Recent Reviews for D. L. Vaineo
Shooting From the Hip (Short Story) - 1/11/2011 3:40:25 PM|
I have to agree with Fee, and think of all the individuals with different personality disorder's whom went miss diagnosed. Be thankful, you have the answers now. Also, I enjoyed the write. Best wishes to you...
Shooting From the Hip (Short Story) - 1/20/2010 5:00:39 AM
Sadly all too many people were written off, kicked out of families, locked away or worst because so little was known about mental illness. Glad you survived.
Recommend: The Courage to Heal (Article) - 6/10/2010 6:13:03 PM
Thank you for sharing this important information. Love and peace to you,
Recommend: The Courage to Heal (Article) - 1/22/2010 10:17:48 AM
Sounds as you suggest like a book we all should read and learn from.
Winter's Footsteps (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 6:54:21 PM
Each season feeds off the other. How practical.
My Temple (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 5:58:04 PM
Always entrust that key to the person who will unlock the door to your sacred place wigh the utmost of love and care!
Peace and love
My Temple (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 10:13:09 AM
You've set your standards high… May they be fulfilled.
My Temple (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 9:45:57 AM
I know what yo mean. So many come as wolves in sheep's disguise. Guard you temple as you are doing and you will let the right one enter.
My Temple (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 9:43:03 AM
... Glad your temple is under construction, Deborah; I wouldn't trust or touch THAT one with a barge pole! :) I like the voicing in this piece and the short-lined couplets; impresses the reader with just how seriously entering in this contract/building should be taken. You create a sense of hallowed-halls here. xx
My Temple (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 5:14:57 AM
It can't be said more plainly that this, Deborah, and I hope and trust you will find that very special one to hand the key to.
Winter's Footsteps (Poetry) - 12/16/2013 5:59:43 PM
its wearing that coat of white right now
Winter's Footsteps (Poetry) - 12/16/2013 3:45:51 PM
I like tracks in the snow.
I'm always wondering who passed by.
Winter's Footsteps (Poetry) - 12/16/2013 2:42:52 PM
Winter. There is a reason for the phrase "dead of winter." Nice piece of writing, but don't really enjoy the season.
Winter's Footsteps (Poetry) - 12/16/2013 1:03:08 PM
Down here in the swamp it is mostly green, but turning cold, at least cold for us. Supposed to get down close to the thirties tonight. I loved this short, but poignant poem.
Christmas is a Time... (Poetry) - 12/13/2013 8:55:04 AM
Merry Christmas to you, Deborah.
Christmas is a Time... (Poetry) - 12/13/2013 8:06:19 AM
Right back at ya, Deborah!!!
Christmas is a Time... (Poetry) - 12/13/2013 7:08:09 AM
Most wars are the children of poverty and greed, and those two seem to be thriving, unfortunately :(
Thank you for your wishes, and Merry Xmas to you!
Christmas is a Time... (Poetry) - 12/13/2013 3:29:18 AM
Merry Christmas to you
Christmas is a Time... (Poetry) - 12/12/2013 12:37:36 PM
I under stand what you, Regis and Jerry are saying, but peace can happen. Look at all the changes in the world in the 70's and 80's. Of course it would not happen over night...it will Happen.
Christmas is a Time... (Poetry) - 12/12/2013 10:06:39 AM
Fine, apt, and timely sentiments well-shared, Deborah. As for the gift of peace, it will not be given to us until we Earthians become one and strive together for better things to be. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Christmas is a Time... (Poetry) - 12/12/2013 9:14:48 AM
Good thoughts conveyed. I always look at it as a time for giving… Especially to those who have given me my life back.
Christmas is a Time... (Poetry) - 12/12/2013 7:48:19 AM
Merry Christmas to you, Deborah. As far as there being no reason why we cannot have peace I think there are plenty of reasons. Humans are basically selfish. So much so that they don't think twice about injuring or killing someone to take something from them or to avenge, or any number of reasons. "Wars and rumors of war."
Curtain Call (Poetry) - 12/11/2013 7:23:15 AM
Very elegant poem :)
Curtain Call (Poetry) - 12/6/2013 4:09:46 PM
Bookends! The beginning and the end. Very succinct and truth-filled.
Curtain Call (Poetry) - 12/6/2013 1:27:23 PM
... Hopefully there will have been some memorable lines and a few good scenes in between! Wonderful metaphor and word-perfect delivery. :) xx
Lost Souls (Poetry) - 12/5/2013 6:22:44 PM
Beautiful. The poem goes so well with the photo.
