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Recent Reviews for Kim Schuelke
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The Coliseum's Death (Short Story) - 6/12/2008 6:16:29 AM
Great story, Kim. Thanks!
Ron
Electric Love (Short Story) - 6/9/2008 5:27:47 AM
Guilt is a funny thing. Twenty years is a long time to carry it. After 20 years of marriage I don't think it would make much difference. Nice story.
Ron
Stupid Girls (Short Story) - 6/1/2008 2:29:21 PM
Cute story--I was wishing it was a bit longer as I got wrapped up in it. Captures the feeling of a blended family from a kid's point of view.
Stupid Girls (Short Story) - 5/26/2008 10:42:36 PM
Delightful story; very well penned! :)
A Pet of Your Own (Article) - 6/14/2008 4:00:26 AM
Kim---excellent story that teaches and connects with children---we often think of the expense of other pets---my dog had to get teeth cleaned (and removed). Cost: $350. I like your idea better!
Aloha and Best,
Myles
It Didn't Seem to Matter (Poetry) - 7/1/2008 9:01:18 AM
Very sad, and too often true. God made us to be sociable. I love the Bible passage that says, "Two are better than one....If one falls down, his friend can help him up. But pity the man who falls and has no one to help him up!" and it continues. It's in Ecclesiastes chapter 5
You've written a wise poem; living for oneself just doesn't produce a happy life.
Connie
Hazy, Crazy World (Poetry) - 7/1/2008 8:32:43 AM
Ditto to all Karen's remarks!
You are special!
Connie
My Hazy Gaze (Poetry) - 7/1/2008 8:30:51 AM
This is a long "awwwww" poem. It is so unique, writing from the perspective of the baby girl. It made me feel awed by its wonderful "hazy gaze." At first I thought it was the Daddy's thoughts, then I realized what you had done. Great work!
Connie
It Didn't Seem to Matter (Poetry) - 6/24/2008 11:36:55 AM
Hello Kim-
Time flies so fast and what matters in life is the legacy we leave behind. "What difference did I make?" is a question for all of us reflect on because a life without purpose is a wasted life.
Cynthia
Every Day (Poetry) - 6/24/2008 11:31:08 AM
Hello Kim,
A vivid poem on the cycle of "abuse" - I was familiar with this but God had better plans and am now free. I can read your poem and not feel
afraid anymore. Thanks!
Cynthia
Hazy, Crazy World (Poetry) - 6/10/2008 6:57:20 PM
Cute, lively, very original and tastefully unqiue....
Be always safe,
Karen
It Didn't Seem to Matter (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 6:08:01 PM
Wow, how many live their lives today and I find it so very sad. Breaks my heart to find so many people alone towards the end of their lives when they could have had so much....
Be always safe,
Karen
Every Day (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 9:09:55 AM
what a sad write,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,tears for those who suffer
It Didn't Seem to Matter (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 9:08:02 AM
This is very profound and melancholic, loved it!
Every Day (Poetry) - 5/29/2008 2:52:54 AM
The final line sums the hearts needs with honesty. Enjoyed
Every Day (Poetry) - 5/27/2008 5:18:38 PM
Filled with inspiration to bring happiness to any heart....
Be always safe,
Karen
Every Day (Poetry) - 5/27/2008 2:36:26 AM
Hello,your poem is very interesting.In the 2 last lines,every day should be like Valentine's day.Why should we celebrate love once a year where people should love each other on a daily basis :-)
Edwin
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