Recent Reviews for Kay P M- Devenish
About Elaine Raubitschek (Short Story) - 1/31/2013 5:18:51 AM|
Angels are watching over us indeed.
Loved the story!
May peace and love of the Lord be with you always,
John Michael Domino
"Miracles are everywhere - we just need to be aware!" JMD
About Elaine Raubitschek (Short Story) - 1/30/2013 1:35:10 PM
What a touching, and fitting tribute to the grandmother of your daughter.
A true love story (Short Story) - 4/11/2012 2:14:10 AM
What a great love story Kay, now I know where that strong will in you came from, and what a wonderful thing you have in regaining the Graham tartan, congratulations, you should be truly proud of yourself.
Your Pommie Pal Steve
A true love story (Short Story) - 4/8/2012 9:33:34 AM
She sounds like quite a gal, Kay, no wonder you're so proud of her!!! And it sounds like she still live in you! Thanks for sharing a little of your ancestry with us...
Rose Silverspoon (Short Story) - 10/8/2006 6:44:03 PM
A delightful and meaningful tale. Thank you for sharing it, Kay. Love and peace to you,
Rose Silverspoon (Short Story) - 9/11/2006 1:51:07 PM
Very good story!
Rose Silverspoon (Short Story) - 9/9/2006 9:42:02 PM
I love your story. Thank you for letting me share it.
Rose Silverspoon (Short Story) - 9/8/2006 8:41:43 AM
Delightful story; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Rose Silverspoon (Short Story) - 9/7/2006 3:08:52 AM
Wonderful write Kay...I love it. Presented with a childlike quality but just a tease of adult humour there as well with the use of her bra as the objection of the rooms attention. So good to see one of your writes up again.
Angels Are Real (Article) - 3/13/2013 4:17:23 AM
Well done! Angels are rare but angels are there.
May peace be with you, love surround you and blessings abound you,
Angels Are Real (Article) - 5/16/2012 9:33:28 AM
Kay, Yes, there are angels out there for I have
encounter a few-Glad your mother will be fine.
Autopsy of a Green Dream (Article) - 3/28/2012 12:34:37 AM
I think you will dive in again, and again, you will do what you believe to be right and best for everyone, if you could save all six ships you would do so, I have no doubt of that, it's the way you are, built into your genes, you will always do the right thing, you wouldn't know how to do anything else, it's part of what makes you the very special person that you are.
From your Pommie Pal Steve
Autopsy of a Green Dream (Article) - 3/25/2012 5:39:07 AM
I'm no Green, although I am probably closer to that line than I used to be. And while I would have voted against your candidate, I admire your grit and determination.
Are we doomed? (Article) - 3/23/2011 4:44:04 AM
The entire world seems to be such a sad place these days with Mother Nature on such a terrible rampage, and with our ever increasing human population now destroying so much of what Mother Nature had so gladly given us. I fear the world we're leaving to future generations will look nothing like the wondrous natural world that I knew as a child.
Are we doomed? (Article) - 3/22/2011 6:57:46 PM
As In All Realms-The Just Will Suffer With The Unjust-
You Your Child Spared By Mother(God) Nature...
Protect Your Children Our Children (God) Will Spare (Protect) You
Until Your Time Is (Has Come) Right!
Are we doomed? (Article) - 3/22/2011 6:21:22 PM
I cannot imagine what it must be like to go through such devastation, Kay. If there is one thing certain it is that nothing is certain in this world/life. It is good that you have love in you. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Love and best wishes,
Are we doomed? (Article) - 3/22/2011 4:13:42 PM
I share your heartbreak because of what Mother Nature has given the world. Except for Chernobyl hardly any people have died because of nuclear meltdown. It is far more dangerous to get in your car and drive to the store than a nuclear accident killing you.
Sunsets in my mind. (Poetry) - 3/28/2015 8:04:58 AM
HOW TRUE! WE EACH 'SEE' THE AWESOME BEAUTY OF HIS SUNSETS SO DIFFERENTLY DEPENDING ON SO MANY THINGS THAT ARE GOING ON IN OUR LIVES AT THE TIME, YET, WE EACH CAN ATTEST...THEY ARE GLORIOUS AND...OURS. A GEM, KAY..SO ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Love wonders why. (Poetry) - 3/28/2015 7:59:56 AM
...AND EVERYONE'S 'SHE'...THEIR GUT REASON...IS PERSONAL AND DIFFERENT. THEY MERELY USE THE SONG...THE LOVE...AND 'WRAP IT ALL UP' IN 'SHE'. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Happy first Birthday 'Jed' (Poetry) - 3/8/2015 4:57:48 PM
HOW LOVELY! AND I CAN RELATE TO BEING FAR AWAY FROM GRANDS AND GREAT GRANDS...HOW IT DOES PULL THE HEART STRINGS. WELL DONE, KAY AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Happy first Birthday 'Jed' (Poetry) - 3/6/2015 8:43:38 AM
What a better reason is there than to celebrate ones grandchild...it is an experience akin to having that child as one of your own. We as grandparents are so fortunate that way. I celebrate that feeling with you Kay as I know it well.
Happy first Birthday 'Jed' (Poetry) - 3/5/2015 1:30:27 PM
wonderful isn't it ... my daughter just had my first grandchild ...
Happy first Birthday 'Jed' (Poetry) - 3/5/2015 8:36:04 AM
It is so good to see you posting again. And what a wonderful post it is! When your grandson reads this many years from now, a tear will come to his eye as he remembers the times… The many times… He enjoyed with his, Granny Kay.
Happy first Birthday 'Jed' (Poetry) - 3/5/2015 4:20:35 AM
What a beautiful poem from a wonderful Granny Kay. This is a gem and needs to put in frame.
Happy first Birthday 'Jed' (Poetry) - 3/4/2015 8:44:17 PM
Next year granny Kay,
will have the birthday blues,
because by then,
Sweet Jed will be in his terrible 2's.
Happy birthday Jed,
Happy first Birthday 'Jed' (Poetry) - 3/4/2015 5:40:36 PM
Hey, Happy Birthday, Jed,
From ur Grand moms friend Ed,
I know you can't of this read,
But someday you will know your Granny-Kay,
...Is just what you really need...
Happy first Birthday 'Jed' (Poetry) - 3/4/2015 3:54:59 PM
Kay, nothing comes closer to those heartfelt wishes then your lines written in form of a poem..with a cute rhyme and rhythm...you've showed to Jed - the epicentre of your universe - how sweet the 1st birthday wishes can really be...
Happy 1st birthday to this adorable and handsome boy-Jed!
