM
Cute write.
My Little Prince (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 7:14:40 PM
LoL, how precious children are. They make you smile no matter how much evil happened to you that day. What a precious child he is ;)
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
Looking Into His Eyes (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 6:40:05 PM
You're a very lucky woman, Frances, to have somebody like that with that love. Even if it's not about you, this poem, I am sure it will happen. You wrote this beautifully, as if your heart was aflight and floating about the air with a smile upon it's bit of surface ;)
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
The Memories We use To Share (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 6:19:08 PM
a lovely write, I too miss my parents,
At times wondered what they would look like now, that I too am golden in my years??????
william
COUNTRY LIVING (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 4:59:27 AM
Country living and good living. Frances this struck home. Bill Murray
COUNTRY LIVING (Poetry) - 1/2/2003 9:16:52 PM
Love the imagery and mood in this...
Happy New Year, Frances!
Fear (Poetry) - 1/2/2003 5:37:40 PM
Very deep write, Frances. This was very sad and, yes, fearful, too..
Warm Love,
Brittany
THE INNOCENT CHILD (Poetry) - 1/2/2003 5:35:07 PM
Your poem is beautiful, and so are you. God bless you always. Beth
My Black Queen (Poetry) - 1/1/2003 2:45:37 AM
delightful!
My Black Queen (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 5:45:42 PM
How does it feel hon, to be his perfect rose?
Happy New Year. Bill Murray
My Black Queen (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 12:31:23 PM
This is beautiful!
I love it...
Faye
It No Longer Runs Thru My Body (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 3:08:50 AM
Very good.
It No Longer Runs Thru My Body (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 11:07:24 PM
Nice write Francis!
Jack
The Old Poetry Writer (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 8:27:30 AM
Very nice, a soft and gentle read! :O)
Nikki
The Old Poetry Writer (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 5:14:46 AM
A very gentle read...lovely.
The Old Poetry Writer (Poetry) - 12/29/2002 9:21:54 PM
May I kiss your hand dear? For you are a Princess to me. Life has only made you younger in my mind. Keep writing Frances.
You are getting better and better. Bill Murray
LONELINESS (Poetry) - 12/29/2002 9:19:03 PM
Excellent poem.Sad though....hope all gets better in the new year.
The Old Poetry Writer (Poetry) - 12/29/2002 9:10:24 PM
Hi Frances; I love this one! "with her clean soul" is a beautiful line, and the theme of creativity - and using your talent - bring you closer to Heaven is a lovely one.
Sallyo.
Why? oh! Why? (Poetry) - 12/29/2002 3:51:25 AM
Great job.
Why? oh! Why? (Poetry) - 12/28/2002 6:42:47 PM
Sometimes memories are more painful than when they occured, because you've wised up and realise the truth. 'tis a sad thing. 'tis a good poem!
Warm Love and Happy New Year,
*-Brittany-*
Why? oh! Why? (Poetry) - 12/28/2002 6:20:28 PM
12-28-02
As Long As You Keep Looking Back, More Than a Cloud Will Hang Over You!!
TRASK PS: Read My Prior Poem:
As Law Of (Love) Compassion Is Giving
Life (Poetry) - 12/28/2002 8:27:34 AM
Yes a beautiful poem Frances. Good editing and correct English. Someone has been a big help to your poetry. Great going. Bill Murray.
WRINKLESS AND GREY DON'T BE ASHAME (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 8:47:09 PM
Thank you my sweet! God, I needed this. lol At 43, I am not ashamed at all but I know that I am not the same on the outside. Stupid of me, I know. Love, JC xoxoxo
Life (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 8:44:23 PM
Amen Sweet Lady, such a beautiful poem! I wish you & yours a very Happy New Year.
Love, Janet xoxoxo
Life (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 8:20:19 PM
AMEN to this heart filled piece!
Life (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 8:05:48 PM
Such a beautiful and warm poem Frances. I love this, because, the last line is so much true.
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
I Ask Forgiveness (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 2:53:37 AM
very beautiful write....and deep sad inside...it reveals the true emotions in mother about her son....nice write...thanks for sharing
I Ask Forgiveness (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 6:56:43 PM
We all do the best we can with what we have available to us at the time. Time to forgive yourself now...as I'm sure he has done.
~ Dee
I Ask Forgiveness (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 6:33:00 PM
How especially sad this is. Inside, I am so sure of this, he has forgiven you as well as God.
*-Brittany-*
Baby Can You Tell Me.... (Poetry) - 12/21/2002 5:30:14 PM
I love it.It is a good poem and if I could write one like that one day I would be famous.
A Letter To God (Poetry) - 12/20/2002 5:33:42 PM
This is an excellent write dedicated to thanking the creator for what we do have rather than what we do not have. This is truly beautiful that you keep that in mind always.
Amor
A Letter To God (Poetry) - 12/20/2002 12:34:52 PM
Beautiful Frances, more like a well written prayer, lovely
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
William Bonilla
A Letter To God (Poetry) - 12/20/2002 10:18:21 AM
beautiful write, frances! thanks for sharing!
