Recent Reviews for June Thompson
Less Than Perfect (Poetry) - 12/5/2013 7:53:23 PM|
This is an amazing and honest prayer from a searching soul and so very honest and beautiful. He must and will answer you.
Winter Time Blues (Poetry) - 4/18/2012 4:49:27 PM
Winter Time Blues (Poetry) - 5/6/2010 9:28:50 AM
Sincere Longing (Poetry) - 6/6/2006 1:47:30 PM
Love is the strongest emotion known and it will raise you to heights never known before as your heart races with eager anticipation.
Amazing (Poetry) - 5/16/2006 2:58:43 PM
This is special and it shows a whole new side of you that doesn't often surface so I hope it is reality based. You have managed regardless to capture what love is really like. Excellant work and good to see you back.
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 5/1/2006 6:00:33 PM
Nice look at inner strength. I love the flow of the words. Peaceful yet with a bite. Good work!
Untitled (Poetry) - 5/1/2006 8:39:13 AM
You are leading yourself where you should be..
Hop Scotch (Poetry) - 5/1/2006 8:36:55 AM
Seems like everyone wants a little piece of us. they sometimes take more than they deserve I try to hold on to as much as I can it is hard but it helps me stay whole seems like everone has a motive of some sort or another protect yourself
Black Vein (Poetry) - 5/1/2006 8:05:45 AM
the title fits very well great write
Teeter-Totter (Poetry) - 4/30/2006 7:22:33 PM
I really do believe that I understand where you're coming from in these verses, June. To me, that's awesome poetry; to connect with the reader on the level that you intended. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Black Vein (Poetry) - 4/30/2006 7:21:03 PM
Powerfully emotive and meaningful; and I can relate to much of what your verses express, June. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 4/30/2006 7:15:14 PM
"Though I've come undone
I remain me"
The way I see it, June; the key is in these verses. Love, peace, and strength to you,
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 8:15:57 PM
Another good write being let out slowly with the grace of your host. Wll done.
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 7:55:40 PM
Pure delight in this poem and I long to be one of the ones who seek you out to offer you the love and care you so desire. Wonderful look at your needs here. I love it.
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 6:19:29 PM
~~June~~wonderful poem~~a prayer~~
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 6:17:23 PM
i do not know how i missed your writings before,but you can bet i wont anymore...you are awe-ing me!!!
Back Then (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 6:15:40 PM
do i know you? we must know each other from some where? another good write,machined gunned out,raw with power!!!
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 6:13:44 PM
i do...so good of a write!!!it makes me wish i had wrote it...but you did and i got to read my thoughts thru you,very good!!
About Grief (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 4:40:46 PM
Thoughtful poem about a universal human hurt. s/henry
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/28/2006 3:14:09 PM
Sweet write and says a lot about knowing exactly who and where you are in your life and though struggling says also that you will make it with or without love.
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/27/2006 10:17:18 PM
I cannot comment cause I cannot let my virgin eyes read of the title alone...;) Ed
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/27/2006 8:26:28 PM
WOWZA you certainly told them Excellent felt the same way quite a few times myself
Tired (Poetry) - 4/27/2006 12:18:58 PM
Tiredness seeps through this poem and leaves the reader saying, "Yeah, me too." I like the way this is set-up, too.
Tired (Poetry) - 4/27/2006 11:06:34 AM
Weariness of the mind and soul can be more tiring then any physical exercise or labour we may take on. It is stress causing and usually tends the person to end up in a hospital with either mental health problems or a heart attack or stroke. You captured will the weariness of the different emotions in this your statement of what you are feeling and need and want.
Tired (Poetry) - 4/27/2006 8:07:38 AM
i can totally relate
STAT (Poetry) - 4/26/2006 9:48:58 PM
Another in the "Amy" style that tells it like it is inside your head and heart and pulls no punches. You know you better then anyone else and that is how it should be.
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/26/2006 12:09:28 PM
Angels wings and birds wings have one thing in common when broken they can be healed by the tender touch of the right love. Keep looking.
Back Then (Poetry) - 4/26/2006 12:07:11 PM
Very open write about your feelings and the anger you know doubt hold for the subject of this write. The good thing is you are the better person to survive and be able to write about it as past tense.
Oh Yes (Poetry) - 4/20/2006 12:04:35 PM
Love it !!!It's good to hear you have great times too we love your poems.
Oh Yes (Poetry) - 4/19/2006 5:35:04 PM
Strong lines. Enjoyed
Oh Yes (Poetry) - 4/18/2006 5:49:03 PM
I love the fact that you keep turning out the work with such a strong sense of what you believe in. You know what you want to say it is just that someone doesn't want to listen.
About The Lie (Poetry) - 4/18/2006 8:26:49 AM
Also it makes you the person who Demands that you know that a person Loves you for who you are .. Lies are there in all of us and we are as sick as the lies that we keep. Truth sets you free even if it hurts.. Trust It has changed you but beating yourself because of it IS WRONG , It wasn't your fault and sometimes telling the truth is very hard or even impossible.. I am Sorry you have to deal with all of the things that have come because of it all.