Happy first Birthday 'Jed' (Poetry) - 3/4/2015 1:49:12 PM
Sweet write, Kay. Happy first to your grandson. I got my first grandchild (a boy) in January. They live in Toronto so I have not held him yet. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Happy first Birthday 'Jed' (Poetry) - 3/4/2015 1:35:24 PM
Delightful poem...Happy 1st Birthday to Jed...hugs!
Lady Mary Ann
Skeletons in a closet. (Poetry) - 11/6/2014 7:38:37 AM
A FANTASTIC WORK! ONE THAT WE ALL CAN RELATE TO, FOR THERE IS NOT ONE PERSON WHO DOESN'T HAVE AT LEAST...A FEW? THANKS FOR SHARING AND IM KEEPING THIS ONE. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...HIS INSPIRATIONS
Skeletons in a closet. (Poetry) - 10/24/2014 11:18:04 PM
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant, we all have skeletons of one kind or another, though I doubt that yours are all that terrible, because you have always had a kindly heart.
I did love the poem and it is great to read your work again.
from your Pommie Pal Steve
Skeletons in a closet. (Poetry) - 10/23/2014 4:16:49 AM
Your heart has penned to page an all too true reality of how life really is. The world and those around us would have us believe that only an unfortunate few, this one here or that one there, has done or experienced things in their past that they would much rather never think about or remember again. Fact is, if you dig deep enough, all people have a skeleton or two buried or hidden in a closet somewhere. It is a sad characteristic of humanity to desire to reveal and uncover the skeletons of others, rather than our own.
To me this poem speaks of acceptance; others accepting us just as we are today. We cannot live our lives in the past, and there can be no relationship, romance, love, etc., without acceptance of who we are today and leaving skeletons where they lie. Better yet, to forget skeletons ever were ... Excellent and touching message that truly spoke to my heart ...
Skeletons in a closet. (Poetry) - 10/21/2014 4:13:54 PM
Excellent poetry and plenty of good down home advice to go along with it.
Skeletons in a closet. (Poetry) - 10/21/2014 12:37:35 PM
A beautiful and insightful poem that many can relate to, if they look inside themselves.
Skeletons in a closet. (Poetry) - 10/21/2014 9:13:28 AM
Well-expressed poetically and a wise shazing this is as well, Kay. Thank you! Love and best wishes to you,
Skeletons in a closet. (Poetry) - 10/21/2014 12:52:43 AM
Kay, dear young lady, it is good to see you dropping by...and this is an excellent, beautiful write...your talent only seems to blossom more each time you write...enjoyed a great deal and I won't ever ask with regards your past...:-) -e-
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 6/4/2014 2:37:59 PM
True, so very true. Much hard work has gone in to this. Seya at the zoo.
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 6/2/2014 8:44:36 PM
Very Very True Kay,
we are indeed the worst of all species,
We, (and our close cousin, the monkey) are the only ones that kill just for the sake of it.
As always, this is a really well written piece Kay, I loved it.
your Pommie Pal Steve
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 5/17/2014 12:20:01 AM
AS ALWAYS, YOUR PROSE IN THIS WORK IS STRONG AND DIRECT...PRESENTING A CONCRETE POSITION. I MAY NOT AGREE WITH ALL OF IT( I EAT FISH) BUT I CERTAINLY AGREE WITH THE FACT THAT THIS PIECE IS WELL DONE AND SOLIDLY SUPPORTED WITH FINE RHYME, RHYTHM AND EXCELLENT IMAGERY. A WINNER, KAY, AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 11/24/2013 5:22:53 PM
Yeah, you are correct ....and the sad fact is we are learning too slow ....about our abuse of Earth's limited precious animals and sea creatures....sad.....
Wonderful, powerful poem .....
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 8/26/2013 7:19:57 AM
Stunning! Your imaginative world is alive and should be thriving.
The rhyme, the beat, the meter is superb.
The story is competition winning stuff.
May I touch you?(Yes...YOU!) (Poetry) - 7/24/2013 1:14:05 AM
i'm hooked...this and the 'toad' write hooked me right into your fandomship....look forward to reading more ...pat
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 7/24/2013 1:10:38 AM
this is a remarkable piece kay, the lilting rhythm, the story, word choices...everything absolutely everything to hold the readers imagination....so sorry to have missed this one early on...pat
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 4/14/2013 4:22:58 AM
You are a delight! This is a hilarious tale of a "monstorous toad."
I'll read this one to our son Keegan.
Lady Mary Ann
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 4/14/2013 4:14:45 AM
The daffodils of gold and the hyacinths scents fill the air
this April morning. Marvelous write so clear and precise.
A warm heart to thoughts.
Lady Mary Ann
Can anyone tell me which one is 'wrong'? (Poetry) - 4/12/2013 8:45:58 PM
God is the salvation for us all................
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/27/2013 11:50:57 AM
WOW...THIS IS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! IM SAVING IT IN MY LIBRARY! IT IS TERRIBLY TERRIFIC!!!! AND THAT IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY! OH...AND, IM MAKING A COPY OF IT AND HANGING IT ON MY COVETED WALL IN BACK OF MY CHAIR WHERE I SIT AT MY COMPUTER. THIS IS A POETICAL HOME RUN, MY FRIEND...WITH ALL THE BASES LOADED! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/25/2013 8:21:59 PM
most interesting reading
love & peace be with you
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/20/2013 5:55:55 AM
I think we all turn the channels with our remotes or don't want to hear what we know is true--thought provoking--I like the way you write
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 10:00:16 AM
Good beyond description!! **********K U D O S **********
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/16/2013 7:15:56 AM
Wow! This is as powerful as it gets.
You've made the case for getting involved
so perfectly. We are all in this thing
called life together. Get out of your comfort
zone and help patch up the cracks.
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/15/2013 5:21:13 PM
Absolutely right on target!
Our word IS what we make it.
Why should all the worlds blunders invade us whenever we turn on the TV?
Much better chance of success when tending to your OWN garden'
But getting rid of all them weeds is tough too...Oh well...
God bless you!
John Michael Domino
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/15/2013 9:13:56 AM
I don't remember this one, but I should. Perhaps that's why I remember your poetry touched me in the past. This poem is a tour de force about the hypocrisy of the wealthy in this world who look down upon the very world they created by raping and pillaging and calling it making use of natural resources. Humans are humans and they are not resources to be consumed. As soon as we learn that, the world would be a much better place. Thanks for sharing this with us once again.
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/15/2013 7:12:59 AM
What everybody else said, especially Jerry...e
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/15/2013 7:02:19 AM
i am keeping this one to read many times more
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/15/2013 5:59:11 AM
Holy crap! This is stunning poetry and a definite keeper...You truly have penned a masterpiece!