"She walked alone
Spoke to no one
Her eyes were scoped
On lost souls"
Curtain Call (Poetry) - 12/5/2013 8:35:22 AM
Poignant in it's simplicity!
Nicely done. I wish I could be so brief...
Much peace, love and light,
Curtain Call (Poetry) - 12/5/2013 4:55:49 AM
And what a scream that was. New and bright writing.
Curtain Call (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 9:09:14 PM
Curtain Call (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 2:35:19 PM
that is so very true
Curtain Call (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 1:56:58 PM
Yes, indeed we were. Very good!
Curtain Call (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 11:02:47 AM
Excellent. Truism to the nth. Yesss!
Something Wonderful... (Poetry) - 11/28/2013 6:56:00 AM
something wonderful indeed
Something Wonderful... (Poetry) - 11/27/2013 2:47:43 PM
Balance of good and bad. Good one.
Something Wonderful... (Poetry) - 11/27/2013 1:48:37 PM
Reads like Forrest Gump. "Life is like a box of chocolates."
Something Wonderful... (Poetry) - 11/27/2013 10:06:22 AM
Funny that you have offered Vivian lemon to spice up her tea.
Clothes do not Make the Woman (Poetry) - 11/24/2013 9:07:31 PM
May Our Love (Poetry) - 11/23/2013 5:52:21 AM
May Our Love (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 10:04:15 AM
"While the weather
Our love is not".............Lovely!
May Our Love (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 5:38:39 AM
Perfection- dreams come true.
May Our Love (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 3:08:38 AM
This is how it should be...
Beautiful vision Deborah...
Love and Light,
May Our Love (Poetry) - 11/21/2013 12:02:40 PM
I loved reading your wonderful romantic love poem, the verses sounds
like they are coming from deep within your soul and heart.
May Our Love (Poetry) - 11/21/2013 11:22:08 AM
Inclement weather is so much better when you have someone to love.
May Our Love (Poetry) - 11/21/2013 9:19:59 AM
Simple and elegant.
The essential elements of beauty.
May Our Love (Poetry) - 11/21/2013 8:39:21 AM
It is so very nice to be able to write a poem about the loved one and have it come straight out of your heart as this one did. Oh, my favorite lines by far is . . . "Smile on your face / I never would replace."
May Our Love (Poetry) - 11/21/2013 8:36:37 AM
Lovely romantic write, Deborah...
Clothes do not Make the Woman (Poetry) - 11/18/2013 9:13:49 AM
So true...nicely penned, Deborah...
Clothes do not Make the Woman (Poetry) - 11/16/2013 11:03:01 PM
I wonder why you had used "she" "her" (third person) to describe her in you first 3 stanza's; but then on your last 3 stanza's you've switched to referring to "you" (second person). Perhaps I'm missing something in this poem. Anyway...please forgive me if I had offended you. Sometimes I don't understand.
Sandie Angel :o)
Clothes do not Make the Woman (Poetry) - 11/16/2013 11:42:12 AM
I wonder what a woman with closets full of clothes, purses, and shoes thinks about that. But then, you are no ordinary woman. Why does she have to wear perfume at all?
Clothes do not Make the Woman (Poetry) - 11/15/2013 9:29:24 AM
No clothes certainly make the woman. Good one that pulls no punches.
Clothes do not Make the Woman (Poetry) - 11/15/2013 9:25:15 AM
i do and i so agree
Clothes do not Make the Woman (Poetry) - 11/15/2013 9:22:00 AM
If she didn't know before, after reading this she certainly will. This is pointedly direct without trying to insert ambiguous words. This is honest, straight to the point poetry.
Clothes do not Make the Woman (Poetry) - 11/15/2013 9:19:23 AM
Clothing is just so superficial. I understand exactly what you are saying. Very good!
It was Time (Poetry) - 11/13/2013 11:35:18 AM
Thought-provoking verses that awaken the imagination. Love and best wishes to you,
It was Time (Poetry) - 11/12/2013 11:14:40 PM
rather somber is the tone in this but so beautifully crafted with rich descriptors
Survive the Fall (Poetry) - 11/10/2013 6:45:45 PM
marriage is not for everyone
it's not exactly easy
but then again it isn't exactly hard either
Changing Seasons...it's okay to grow new roots
and to turn over a new leaf
Disengaged (Poetry) - 11/10/2013 6:42:20 PM
tears are great like that
and being free is beautiful
and being renewed is too as well
Joy & Just a little more chocolate
It was Time (Poetry) - 11/5/2013 3:23:59 AM
i hate goodbyes
It was Time (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 11:21:42 PM
Enticing to live
to the fullest
It was Time (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 6:05:52 PM
your guess is as good as mine.
