Recent Reviews for Virago E DeSante
Multiplicity (Poetry) - 8/18/2007 10:28:17 PM|
I like your style and it intrigues me to think that this abstraction, in its reality, was conjured up by another Allentownian! :)
Love and Peace~
Multiplicity (Poetry) - 1/5/2006 7:54:56 AM
Many truths in this poem. Well crafted.
Fire Light (Poetry) - 8/20/2005 2:18:59 AM
Depression is a personal demon, that takes our minds and scatters it to the four winds. I think everyone from time to time, has been dealt a hand or two from this monster.
This is a terrifying write, but one that can only help in the healing.
A Light Unto Me (Poetry) - 3/21/2005 9:05:59 PM
a very enlightened poem ... well penned ...
Progression (Poetry) - 2/28/2005 9:23:34 AM
Isn't that just the way. Life has a way of doing that to you.
Progression (Poetry) - 2/26/2005 6:17:20 PM
everything in life is relevant and has an inner meaning if we put an effort into finding it ...
Progression (Poetry) - 2/24/2005 1:13:47 PM
After reading this I remembered a quote from Satchell Paige. He said, "don't look back, something might be gaining on you". I liked how you put this one together, it certainly has more meaning than what is implied on the surface.
Progression (Poetry) - 2/24/2005 10:48:40 AM
Hmm this one does have a real good dose of truth in it.
On the insides (Poetry) - 2/9/2005 9:30:37 PM
the insides feel the best ...
On the insides (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 10:09:59 PM
*On the Insides* is a very cool write. Cleverly written it flows smoothly from the first word to the last word. :)
On the insides (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 6:46:48 PM
This one is rather unique.
Struggle in Satin (Poetry) - 1/14/2005 12:19:52 PM
It's been a long time since I saw your name in the list. Glad I
checked into this, virago....it is an excellent piece of writing!
Isn't it something how depression seems to dredge out the unseen
pains of our soul?
If you go to my pages on BiPolar articles, you will no doubt find
your agonies in similar famous people.
Struggle in Satin (Poetry) - 1/14/2005 10:10:42 AM
excellent reminds of the times i am trying to pull myself from the depths of depression
Struggle in Satin (Poetry) - 1/14/2005 6:22:28 AM
A very creative write. Well-done!
Sandie May Angel :o)
Struggle in Satin (Poetry) - 1/14/2005 5:01:45 AM
This is so well written. You are very talented. A special gift indeed. Thanks for posting.
Struggle in Satin (Poetry) - 1/14/2005 5:00:25 AM
Yes but I like moths and enjoyed this write.
Struggle in Satin (Poetry) - 1/14/2005 12:10:39 AM
Nihilism at its best. Well put in writing!
Lifespring (Poetry) - 1/3/2005 6:44:03 PM
Well at least you have a goddess and well we can dream of a dashing night but then I have one. A
This Sea (Poetry) - 12/3/2004 6:29:59 PM
This is pretty sad but the way you used the sea and all the life and such is awesome to me.
God Bless You and Your Family
warm and happy holidays and all days
This Sea (Poetry) - 11/30/2004 9:59:32 PM
Sad, eloquent, and so human!
Very well done,
This Sea (Poetry) - 11/30/2004 9:04:16 PM
This is so sad and touching.
This Sea (Poetry) - 11/30/2004 8:34:54 PM
the second verse is excellent ...
subject optional (Poetry) - 9/2/2004 3:35:59 PM
Excellent write, just excellent. A backhand to the side of the head of indifference.
subject optional (Poetry) - 8/31/2004 1:25:44 AM
subject optional (Poetry) - 8/29/2004 9:32:20 PM
Great expression. Enjoyed.
subject optional (Poetry) - 8/29/2004 8:32:42 PM
gamut gamut ^..^
subject optional (Poetry) - 8/29/2004 7:42:39 PM
wow, this runs the entire gamut of emotional response ... a powerful internal and external analization of why we should care or why we should not ...
really well written ...
subject optional (Poetry) - 8/29/2004 6:54:05 PM
this is an exceptional poem; one can feel the gamut of emotion and the development of clarity is communicated in your choice of words and images. great work, Dawn
Lunacy (Poetry) - 7/2/2004 9:06:08 PM
excellent writing on this subject
Lunacy (Poetry) - 7/2/2004 2:20:52 PM
what a catastrophic vision
delivered to a good result
Unprepared (Poetry) - 6/5/2004 10:02:31 PM
Excellent expression of heartfelt emotion.
Unprepared (Poetry) - 6/4/2004 6:13:21 AM
Unprepared (Poetry) - 6/3/2004 1:57:29 PM
Nice job. I like the overall effect of the piece... especially, the ending.