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/15/2013 5:49:38 AM
I agree with Jerry....
repost...I don't want to go there (Poetry) - 3/15/2013 1:58:55 AM
Kay, you have written a masterpiece! Words fail me. I'm stunned and shaking my head. Wonderful, wonderful touching and in-depth poetry
Can anyone tell me which one is 'wrong'? (Poetry) - 3/14/2013 6:35:17 AM
Our gun laws in the U.S. are antiquated and there needs to be tighter control and accessibility to weapons and the kind of weapons that are available to the public...but I am afraid that genie is out of the bottle and there are so many guns out there that can be had, stolen or bought on the black market to satisfy the criminal element. The gun lobby and the NRA are way too strong and this lobby as well as most lobbies should be banned from having access to our legislators or from putting their own interests ahead of the rights of victims of gun violence. It is too easy to kill when a gun is available and it is too easy to fall into the hands of the insane, mentally unstable or criminal bent on inflicting harm on others. There is never a valid reason to own weapons designed to kill more people within a short span of time. The statistics indicate that more deaths are due to attack with guns rather than saved in defense, so that argument is unsupported.
I am afraid it may be too late to save ourselves by making new laws on gun control as the criminal element will always be with us to obey any laws in regards to the use of guns or possession of them. There is no easy answer.
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/13/2013 11:35:16 PM
Fast paced this was while reading it...I felt like falling forward...excellent work.
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/9/2013 1:58:35 PM
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/9/2013 1:49:05 PM
A profoundly well penned write
Love & Peace be with you
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/9/2013 4:41:41 AM
All those folks mean well. You can tell them all to go to *.#$%$!
But that will not cure the hurt and the pain deep inside that remains.
I lost a wife to cancer one day.
Her folks abandoned her the last years of her life.
They just did not want to face it, so they all went away.
Then when she was lying on her death bed,
they changed the last minute and decided to show up instead!
I was not amused by all of this,
so I let them have ALL of my mind,
man was I pissed.
In the end I was cut off from a family full of fakes
But I was wounded so badly and wondered If I made a mistake!
You see if you focus on what hurts it will only hurt more.
Then the hurt will grow and fester and mop you all over the floor.
So it's to focus on your future and pick things cup...
is really the BEST revenge so go and fill THAT cup!
It's NOT easy to pick up the pieces and them walk away
But it's the better alternative;
it's the way to a new and better day!
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 1:51:50 PM
The heart takes us to many places, but when it pertains to a broken heart things go haywire.
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 1:33:41 PM
Just a metaphor Ed...for me,milk and cows ...even udders... have always represented good things,even to spill milk would be joy for the seeds under the ground.I don't like it when people use that old saying 'no use crying over spilt milk' especially when one's heart is broken,the old saying undermines one's suffering and paints it as trivial...so,in my poem I wanted to show a different outlook.In this poem my metophor of the milk spilling is really meant to represent one's hopes,dreams and whole future spilling out caused by someone elses broken vow or by another's wrong doings.The female farmer in this poem is metophor for all people who have cared for and tried to protect and treasure relationships,hopes and ideals of themselves and others.Mushroom cloud?= is metaphor for all that's left of one's spirit after a breakup or betrayal.My metophor I hope achieved my aim which was to dismiss the spilling of milk as an innocent event and to paint it as entirely sinister and in the end making the spilt milk (lost hopes,love,good relationships) more worthy of a darn good cry.
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 11:01:32 AM
Kay, I find this to be quite sad and scary, and to be honest I don't quite understand it...sorry for being so thick...e
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 9:32:41 AM
Wow! So tragic...very well penned, Kay...
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 8:42:39 AM
It reads like he tore your heart out.
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 6:42:17 AM
So true. What an amazing deep poem Kay. Platitudes for such pain never help.
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 6:21:21 AM
yes it does feel like that exactly
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 4:43:39 AM
Deep and very meaningful, my friend . . .
Human Monsters! (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 4:26:41 AM
the writing is strong, Kay, the thinking
sharp and cogent, the delivery first rate.
i will return to this
May I touch you?(Yes...YOU!) (Poetry) - 2/20/2013 6:18:22 AM
Lovely poetry-I like the way you write--today I have become a fan of yours
Can anyone tell me which one is 'wrong'? (Poetry) - 1/12/2013 11:58:05 AM
Guns are ingrained in the American psyche. Unfortunately, many fear that they will need guns to protect their property, their lives, and to overthrow the government if it becomes abusive. Like religion, the primary purpose for people having guns is fear.
When you look at the other side of the coin. The number of people that commit suicide, murder, and other crimes, simply because a gun is available, and most tragic of all, when young people get a hold of the family gun and accidentally shoot or maim themselves or others. It seems insane that we would allow this to happen. The daily count of death like this is staggering, similar to death on the highways.
The only reason for handgun is to kill a human being. It has no use for hunting because it is too inaccurate. You only reason for automatic, multi-round, guns is to kill more efficiently––humans. These guns were developed for war and to penetrate armor. When I see men at target sites shooting these weapons it makes me wonder what they are thinking.
The tragic multiple killings that we are seeing are almost always a deranged person. We often ignore them, for bully them, in till they reach a breaking point. We need to do much more by way of mental health, especially since we have so many militarily trained young men and women coming back from war with disorders caused by the horror they've seen.
Let us hope that in the future, we can overcome our fear, become more peaceful, and the guns behind is an artifact of earlier centuries when they were needed for protection and to hunt for food.