It was Time (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 8:35:23 AM
I certainly hope not. However, if Heilbroner was right, we are on the train headed for the brink with the richest riding in the caboose and the poorest already jumping from the locomotive as it plunges off the cliff at the end of the line.
The Earth will exist for another 10,000,000,000 years or so, regardless of the life on it. Perhaps a smarter humanity than ours will arise in time.
It was Time (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 7:18:09 AM
Scary, not so crazy idea...the poem mixes tears and rain, heartbreak: floods, super storms, ice melting, oceans rising...it's all inside this beautiful poem...
It was Time (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 4:26:29 AM
Interesting write enjoyed reading
Is the sky falling?
Peace be with you
The Seasons (Poetry) - 11/3/2013 9:07:06 PM
I am with You, Deborah..
seasons have their reasons,
but I prefer Autumn
Disengaged (Poetry) - 11/3/2013 7:53:25 PM
In touch with feelings
time to move on..well
It was Time (Poetry) - 11/3/2013 12:59:27 PM
Hah! The last book I wrote was "The Late Great God!"
Yep, I suppose the earth will evaporate or something in the future. Who knows. Just have to try and live your life like it was going to happen tomorrow.
It was Time (Poetry) - 11/3/2013 12:07:13 PM
Noah's first entry into his ark's log, or his last? :)
The Seasons (Poetry) - 11/2/2013 9:29:51 AM
I prefer fall as well. Nicely expressed. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
The Seasons (Poetry) - 11/1/2013 6:41:50 PM
A quick trip through the year, all seasons to enjoy for different reasons.
The Seasons (Poetry) - 11/1/2013 6:53:39 AM
I happen to like summer best, and your poem supports me: slipping sandals off, footprints left behind, that's great. But you manage to give each of them something to love...
The Seasons (Poetry) - 11/1/2013 5:48:22 AM
Lovely write, Deborah...
The Seasons (Poetry) - 11/1/2013 2:15:47 AM
fall is a colorful time of year i agree
The Seasons (Poetry) - 10/31/2013 5:06:17 PM
The Seasons (Poetry) - 10/31/2013 10:17:09 AM
Yup.Yup Fall is my favorite . . . I guess I relate because I'm in the Fall of my life. When I turn the corner to Winter it will seal my fate.
Disengaged (Poetry) - 10/31/2013 7:18:42 AM
So tragic and so beautifully expressed...well done, Deborah...
Disengaged (Poetry) - 10/31/2013 2:29:26 AM
so very deep and sad
Disengaged (Poetry) - 10/29/2013 12:13:29 PM
This is so moving, and sad. And so many of us can relate.
Disengaged (Poetry) - 10/29/2013 12:09:58 PM
Everyone's ship will come in some day!
Disengaged (Poetry) - 10/29/2013 11:48:25 AM
Telling it like it is, and many of us understand the disengaged concept from personal situations. Dry those tears and try to carry on, your day in the sun is coming . . .
Survive the Fall (Poetry) - 10/15/2013 9:11:10 AM
sad but so true
Survive the Fall (Poetry) - 10/14/2013 4:41:22 PM
D.L. - I have 'fallen'. Your quick verse captivates; your photo selections entertain. Before I knew it, I had read 10 of your short poems. Thank you so much - I am now a Fan. Vicky
Survive the Fall (Poetry) - 10/13/2013 2:55:38 PM
Carefully chosen words, Deborah. From experience one knows...vows and Band-Aids or in some cases body casts...
Survive the Fall (Poetry) - 10/13/2013 9:36:13 AM
So True, Deborah..
love Your insight
Survive the Fall (Poetry) - 10/12/2013 11:15:57 AM
After the fall comes the winter of our discontent? Or do we spring into life with joy?
Adore (Poetry) - 10/12/2013 10:30:40 AM
Special the kindred
of sharing, Deborah
May I Kiss You ? (Poetry) - 10/12/2013 4:07:37 AM
Survive the Fall (Poetry) - 10/11/2013 10:57:06 PM
Oh, how true. Great work here Ms. Vaineo!
