The Kingdom of Malinas (Book) - 3/4/2009 12:21:59 PM
Congratulations, Emma! Continued success to you with love and peace,
Regis
Crawl (Short Story) - 3/6/2009 11:40:19 AM
A most effective horror (thankfully fiction) short story, Emma. Gave me chills. Love and peace and best wishes,
Regis
Stark (Short Story) - 3/6/2009 11:37:29 AM
This opens the door to a host of possibilities and leaves the reader wanting more. Very nicely done, Emma. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Terror (Short Story) - 3/4/2009 12:25:19 PM
Thoroughly mesmerizing, Emma; very effective. This gives me chills. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Terror (Short Story) - 8/14/2008 7:19:39 AM
Ooooooooh! A frightfully good piece! I felt the terror! Great job!
Terror (Short Story) - 7/7/2008 10:38:57 AM
This piece definitely succeeded in giving me the chills. :)
Miss You (Poetry) - 3/1/2009 3:05:36 AM
Nice!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Spider Paranoia (Poetry) - 3/1/2009 1:49:53 AM
A well written poem.I hope I can read more of your poetry in the future.take care
Edwin
Waiting for Fate (Poetry) - 3/1/2009 1:47:13 AM
Great poem,take care
Edwin
Miss You (Poetry) - 3/1/2009 1:45:46 AM
Short but powerful in its words,take care
Edwin
Spider Paranoia (Poetry) - 2/28/2009 11:00:53 AM
Chillingly symbolic; I find this to have meaning on more than one level. Effective verses with rhyme and rhythm. Well done, E. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Waiting for Fate (Poetry) - 2/28/2009 10:59:38 AM
You have given me pause for reflection via your verses, E. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Miss You (Poetry) - 2/28/2009 10:58:41 AM
Short but impactful in what is expressed. Somehow, it makes me sad. Poetry is supposed to "move" the reader in some way; at least, in my humble opinion. Nicely done, E. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Waiting for Fate (Poetry) - 11/6/2008 5:54:41 PM
Words of truth and serenity but mankind makes his/her own fate, why wait, go out and be creative...
Be always safe,
Karen
Waiting for Fate (Poetry) - 11/6/2008 3:46:29 PM
It will come in time...enjoyed..take care OK..HUgsssss
Spider Paranoia (Poetry) - 8/14/2008 8:18:42 AM
I had for a few years a light-brown furry tarantula named Virginia that kept my den free of flies, mosquitoes, wasp and a few people that I didn't want to see very often.
To clear a room I will put her on my shoulder and you won't believe how fast people can be without telling them to scram!
Georg
Spider Paranoia (Poetry) - 8/14/2008 7:16:39 AM
Well done, EJ! I love story poems and yours is delightful. I, too, am scared of spiders! Thanks for sharing, and welcome to the Den!
Spider Paranoia (Poetry) - 8/14/2008 5:18:41 AM
an outstanding write E J
Lord I hate spiders too
I once told my grandma of a continuing mightmare
She said "next time it occurs
Just remember this" say a prayer
while its occuring.
it was like magic
the dream came to haunt me, one more time
This time
I was prepared
I remembered and said a prayer
the dream disintegrated, waking me
I was feeling free
from what was incarcerated within my mind
to this date, that dream never occured
nor any other nightmare ever since
my short paryer was like the sword of Michael The Archangel
I used it every time Bad dreams
tried to invade my serene nights
Peace be with you
William
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