Can anyone tell me which one is 'wrong'? (Poetry) - 1/12/2013 11:43:33 AM
its a great question in an upside down world
where the symbol justice is blind
May all the Children And adult heroes
of that infamous day rest in peace
Peace & Love
Can anyone tell me which one is 'wrong'? (Poetry) - 1/12/2013 9:04:52 AM
I think that clearly the laws regarding the purchase of guns and who has them, indeed, must be more stringent. I know that the horrific results following the actions of that young man, who had mental problems, stands out like a sore thumb with regards to a gun getting into the wrong hands. However, I am considering two other episodes which also happened here in the US just recently that maybe you are not familiar with. In both cases these occurrences involved a mother and children. In one case an intruder came into the home of a young widow and her infant son and not content with robbing her house...found and advanced towards her and her son that were hiding and cowering in a corner. She shot him. In the second instance that happened right here in Georgia, where I live, an intruder broke into a house with intent to hurt a mother and her children...she shot him. So then we come down to the bottom line. Do we make all gun ownership unlawful, or just some of them? Kay...we are living in the end times and this is a very dangerous and un-nerving time for all of us. But before I go on, let me make something clear; I do not own a gun, never have owned a gun and never will own one. However, the only reason I don't is because of my faith in God. He is my protection, He is my 'gun'. Anything that happens in my life that He doesn't prevent...is suppose to happen, for my life is in His hands. But as I was saying, these are frightful times that we are living in and many feel that the only protection for them and their families is a gun...for them its something that is 'tangible'. This is because they are not walking by faith, but by sight. So what do we do? Condemn those that are not where we are? Do we refuse to let law abiding, level headed individuals have a well concealed, registered gun in their homes for protection? And what about those sportsmen who hunt during hunting season? Whether we approve of the sport or not...some people tote registered rifles and enjoy this sport. And I don't even want to begin to touch on the amount of firearms that are in our country which got here illegally and cannot be registered. So, Personally I don't feel there is a right or wrong side. I feel both sides have good arguements and I certainly do not feel that we need to begin 'messing around' with our Constitution. Because it would be like opening up a can of worms! Change upon change wouls be made on other parts of this Document, on which the very roots of our Democracy Stands, until we are left with absolutely...nothing! We must not tamper with our Roots! Thus, this is my answer; Until people get more faith in Almight God and see Him as their one and only protection... 'GUN LAWS' IN THE US NEED TO BE IMPROVED AND NEED TO BE STRICKLY ADHERED TO...WITH THE LACK OF ADHERANCE BEING FOLLOWED UP WITH SEVERE AND PUNISHABLE CONSEQUENCES.
By the way; I wrote a poem entitled, Twenty Little Angels, which takes a look at the tragedy that you referred to in an entirely different light...a broader light. For in the end...who is really in charge of life and death? Only God. Thanks for sharing, Kay. Love, Blessings and Faith...Joyce * His Inspirations
Can anyone tell me which one is 'wrong'? (Poetry) - 1/12/2013 8:12:30 AM
I so feel this way too, why a gun? Why does anyone have to own a gun? Why!? I want peace in the world, no more guns.
Can anyone tell me which one is 'wrong'? (Poetry) - 1/12/2013 7:43:52 AM
Kay, you are right...sometimes these things make no sense, but you did write something that is a possible answer to this horrible mess, and that is to amend the constitution, and I would be in favor of doing something like that to keep guns out of the hands of those that want to wreak havoc on our children. It would be a mammoth undertaking, but I feel it's necessary.
Can anyone tell me which one is 'wrong'? (Poetry) - 1/12/2013 3:37:42 AM
very interesting perspective
A Refugee needs to be free. (Poetry) - 1/11/2013 7:39:45 PM
There should only be one "brotherhood"... ...that of Earth and all humans as one. Your words hit home, Kay. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 1/2/2013 5:40:30 AM
A discription well composed of an observation in passing
Happy New Year
Love & Peace be with you
LIFE'S MOUNTAIN. (Poetry) - 7/9/2012 4:27:47 AM
THOUGH BANSHEE HOWL AND WINDS DOTH BLOW, THOUGH THE STORMS RAGE AND WHISPER 'LET GO', THOUGH OUR FEET 'SLIDE' ON THE SLICKENED ROCK, AND OUR FINGERS NUMB AS OUR FAITH IS MOCKED...WE UPWARD PRESS AND IGNORE THE VILE CLOUT, FOR WE KNOW IF WE TRUST AND NEVER DOUBT...JESUS WILL SURELY BRING US OUT! HALLELUJAH! A SO FINE WORK...YES, IT CAN GET PRETTY ON LIFE MOUNTAIN. SOMETIMES EVEN THE MIDDLE ROAD GETS ROUGH. BUT WE CAN'T STOP, WE'VE GOT TO GO ON...AND SEE WHAT THE END WILL BE! THANKS, KAY...SO ENJOYED THIS INSPIRATIONAL WORK. CAN'T YOU TELL??!(SMILE). LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/17/2012 1:54:33 PM
A REMINDER OF THE KINDNESS WE SHOULD ALWAYS EXTEND TO THOSE SEEKING A REFUGE ON OUR 'FREE' SOILS. WE HARDLY KNOW WHAT THEY HAVE GONE THROUGH AND IT IS OUR DUTY TO LET THEM KNOW...THAT WE CARE. WE MAY NOT HAVE THE MONETARY MEANS BUT WE CERTAINLY HAVE THE ABILITY...THE OBLIGATION...TO GENUINELY RESPECT AND LOVE ALL MANKIND. WELL DONE, KAY AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/14/2012 7:05:54 AM
This is piercingly observant and written with great sensitivity.
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/11/2012 11:19:21 PM
Account of a soul in transportation away from perhaps political oppression, or religious persecution. For another human being, the author, to even wonder these things about this refugee shows such human compassion and tenderness for the cerebrally-shaken. This is a very mindful essay on the condition of society. This piece reminds me so much of the "blood diamond" wars in Angola where arms and legs are hacked off by militant leaders. Powerful and taps into the cultural pulse, Kay...be well.
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/11/2012 7:53:09 PM
Starkly sad and very real; your verses touch the soul, Kay. This "speaks" to me. Love and best wishes,
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/11/2012 2:40:11 PM
Oh my sad and intense, you have a 6th sense Kate...Heartfelt indeed, beautifully written~
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/11/2012 12:36:32 AM
"..for his eyes are distant
and they stare at space..."
i've seen those eyes, Kay, over and over
and no matter how often i see them my heart
is troubled..we just are not doing things right,
we're not..there are too many victims;
powerful and moving work and very real indeed
Prisoners escaping. (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 8:24:15 PM
Another fine write PM. We are our own prisons,
as we are too, our own salvation.
Outside life's green. (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 8:19:57 PM
Time came be a slow and painfully doctor, but is the healer of great wounds,
And with its greatest medicine named "acceptance" we are able to survive with only
but a scar left inside our hearts, and the wisdom of life inside our souls.
Great piece here PM. ;-)
love and peace forever
Freedom (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 8:07:42 PM
Ahhh, Hi PMD, I wrote my first poem only 6 years ago, and I am compelled to say;
"Freedom" conveys exactly the same message as what I had first written in "Who's in the mirror."
I gravitate to this type of thinking and look forward to reading more of your work.
Love and Peace forever
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 1:10:33 PM
This is very beautiful and touching. Sometimes it takes a generation for the healing to happen. Your country is indeed generous to allow refugees. Unfortunately, many refugees can never go back and have them make their sheltering country their home.
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 12:56:23 PM
First of all, excellent poem ... secondly, i wonder if the country that attmepts to save us all, will ease any of our minds?
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 7:55:12 AM
beautifully expressed. A great look through others eyes.
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 7:35:39 AM
Kay, We are on the train with him-you put us there...Great!
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 6:22:42 AM
You allow the reader to see into another human being's soul...beautifully penned, Kay!