Survive the Fall (Poetry) - 10/11/2013 1:21:14 PM
Amen & amen.
Survive the Fall (Poetry) - 10/11/2013 12:41:36 PM
Yep. Marriage is full of treacherous ground, that is for sure.
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 7:09:34 AM
of heart and soul
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 6:42:18 AM
Such profound meaning with so few words...beautiful!
Adore (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 6:41:17 AM
Adore (Poetry) - 10/9/2013 12:18:21 PM
I can say that about my nieces… all of them… since I don't have any children.
Adore (Poetry) - 10/9/2013 9:10:20 AM
Sooooo romantic... well done, Deborah!
Adore (Poetry) - 10/9/2013 6:59:27 AM
I will be sending this to my granddaughter for sure. Thank you for the beautiful thought.
Adore (Poetry) - 10/9/2013 2:33:42 AM
a wonderful feeling
Adore (Poetry) - 10/8/2013 2:01:53 PM
If I had a daughter, this would be what I would hope to say. Absolutely beautiful.
Adore (Poetry) - 10/8/2013 1:31:56 PM
That just sorta sums it all up, no wishy-washy about this write. That is the only way to go.
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/8/2013 4:17:27 AM
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/8/2013 12:17:02 AM
Wonderful reflective poem.
Peace, love and blessings,
John Michael Domino
PS: I just came from a banquet in which Mike Huckabee was the keynote speaker. This was the message I learned from his speech, "Life today is unfortunately is much like driving a fast train. If you concentrate too much on what is behind you you will miss the blessings that are in front of you. Even worse than that, you may even steer a bright future right off the tracks." Amen!
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 8:56:40 AM
I would rather it were, “Your lips.”
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 7:10:10 AM
I can so relate.
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 6:05:29 AM
Nostalgia--sad and beautiful poem.
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 5:27:35 AM
Your romantic soul reveals itself in your writing, Deborah...Bravo!
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 3:42:11 AM
To bring to mind such "touching" memories is a treat which puts a smile on your face.
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 2:26:07 AM
so very true
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 11:34:32 PM
I must say this is one of your best poems! As we reflect upon past words spoken and the "touch" of someone's loving hand whom we love, it touches deeper than the face. It touches the heart. Lovely!
Touched my Face (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 6:48:33 PM
older and wiser, sometimes the slightest thing remembered said has new meaning. excellent poem.
Whispering Meadow (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 1:10:55 PM
Echo the whispering
more to come back..
Lost Souls (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 12:38:27 PM
What goes around..must
your poem, Deborah
Lost Souls (Poetry) - 10/3/2013 11:41:37 AM
In the looking will come the finding. Well penned.
Whispering Meadow (Poetry) - 10/3/2013 11:41:08 AM
Deborah such a tender poem of love and passion.
Whispering Meadow (Poetry) - 10/3/2013 8:45:23 AM
Beautifully penned, Deborah...
Lost Souls (Poetry) - 10/3/2013 6:42:05 AM
Not all lost souls are in the hereafter...
Whispering Meadow (Poetry) - 10/3/2013 6:41:22 AM
Ah, one of your precise, evocative, charming poems...thank you!
Whispering Meadow (Poetry) - 10/3/2013 2:54:44 AM
A whispering meadow is truly a lovely place to meet.
Whispering Meadow (Poetry) - 10/2/2013 6:47:30 AM
That last line left with the meadow whispering, “More.”
Whispering Meadow (Poetry) - 10/2/2013 6:12:40 AM
What a beautiful video you have created here! That is great!
Whispering Meadow (Poetry) - 10/2/2013 4:14:13 AM
Ah- this made me want to visit, and listen.
Whispering Meadow (Poetry) - 10/2/2013 2:56:13 AM
The poem is almost unreadable because of its light blue coloring. What's wrong with just plain black?
The poem is a tribute to lust and/or love au natural.
Whispering Meadow (Poetry) - 10/2/2013 2:24:45 AM
to see, to hear and to feel is all
Lost Souls (Poetry) - 10/1/2013 11:23:18 AM
I'm reminded of “looking for love in all the wrong places,” but that's a country song and I think this is more morbid like searching for love after death, like Jane proposes.