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/18/2006 8:18:38 AM
Some have no awareness of the hurt they leave, and still do , they are not capable to see, it's evident in the way that they treat their own flesh and blood .. I could see you did Love him so and he was so undeserving.. of YOU>>
Needing You (Poetry) - 4/18/2006 8:04:11 AM
I too say things and then wish I hadn't or maybe not as harsh but I am only human and have feelings on my sleeve .. I tend to be easily hurt because I let the things that people say get in me instead of letting them glance off the way they were meant to .. I try to take nothing too personal..
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 12:06:14 PM
It can hurt when relationships end! Thanks for the sharing.
Less Than Perfect (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 9:36:54 AM
For me all the pain I have been thru is worth it too because it makes me the person I am today, weird or not I too would never change a thing. Who else would I be? You are alright , better than most is what i see.. Keep the faith and the answers will be there (IF YOU ARE MEANT TO HAVE THEM)
Teeter-Totter (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 9:27:58 AM
Always listen to your GUT it tells us where and when to be cautious and with whom to trust or not you are wise an true just listen to what is inside of you..
Rhymes (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 9:25:17 AM
I love it.. You have such a way with words.. So much Truth in the riddles????!!!!! Love Ya
Show Me The Way (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 9:13:01 AM
Sweet poem you have already ARRIVED. There is no other journey you live and let live and do the best we can at any given moment.. LOVE YA BUNCHES
Jelly Spoon (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 8:20:24 AM
In the darkness of thought, sometimes we tend to find the reality we find so hard to easily spout when we are in conversation. This seems like you have managed to take those thoughts from the darkness behind the painted smile and put them down on paper. Well done.
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 8:17:18 AM
Short and snappy but not too crappy, this one is so true though seriously, it makes things pretty clear to the reader.
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 6:12:34 AM
powerful emotional write very well done
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 2:37:02 AM
The words pour from your heart and soul as you write these and often it is hard for the reader to not think they are directed to them persionally.Such is the powerful emotions that you capture in your work and share with your readers.
Rhymes (Poetry) - 4/16/2006 2:16:29 PM
As you quote the nursery rhymes in this write there is one more you should think of Humpty dumpty, we must be careful not to sit too far on that wall for if we fall...
Teeter-Totter (Poetry) - 4/15/2006 8:51:37 PM
We all wish we cold be many things.
Unfortunately it is impossible,
so I'll just be me,
and be happy.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Teeter-Totter (Poetry) - 4/15/2006 7:11:26 PM
Deeply moving, a cyberhug going out to you to let you know people care.
Less Than Perfect (Poetry) - 4/15/2006 6:03:32 PM
I've often wondered about all this. I was angry as hell once about life. I realised though after all the hell I did go through it was a hidden gift that made me deeply love and be compassionate towards all life. My pain was my crown that reflected compassion through incredible suffering at the hands of a crazy wacko, cruel abusive father. I would not let it destroy me..Look up above and see that you have survived and your ashes you endured are now traded for beauty. Our suffering in the end is our strengths.. I think your a soul who's deeply, deeply searching. We can ask questions all our life. Just know one thing, your beautiful in the eyes of the spirit and your pain is your crown to help heal others...
(((Love And Light, JoAnne ))))
Show Me The Way (Poetry) - 4/14/2006 12:45:07 PM
You know the way, you have the heart, you have the soul, you have friends, you have love...use it and move down that path with head held high and a song on you lips.
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/14/2006 9:58:11 AM
Lori's advice below is very good, listen to it implicitly !
Show Me The Way (Poetry) - 4/14/2006 9:55:49 AM
You are on your own way !
Keep your head above the battle of life, and you will succeed in all your endeavours !
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/14/2006 9:28:11 AM
Very well structured from beginning to end, this one says a lot about the writers pain and self consciousness. June you are doing better all the time.
Just Don't (Poetry) - 4/14/2006 8:54:09 AM
Your boundries are strong , you know healthy people and sick ones they tend to draw us down and we become sick too . You are stronger than u know!!!!
Fountains Of Youth (Poetry) - 4/14/2006 8:51:04 AM
We care so deeply and you say it so well .. LOVE TO READ U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/14/2006 8:05:52 AM
I am sure you do feel this way no one should even question your thoughts or anything about you . You are a survivor and will allways be so.. You are strong and beautiful. Great as you ARE in just being so no matter what people say don't beileve. My Motto: I try to take nothing personal .. What they say has nothing to do with me and everything to do with them.
Fountains Of Youth (Poetry) - 4/13/2006 4:43:51 PM
Memories are made of this...:)
Hold on to those glorious dreams !
Just Don't (Poetry) - 4/13/2006 3:23:11 PM
This is a sad write but an honest one, it seems like you really want to try but are afraid to take the chance again.
Fountains Of Youth (Poetry) - 4/13/2006 3:15:02 PM
Sweet and soulful look back as you look into your heart.