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 6:09:56 AM
I have to agree as well with Fee, he said it all with right on clarity...as did you...e
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 3:39:34 AM
I agree with Felix, prejudicial or not.
Your poem was masterful.
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 2:53:15 AM
Wow! Great poetic expression! This is the cry for someone who is lost, hurt and blind to the beauty that is in this moment in time. If you watched the movie, "The Peaceful Warrior" it portrays the importance of being in the moment. It's not always easy to focus on when your mind is preoccupied with other stuff but it's worth a try.
The refugee on my train. (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 2:40:37 AM
You expressed yourself so well here Kay that yes I could see the mans emotions as if looking at him myself. It is also very real for when you think about it weren't our descendents all refuges at one point or another. The sad part is so many of the refuges and immigrants today refuse to embrace our society, morals, values and language and instead insist the majority transform or bend our own ways to accomadate theirs. Hope I don't sound prejudicial here but that is my observation. Great writing Kay.
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 4/30/2012 11:12:23 PM
ANSWERED PRAYER, IN ANY CAPACITY, IS 'ALWAYS' A REASON TO GIVE A JOYOUS 'ROAR'...TO THE FREEDOM IT HAS EXTENDED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Happy First Birthday (Poetry) - 4/30/2012 11:02:11 PM
THIS IS JUST PERFECT! SHOULD BE A CARD. SO LOVELY...ENJOYED AND THOUGH I AM AWFULLY, AWFULLY LATE HERE'S A 'BELATED' HAPPY 1ST B'DAY WISH FOR YOUR NICE ALONG WITH THE HOPE THAT IT WAS A WONDERFUL DAY. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 3/12/2012 10:44:40 AM
Lovely, absolutly lovely,
The thought of a little Lion cub giggling, what could be sweater?
From your Pommie Pal Steve
Happy First Birthday (Poetry) - 3/12/2012 10:37:34 AM
what a lovely poem, I hope she had a fantastic birthday too,Take care my aussie friend,
your Pommy Pal Steve
Happy First Birthday (Poetry) - 3/9/2012 11:58:56 AM
Enchanting birthday wishes for your niece,Kay! What a sweet name too....nicely done...wonderful lilt to your beautiful phrases!
Happy First Birthday (Poetry) - 3/9/2012 11:43:33 AM
Kay, How sweet---Beautifully written...
Happy First Birthday (Poetry) - 3/8/2012 5:59:02 PM
Thank you for sharing these sweet wishes for your little niece, Kay. Love and best wishes to you both,
Happy First Birthday (Poetry) - 3/8/2012 4:45:43 PM
A Very Happy First Birthday to Miss Miranda Grace...may the next hundred or so years treat her kindly...e
Happy First Birthday (Poetry) - 3/8/2012 4:35:05 PM
What a wonderful poem for your little Miranda Grace . . . Happy Birthday to her from me too . . .
Happy First Birthday (Poetry) - 3/8/2012 4:00:47 PM
Nice poem for Miranda Grace. She will definately treasure it as she gets older.
I don't want to,but...I must! (An oldie for poetry comp) (Poetry) - 2/8/2012 6:59:30 PM
AN EXCELLENT SHARING...ONE THAT NUDGES THE CONSCIENCE AND STIRS THE SPIRT. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
For you . (Poetry) - 2/8/2012 6:52:03 PM
SOFT AND TENDER...BEAUTIFULLY DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING, KAY. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
He... is out to GET...YOU! (Poetry) - 2/8/2012 6:48:04 PM
SOME GOOD ADVICE HERE...A WARNING TO BE AWARE, WHICH WE ALL NEED TO BE. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS TIMELY MESSAGE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 2/6/2012 8:02:24 PM
I like the giggles that wriggled out so quick.....this is great!! Morgan
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 2/3/2012 7:30:53 AM
A beautifully crafted heartwarming and endearing poem!
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 1/31/2012 7:10:19 AM
Kay, What a rejoicing for Leo!
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 1/26/2012 12:13:36 PM
A wonderful, well thought out poem that brought happiness to my heart and a smile to my face. A wonderful job!
Joy L. Hale
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 1/26/2012 9:43:56 AM
unique motif ... uplifting and wonderfully composed ...
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 1/26/2012 5:26:45 AM
Beautifully uplifting write, Kay...this poem has wings!
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 1/26/2012 3:39:56 AM
A marvelous poem, Kay. And you reminded me of a starving, forgotten, heavily chained dog that I rescued. He became such a joyous carefree creature, after he was freed.
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 1/26/2012 2:03:37 AM
Loosening boundaries, freeing up wonderful possibilities and being able to take flight is magical and enduring.
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 1/25/2012 11:53:22 PM
Kay, this is magnificent uplifting poetry!Thank you for sharing ,I know it made me feel wonderful!
Freedom for the little lion cub 'Leo.' (Poetry) - 1/25/2012 10:08:44 PM
Thank you for sharing this uplifting and compelling offering, Kay. "The 'wonderment' of feeling free - a gif. I am a Leo by the way. ☻ Love and best wishes,
Wedding anniversary. (Poetry) - 1/24/2012 11:50:30 PM
AH...ETERNALLY YOKED! YES! THAT'S A WEDDING ANNIVERSARY THAT I AM EAGERLY LOOKING FORWARD TO CELEBRATING. THIS IS ONE BEAUTIFUL OFFERING! AND AS FAR AS THE GRAMMAR IS CONCERNED I CAN'T HELP BECAUSE...I DON'T DO GRAMMAR, I JUST LET IT FLOW AND DO POETRY. THANKS FOR SHARING, KAY...LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
For My Daughter. (Poetry) - 1/24/2012 11:29:55 PM
THOUGH ALL OUR BLUNDERINGS...ALL OUR MISFITED EFFORTS OF 'REARING'...IT IS EVIDENT, THROUGH OUR OFFSPRING'S ABILITIES TO NAVIGATE THIS CRAZY WORLD, THAT WE MUST HAVE DONE 'SOMETHING' RIGHT! THANK GOD!!! A WONDERFUL SHARING, SO ENJOYED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/24/2012 11:18:35 PM
NOTHING LIKE A TOAD'S VENGENCE!(SMILE) WELL DONE AND ENJOYED, KAY...THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/16/2012 6:29:30 AM
Humorous, yet serious at the same time. Enjoyed this ~!