The Sun Will Never Rise (Poetry) - 6/2/2004 11:07:07 AM
Virago, I don't know why but this poem brings forth the title of the song: "Looking For Love In All The Wrong Places." I am sure you will get it all right as you go along. Expecting great things to come from your pen. (prove me right) Keep writing (and let the sunshine in) Bill
The Sun Will Never Rise (Poetry) - 6/2/2004 10:36:38 AM
WONDERFUL romantic ambience this poem dispenses!
Vegetative Musings (Poetry) - 6/2/2004 10:29:29 AM
stunning imagery and verse! well done! serenity captured brilliantly!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Plummeting (Poetry) - 2/23/2004 6:09:42 PM
Ice (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 4:39:44 PM
There is a lot of great imageries in this poem. Good write indeed!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Ice (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 4:23:04 PM
Slowly and brilliantly "moving"...
like the aurora borealis...graphic!
The last line is explosive, Virago.
Ice (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 3:05:47 PM
Wonderfully mystically romantic...
Euphoria (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 3:45:20 PM
You are truly gifted, young lady!
I am so glad I found your beautiful poems.
The Beast Within (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 2:46:15 PM
I Can Imagine (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 7:15:10 AM
Gorgeous memories put to paper virago...lovely write..floria
I Don't Know (Poetry) - 2/16/2004 9:43:30 AM
yes you do and you expressed it well
I Don't Know (Poetry) - 2/16/2004 9:20:04 AM
Darn right you do, Virago!
You've had enough heartache in your life.
Your poetry is first rate...and I hope
you find another poet who appreciates you.
The Beast Within (Poetry) - 2/16/2004 6:52:57 AM
nothing better than liberating the romantic the beast within us ...
The Beast Within (Poetry) - 2/15/2004 4:37:31 PM
i like the intensity of this, and how it was like an invitation and a warning at the same time.
The Beast Within (Poetry) - 2/15/2004 3:59:51 PM
Wow, girl...this has impact...a straight to the heart write!
The last line creates intense anticipation...
The Beast Within (Poetry) - 2/15/2004 3:08:35 PM
Fantastic description of romantic and physical desires combining to overwhelm the senses!!! Great work...
Peregrine (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 4:28:04 PM
This is depth, with gut-wrenching emotion.
I loved it! Especially the last verse. It
ties it all together beautifully.
Desire (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 2:57:51 AM
Girl...you rock with this one, especially!
Graphically penned images. Excellent.
Desire (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 2:18:36 AM
Desire (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 1:56:42 AM
Very good write!!!!
Equus (Poetry) - 2/13/2004 9:22:52 AM
Romantic images, nicely done.
Crushed (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 10:41:51 PM
You have talent for writing ...keep it up...soul touching write!!!!
Crushed (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 7:40:35 PM
Exquisite expressive words...subtle senuousness, superb write...
Crushed (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 2:03:35 PM
This is one of the most heart-tugging romance poems
I have read in some time, and that says a lot, because
genius does indeed reside within The Den.
Yet another time, a poet has proven, that pain begets
Crushed (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 1:59:23 PM
This one is so sad and it is familiar..
Intoxication (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 5:59:06 AM
How did you capture this is so few words? So well penned, why do people go there?
Intoxication (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 2:58:01 AM
I know this feeling.. once you've been there you never forget!
You've managed to pen in words the very hopeless results of an intoxicated state of mind. Very well penned. Lisa
Shock (Poetry) - 7/25/2002 6:36:26 PM
Virago, I actually read this just moments after you first posted it on the site, but chose not to respond to it then. I come from a background as a Care Team member for this challenge, and what strikes me as beyond comprehension is how anyone could be so insensitive as to give you this information by phone? This poem is a most eloquent articulation of Shock. Surround yourself with as much Love as possible, especially from you to you, and know that many are prayers of many. Vicky
Shock (Poetry) - 6/30/2002 9:47:13 AM
Thank you for your courage to share. Well done.
Shock (Poetry) - 6/30/2002 9:13:55 AM
I am so sorry to hear about that...this write relays that shock so well and it does give a better understanding of what that would feel like to find that out. My prayers and hopes are for the best.
Shock (Poetry) - 6/30/2002 7:58:57 AM
try to overcome you affliction with positivity and proper treatment...
Shock (Poetry) - 6/30/2002 6:45:16 AM
Sad and intense. Great poem. Things just happen beyond our control. I lost a friend to AIDS. It makes us appreciate life that much more. Thank you for writing this.
Walk Alone (Poetry) - 5/27/2002 11:52:11 PM
vivid description, subtle and very beautifully strung together.