Sunshine (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 8:03:34 PM
Frances, this work of yours is much much better. I thank you for finding a way of taking out all the grammatical mistakes. Now your ideas have cogency and I love this. Now all you have to do is remember to comment on the work of others to build a readership. Without the give and take you will only receive a few isolated comments. This much much better dear. Bill Murray
Sunshine (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 6:49:42 PM
Beautiful write Frances,
william bonilla
Sunshine (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 3:14:13 PM
Our past is always there lurking like a shadow that we catch peripherally when we are not distracted by day to day life. It comes to the forefront in the strangest ways making itself ominously visible and clear when we least expect it to. It then does its best to rear its ugly head and cast a dark cloud on our todays and tomorrows. It is a great way to learn from it and realize that it will always be there to affect us. We all make mistakes we wish we could take back but if anything, we must learn to avoid making them again. This is a great expression of describing it with your write. Well done, Frances.
Amor
St.Nick (Poetry) - 12/13/2002 4:03:48 AM
Beautifully done. When I was young and single with two little girls and not much money, some how Santa always showed up!!
St.Nick (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 10:19:03 PM
Sad but very nice write.
Jack
St.Nick (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 6:26:45 PM
excellent write, "tears" beautiful poem
William Bonilla
Merry Christmas to you and your family.
St.Nick (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 3:36:31 PM
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL AND SAD WRITE...EXCELLENT POEM..WRITTEN SO WELL.
HUGS,
GOD BLESS,
BETTY
Dear Santa (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 6:54:18 PM
12-11-02
You Should Tell That Stranger Of Your Gratitude!
TRASK
Dear Santa (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 1:35:51 PM
I loved reading this poem it's a lovely write,
I too wish, all kids around the world, can enjoy this coming celebration of our Lord.
William Bonilla
It Is Time To Say Good-bye (Poetry) - 12/8/2002 1:33:43 AM
Hi FRANCES,
This is very nicely written.
Not all people are so lucky. Good luck…. Peter.
Baby Can You Tell Me.... (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 2:42:17 PM
Good luck. Good poem.
Baby Can You Tell Me.... (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 12:01:09 PM
In most cases,the innocent children!:(
A sad but,everyday occurance unfortunately.
Take care,
Love Jilly x
For We Are, Who We Are (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 10:44:22 AM
well spoken! good write with a lot of good message throughout! happy thanksgiving, dear! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
The Poet (Poetry) - 11/23/2002 4:37:36 AM
Nice write with the subliminal.
Cheers,
Tim
The Poet (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 11:32:21 PM
cool!
The Poet (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 11:04:32 PM
Fi Frances,
Well written, A poets poem
William Bonilla
The Poet (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 5:34:46 PM
well done !
The Poet (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 5:27:21 PM
nice one!
=)
The Younger Woman (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 1:41:25 PM
He'll regret trading in a full flower for a mere bud.
The Younger Woman (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 10:40:44 AM
unfortunately, it happens, frances. a sad write, indeed! (((((HUGZ)))) love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. >tears <
The Homeless Veteran (Poetry) - 11/21/2002 4:16:53 PM
Beautifully written, filled with compassion. Your warm heart shines through!
The Homeless Veteran (Poetry) - 11/21/2002 12:24:00 PM
Moving write, touching upon a very real and present tragedy...
The Homeless Veteran (Poetry) - 11/21/2002 12:07:49 PM
Thank You.
WILLIE NELSON (Poetry) - 11/21/2002 6:01:42 AM
I like Willie, too!
WILLIE NELSON (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 8:23:15 PM
must be willie's time, i wrote one about him or one of his songs the other day. nice
WILLIE NELSON (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 7:52:13 PM
Cool Poem Frances,
Cice write, I am a willie nelson fan too, but not a singer.
William Wonilla
MOTHER (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 12:31:19 PM
>tears < i miss my mom, too..as karla said, she was only 59 1/2 when she died, ALMOST 60..far, far too young. it's been 12 years, and i still miss her as much now as i did back then on the day she died. outstanding tribute, frances! love, and (((HUGS))), your friend, karen lynn. :(
MOTHER (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 12:08:20 PM
(((frances))) i miss my mother, too...she died 12 years ago, not quite 60 years old...too young...i miss her advice and love...this is a beautiful tribute to your mom. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
THANKSGIVING DAY (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 11:05:02 AM
truer words were never spoken, frances. be thankful for the blessings you already have in life! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Cowboy (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 10:28:16 AM
me wishes i had a cowboy myself (and there are plenty to chosse from here in texas!). love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Cowboy (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 10:11:44 AM
wish i had me a cowboy...this is a great write, frances! you're still welcome to come to texas, city girl...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Lady Of The Night (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 8:38:30 AM
Very sad and true
THE CLOWN (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 3:46:34 PM
i think ppl become clowns to hide behind the pain...bring joy into someone else's lives may bring a little to theirs...great write, frances! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
THE CLOWN (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 3:40:43 PM
how true! even clowns have to cry sometimes; they aren't immune from prohlems! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :(
Me And Smokey Coming your Way (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 2:48:31 PM
come on down! you're the next girl on her way to the country! we'd love to have you...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. great poem, by the way! :)
Me And Smokey Coming your Way (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 2:32:11 PM
keep em comin', love! love, your friend down texas way, karen lynn. (((HUGZ))) :)
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