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/15/2012 3:43:11 AM
this is great ~ Morgan
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/14/2012 10:43:31 AM
A humorous look at a serious situation. This "mistake" has been done all over the world. Witness the starling here in North America for one. There are many other examples. Thank you for sharing this meaningful, apt, and timely write, Kay. Love and best wishes,
A bit of prose from shadows past. (Poetry) - 1/14/2012 8:21:14 AM
A FANTASTIC ARTISTICAL OFFERING THAT IS FULL OF THE EMOTIONAL 'TWIST' WHICH MUST COME FORTH WHEN ONE PENS SUCH A WORK. ENJOYED, MUCH AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/14/2012 8:13:26 AM
Wow, I love this Kay!!! xo
For an old soldier (Poetry) - 1/14/2012 7:35:00 AM
SPLENDID! YES...WE LIVE THE HARDSHIPS OF TODAY...FOR THE SMILES OF TOMORROW AND IF WE ARE SO BLESSED BY THE GOOD LORD, WE GET TO SEE SOME OF THEM. A WORK THAT TOOK ME TO 'OTHER' BATTLEFIELDS. A REMARKABLE WORK ABOUT...'SOLDIERS'. SO WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANK YOU AND GOD BLESS. LOVE & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
HE CAN SEE. (Poetry) - 1/14/2012 7:20:14 AM
THIS WONDERFUL KNOWLEDGE IS WHAT GIVES US THE ABILITY TO GO ON. THE WORD OF GOD SAYS, '...I WILL KEEP HIM IN PERFECT PEACE, HE WHO KEEPS HIS MIND STAYED ON ME...' SO, NO MATTER 'WHAT'S GOING ON'... YAHWEH...HE 'CAN' SEE AND...IS IN TOTAL CHARGE OF IT ALL! THIS IS A KEEPER KAY...AN AWESOME WORK OF FAITH...THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
I see rain in your eyes. (Poetry) - 1/14/2012 7:08:30 AM
A FINE INSPIRING METAPHORIC WORK THAT SEEPS WITH THE DESIRE TO HELP AND CARE AND WANT 'HEALING' FOR OTHERS. POETS ARE SUCH SPECIAL PEOPLE... PASSING ON THE 'MEDICINE' THAT HEALED THEM, THEY REACH OUT...
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WORK, KAY...I LOVED IT! LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/13/2012 5:49:01 AM
Entertaining and dramatic eloquence about these fascinating unpalatable little creatures!
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/13/2012 5:21:07 AM
Awesome story, Kay!...your lyrical tale is hilarious and scary at the same time! Well penned!!!
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/13/2012 3:35:33 AM
perfect, very very funny, well that'll teach you to kidnap poor unsuspecting toads won't it..lol
I really loved this one Kay
from You'r Pommie Pal Steve
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/13/2012 3:24:48 AM
Wow! I've always liked Toads.
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/13/2012 3:08:19 AM
Perhaps he'll be kinder now that you wrote about him... or not.
There's a great rhythm to this that carries the reader ever onward and brings them right to your bed to witness the terror.
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/12/2012 1:12:05 PM
A super fun tale of a toad along that road!
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/12/2012 9:43:55 AM
Kay, A delightful tale!
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/12/2012 8:27:56 AM
The rhyme and lyrical lift of this poem makes your clever words delightful to read. I enjoyed this, Kay and it put a smile on my face. Good job!
The kidnapped Toad (Poetry) - 1/11/2012 10:37:38 PM
great rhyme and rhythm to this intriguing tale ...
I can't believe it USA! (Poetry) - 1/11/2012 4:28:12 PM
I've always has the greatest of respect for the US Postal Service. I still do. They are suffering greatly due to the lack of funds provided by first class postage which now is courriered by the internet. People moan about the USPS but when it is privatized look out! I think if they raised the rate on junk mail they'd solve two problem, get rid of a bunch of it, and gain some revenue. Patrick
I can't believe it USA! (Poetry) - 1/11/2012 9:08:07 AM
Kay, It seems that we are losing a little of America
each day...Thanks for your caring poem!
I can't believe it USA! (Poetry) - 1/10/2012 3:18:33 PM
Wonderful poem, Kay, emotionally, intellectually, and I agree heartily!!
I can't believe it USA! (Poetry) - 1/9/2012 8:11:35 PM
Nice work Kay! If you ever went to Japan or some places in Europe the small shops are everywhere. It makes life fun and interesting. Somehow they manage to have big stores without destroying the small shops. Somehow it works because the goverment stays out of their business. If you don't tax the small guys out of business they can still be competitive. Amen!
I can't believe it USA! (Poetry) - 1/9/2012 3:54:50 PM
OUR GOVERNMENT RUNS OUR POST OFFICE. OUR GOVERNMENT CAN'T RUN ANYTHING RIGHT. OUR GOVERNMENT WASTE SO MUCH MONEY IT IS A CRIME.
IF IT WASN'T FOR OUR TAXES THE US GOVERNMENT COULD NOT BE THE CROOKS THAT THEY ARE.
SO, ANYTHING OUR GOVERNMENT HAS IT'S HANDS ON WINDS UP BANKRUPT.
SMoooooooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOCH! LOVE YA KAY.
I can't believe it USA! (Poetry) - 1/9/2012 10:56:02 AM
I recently saw the old movie, the postman, and it seemed rather strange. My brother's fiancé is a post mistress and recently changed her status to “carrier” so that she will not be cut.
Based on my sister and others in this country who want government out of our business, the post office is part of the creeping socialism taking over the country–isn't that strange?
Thanks for feeling bad about our country. We'll muddle through just fine, just like the old UK.
I can't believe it USA! (Poetry) - 1/9/2012 9:08:38 AM
unfortunately Kay, the small post offices are a thing of the past ... believe me, i know ... the landscape of our country is rapidly shifting and mot all for the better ...
soulfully penned ... nice work!
I can't believe it USA! (Poetry) - 1/9/2012 6:38:42 AM
I totally agree, Kay! I'm much more into the small shops than the malls....the personal touch is wonderful....as for the postal service...I LOVE getting mail! Especially hand written letters.
I can't believe it USA! (Poetry) - 1/9/2012 2:26:20 AM
Oh, this is but one chink in the downgrading of America, Kay. I have lived long enough to know that this America of today isn't a pimple on what she used to be. What is most tragic if the blase way the American public is handling the drastic change. I blame the indoctrination of the school system that we are, first and foremost a bad country. It all stems from there.
May I touch you?(Yes...YOU!) (Poetry) - 1/9/2012 1:05:16 AM
What a fantastic poem Kay, I truly loved this piece, you know once in a while I think all poets come across a poem that someone else has written and thinks Wow I wish that I had written that, well I can tell you that this is such a poem for me, brilliantly written, absolutly brilliant.
From your Pommie Pal Steve
I can't believe it USA! (Poetry) - 1/9/2012 1:00:11 AM
Hear..Hear.. I totally agree, and you're right about the pony express riders too, ok they didn't exist for more than a few months before the telegraph wire made them obsolete, but while they were delivering the mail they were truly a force to be reckoned with,
lovely poem Kay
from your Pommie Pal Steve
I can't believe it USA! (Poetry) - 1/9/2012 12:28:58 AM
Great idea, Kay, but I have seen some, even in my area, that are so small as to make them look like they NEVER get any business...one person could run the whole office...then again they are taking away some of the big ones too, it makes no sense to me either...ed
May I touch you?(Yes...YOU!) (Poetry) - 1/7/2012 6:41:21 PM
A LOVELY TOUCH...RARE. THANKS FOR SHARING, KAY AND BLESSINGS. LOVE AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
May I touch you?(Yes...YOU!) (Poetry) - 1/2/2012 5:24:50 PM
A lovely poem, Kay. It reads so well like a song. Thanks for reading my poem.
May I touch you?(Yes...YOU!) (Poetry) - 1/1/2012 8:55:37 AM
Very beautiful wtire Kay! Really It touched my soul.May God bless you!
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 12/30/2011 10:53:53 PM
They are an amazing source of negative energy best left unplugged. Patrick
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 12/30/2011 2:30:49 PM
This is fine and wise advice, Kay. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
A crush on his poetry-forever. (Poetry) - 12/8/2011 12:19:43 PM
Beautiful words, Kay. I love the fact that the words of this writer comfort your mind; he must be special indeed.
Joy L. Hale
May I touch you?(Yes...YOU!) (Poetry) - 12/7/2011 6:37:16 AM
Indeed, a poem which is very nice, very easy to read, very irregular in style of writing, very well done, Kay. God bless you!
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 12/2/2011 2:22:54 PM
Powerfully true. The likes can make one blind to new opportunities.
Wisdom abounds in this penn.
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 11/24/2011 7:42:59 AM
It's good to be back reading you again. Yup, those grudges are some son of a bitches and hard to hold onto. Nicely phrased.
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 11/18/2011 10:29:42 AM
I agree 100% with your pithy writing of great wisdom. We must be ever vigilant to wipe all grudges from our minds and hearts lest they take root and cause destruction to our spirit. Powerful words of insight!
Joy L. Hale
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 11/9/2011 12:50:17 PM
YOU COULDN'T HAVE SAID IT ANY BETTER KAY.
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 11/9/2011 9:59:49 AM
Beautiful awareness Kay ~ I feel the same, I would much rather live in a state of awe and gratitude.
Too slow. (Poetry) - 11/9/2011 6:40:12 AM
I like the way you think! A down-to-earth poem about preferring the slow pace of life instead of the crazy fast lane most people live in. I agree wholeheartedly! The lyrical flow of your poem lulls one into accepting the slowness of the tortoise as opposed to the rapid beat of the hare.
Joy L. Hale
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 11/8/2011 5:18:58 AM
Used to hold grudges when much younger, till I found how much it hurt me rather than the person I held the grudge for...good point this...e
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 11/8/2011 5:08:39 AM
And I couldn't agree more, Kay! For years I held an awful grudge against my ex...until I finally realized he was one of my greatest teachers....I learned more about myself from him than I realized in my youth.....Well done!
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 11/8/2011 4:13:49 AM
Although it is often human nature to want to get even or get revenge, you are so right, in the long run itusually only ends up hurting us more.
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 11/8/2011 3:19:38 AM
A noble and positive perspective, Kay,
big thinking, right thinking.
Grudges are for losers. (Poetry) - 11/7/2011 10:05:10 PM
grudges are poison ... our bodies and souls are the containers corroded by them ... it is best to drain such poison from our beings, so our souls can be nourished by the very forgiveness we offer ...
powerful substance to this poem ...
A N Z A C (Poetry) - 10/27/2011 5:57:35 AM
EXCELLENT! ALL POETICAL ASPECTS OF THIS WORK FLOW TOGETHER IN A SMOOTH HEALING 'BALM', WHICH NURTURES THE 'PAINS' OF AN ALLY. VERY SATISFYING POETRY AND ENJOYABLE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
A N Z A C (Poetry) - 10/26/2011 11:40:05 AM
What a powerful and passionate write, Kay!
GOD Bless You.
Love & Hugs, Rhonda
What's the matter,world? (Poetry) - 10/25/2011 10:46:08 PM
Interesting and thought provoking poem.
Happy 20TH Alexandra (photo at 4 years!) (Poetry) - 10/21/2011 5:26:53 PM
a beautiful poem of love and admiration for a lovely daughter ....
Happy 20TH Alexandra (photo at 4 years!) (Poetry) - 10/21/2011 7:33:51 AM
Beautiful poem Kay, I really enjoyed it, there is however one part in it that I know for sure is a mistake and that part is....
she forgets me not,
I was... and am…
so well worth forgetting.
You are far too warm and kind a person to forget.
Your Pommie Pal Steve.
Happy 20TH Alexandra (photo at 4 years!) (Poetry) - 10/20/2011 12:56:32 PM
A beautiful write and tribute to your wonderful daughter
Love & Peace to both of you.....Happy Birthday Princess
Happy 20TH Alexandra (photo at 4 years!) (Poetry) - 10/19/2011 12:09:43 PM
Alexandra may now be 20 and fully-fledged, but, after reading this, she's also a worthy testament to the beauty and shaping nurture of her mother as well as to her own intrinsic light. From this we can see that you are both indeed paragons among women. A joy to share and behold, thank you, Kay! xx
Happy 20TH Alexandra (photo at 4 years!) (Poetry) - 10/19/2011 9:54:54 AM
What lovely tribute and gift, Kay; thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,
Happy 20TH Alexandra (photo at 4 years!) (Poetry) - 10/18/2011 7:25:36 AM
What a wonderful birthday poem!
Happy 20TH Alexandra (photo at 4 years!) (Poetry) - 10/18/2011 6:07:21 AM
How beautiful! The mother-daughter bond can be so deep and wonderful.
When I think about the love of my children and grandchildren, it amazes me. I find it hard to understand what makes THEM love ME so much. Some of your lines close to the end echo that feeling.
But God has "invented" this marvelous bond, and like you, I can only revel in it!
Happy 20TH Alexandra (photo at 4 years!) (Poetry) - 10/18/2011 5:14:54 AM
Your love for her absolutely shines, Kay!!! I think motherhood is the best thing I've ever done too....nothing could possibly compare! Loved this!
Happy 20TH Alexandra (photo at 4 years!) (Poetry) - 10/18/2011 3:01:06 AM
I can't put it any better than this - simply beautiful.
Happy 20TH Alexandra (photo at 4 years!) (Poetry) - 10/18/2011 2:59:57 AM
Truly marvelous sentiments from mother to daughter, Kay.
A Refugee needs to be free. (Poetry) - 10/14/2011 5:55:36 AM
I join you in wishing for that, too, Kay,
for equality, but i feel it's impossible
in the systems we promote and hold onto
and haven't the will or courage to change.
A Refugee needs to be free. (Poetry) - 10/14/2011 4:50:42 AM
Love the message here, Kay....freedom belongs to ALL of us! If I lived in a country where oppression reigned...I would be a refugee too....and if I was drowning on the shores of freedom and reached up for a helping hand...I'd pray for a kind soul to lift me up!
A Refugee needs to be free. (Poetry) - 10/14/2011 2:38:04 AM
'All this world
is ALL our home.'
'For brown and black and white
all free to see the stars at night.'
Surely how it was supposed to be,
But so many with hatred and bigotry.
A Refugee needs to be free. (Poetry) - 10/14/2011 12:49:18 AM
I think that the true meaning of Christianity (although I am not a Religious person) becomes lost when it comes to such things or perhaps peoples souls and hearts tend to look away. On the same token the policies of allowing other cultures freedoms dominate our own values and cultures may also play a factor.
A bit of prose from shadows past. (Poetry) - 10/13/2011 8:51:58 PM
Since you reviewed my poem I thought I would reciprocate. I was truly impressed by the content and the selection of words in this poem. It was so much more than truth, beauty and the American way that most poets gravitate to. It could really feel what you said. The words kept my attention all the way through to the surprise ending. The reawakening of a lost soul. A wonderfully crafted piece of work!
A bit of prose from shadows past. (Poetry) - 10/13/2011 7:57:10 AM
Thank you for sharing this most meaningful write the sentiments within which we can all relate, Kay. Love and best wishes,
A bit of prose from shadows past. (Poetry) - 10/13/2011 5:07:14 AM
This is a stirring write Kay. I felt the same sentiments in Sptember when I wrote Getting Me Back.
A bit of prose from shadows past. (Poetry) - 10/9/2011 7:55:37 AM
a very interesting and well written introspective piece that reaches into personal sadness and spiritual stimulation ...
A bit of prose from shadows past. (Poetry) - 10/6/2011 10:00:49 AM
I can relate to this one for it is all too easy when we are striving to just keep our heads above water to tie in all the negativity of our past and lose sight of what once made us smile in our hearts...but still if we seek we shall find. Glad you found you Kay.
A bit of prose from shadows past. (Poetry) - 10/6/2011 7:23:39 AM
This is brilliant Kay, very sad in places but exceptionally well written. and I have to say that it would be a terrible shame for anyone to lose some-one as warm and kindhearted as you.
From your Pommie Pal Steve
A bit of prose from shadows past. (Poetry) - 10/6/2011 4:10:03 AM
I think you have captured how more than a few of us feel, Kay.Many powerful truths in your prose...it took me a lifetime to finally see myself in that crystal lake of peace...loved this!
A bit of prose from shadows past. (Poetry) - 10/6/2011 1:26:23 AM
i'm happy, Kay, you posted this under
Mainstream because it certainly is a work
this reader, for one at least, can wholeheartedly
identify with, it speaks to me in the clearest,
most personal way..and it challenges and it hurts
a little...as it should.
For an old soldier (Poetry) - 8/5/2011 9:14:03 PM
Wow. So well-written. I love it. Up there with the best of war poets-Owen, Sassoon, Kipling, Graves, etc.
For an old soldier (Poetry) - 8/4/2011 9:18:14 PM
very moving and well written tribute ...
Hacked (Poetry) - 8/2/2011 5:13:37 AM
There are far too many nasties on the internet....these people are such a waste of air! Hope you get this straightened out Kay!
For an old soldier (Poetry) - 8/2/2011 3:53:35 AM
Beautiful tribute, Kay!!! Truly heartfelt....
Grenade heart (Poetry) - 8/1/2011 10:33:57 AM
Wow this is so pwerfull, I hope sincerley that it is fiction Kay,
it is so brilliantly written ands so very powerful,
your Pommie Pal
Hacked (Poetry) - 8/1/2011 10:29:53 AM
This is terrible Kay,
I hope everything works out with finding whoevery did it.
For an old soldier (Poetry) - 8/1/2011 10:26:10 AM
Kay this is perfect, and without doubt one the best you have wriiten,
I really loved this one, so full of sadness and compassion, you can almost see the tears in this old fellows eye,
YOUR number one fan,
and Pommie Pal Steve
For an old soldier (Poetry) - 8/1/2011 9:34:08 AM
So much thought and heart in this poem. I was entranced with it as it progressed. It is so real and down-to-earth, and the ending is spectacular!
For an old soldier (Poetry) - 7/31/2011 7:23:38 PM
They went, they fought, they didn't question,
they were brave and true...and some came home alive...some.
This is fine tribute, Kay, fine indeed.
ps: hacking is always horrible,
you have my support and sympathy
For an old soldier (Poetry) - 7/31/2011 6:42:13 PM
Excellently thought out, Kay...a very well done tribute to all soldiers everywhere...Ed (sorry to read about your hacking as well)
For an old soldier (Poetry) - 7/31/2011 4:22:16 PM
It is so very sad that man has learned nothing from all of this. A meaningful and touching write, Kay. Love and best wishes to you,
For an old soldier (Poetry) - 7/31/2011 1:32:59 PM
As a son of one of those brave soldiers who fought in WWII and also the author of a book of his life and my mother's during that war...this write hit home and with a deep regret that he died before I truly understood the sacrifice that he and so many like him made. Great job here Kay...
Hacked (Poetry) - 7/31/2011 8:37:29 AM
I am sorry to hear that, Kay. I wish I could help. I hope you get the situation resolved promptly. Love and best wishes,
Hacked (Poetry) - 7/31/2011 4:15:41 AM
So sorry to hear this; hope the hacker will be stopped.
Hacked (Poetry) - 7/31/2011 2:36:08 AM
It really does feel like we have been violated this way or by a virus that comes to us under a friends name...and we know they had no way of knowing...
Freedom (Poetry) - 7/3/2011 9:27:02 PM
Grenade heart (Poetry) - 7/3/2011 9:26:21 PM
Deeply touching poem. Good work, Kay
Freedom (Poetry) - 5/26/2011 12:06:55 PM
So glad you found that key! I just found my key too. Excellent write Kay! Take care,:)
Grenade heart (Poetry) - 5/26/2011 12:04:25 PM
Wow! I can so relate to this analogy. I really like the last four lines...Excellent! Take care, and god bless you! Chessly