Lost Souls (Poetry) - 10/1/2013 5:58:41 AM
The picture shows a specter walking in a graveyard. Could it be that she is searching for love even after death? The need for love never dies. This is beautiful and allows the imagination to look a little deeper than the superficial. Fine job!
Lost Souls (Poetry) - 10/1/2013 2:11:16 AM
very warm and beautiful
Lost Souls (Poetry) - 9/30/2013 2:28:30 PM
Optimism, a trait I need to get back. Good write.
Lost Souls (Poetry) - 9/30/2013 2:04:31 PM
Among the foibles of life
She searches for him
A daily routine
Knowing they will meet somewhere
A quest undaunted
Act of Love (Poetry) - 9/26/2013 6:37:26 PM
Word economy goes a long way in a poem, particularly of the sensuous kind.
A Beach of a Day (Poetry) - 9/26/2013 6:34:10 PM
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 9/21/2013 2:36:45 AM
a wonderful poem to great Autumn
and a gorgeous photo too
Simmering Apples & Oranges
with Cinnamon sticks, cloves & allspice
To Love : (Poetry) - 9/21/2013 2:26:58 AM
the worst lies are those told to our heart
nothing good comes from heart deceptions
Riders On The Storm &
Collegiate Days (Poetry) - 9/16/2013 2:24:28 AM
i remembe those days as well
Collegiate Days (Poetry) - 9/15/2013 11:41:12 AM
Partied hardy at college..
sorry that knowledge I did
not seek, but then life has
a way of gaining on that...
Collegiate Days (Poetry) - 9/15/2013 9:13:05 AM
Everyone I met wanted to borrow five bucks. That's all I remember.
Collegiate Days (Poetry) - 9/14/2013 1:12:34 PM
I met a lot of techies and nerds. Can't recall anybody wanting me for anything. Sure glad I survived those collegiate days.
Collegiate Days (Poetry) - 9/14/2013 10:49:15 AM
Okay. Glad you did.
To Love : (Poetry) - 9/13/2013 6:44:30 AM
"To love is to communicate"...so true!
To Love : (Poetry) - 9/10/2013 9:34:57 PM
Trust is Love to be shared
for beautiful thoughts..
Deborah, enjoyed your poem
To Love : (Poetry) - 9/9/2013 4:04:54 AM
A big fat AMEN to that! Nicely done, Deborah...
To Love : (Poetry) - 9/9/2013 3:22:26 AM
trust and love are our essentials
To Love : (Poetry) - 9/8/2013 7:31:01 AM
I've heard that women lie more than men. Little lies––white lies––to avoid hurting people they love. When we lie to avoid hurt, is it love?
Everyone should have a relationship with another person that they don't have to lie to. I guess we can call that love.
To Love : (Poetry) - 9/8/2013 5:40:14 AM
The word I found so relevant here is "communicate". Without that there is nothing.
To Love : (Poetry) - 9/7/2013 5:58:29 PM
very well said.
To Love : (Poetry) - 9/7/2013 1:15:26 PM
Most people lie during the courtship (old-fashioned word, but . . .), it is usually only after marriage or living together than many hidden truths come out. That can, and does cause problems.
To Love : (Poetry) - 9/7/2013 10:38:33 AM
Love cannot live in lies only truth survives and is the soul of love.
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 9/6/2013 8:34:17 AM
A fine "welcoming" of autumn, Deborah. Love and peace,
For Your Eyes Only (Poetry) - 9/4/2013 8:42:36 PM
Depth of Beauty
no darkness can
hide the light
Love at it's best, Deborah
For Your Eyes Only (Poetry) - 9/4/2013 5:42:54 AM
To do what you have done shows the deep and truthful love you hold for this person. Deep and lovely!
For Your Eyes Only (Poetry) - 9/4/2013 2:31:44 AM
as it should be i hope they see
For Your Eyes Only (Poetry) - 9/3/2013 4:41:18 PM
I cannot see how a person could not "see the light" after reading these verses, Deborah. Love and best wishes,
For Your Eyes Only (Poetry) - 9/3/2013 9:49:00 AM
Yes it's not for my eyes… So I won't look. ;-)
For Your Eyes Only (Poetry) - 9/3/2013 7:38:26 AM
If the intended does not see the light, he or she is a fool.
For Your Eyes Only (Poetry) - 9/3/2013 4:44:35 AM
She'd be a fool not to see such a shining light...nicely done, Deborah...
For Your Eyes Only (Poetry) - 9/3/2013 4:25:15 AM
Awww . . . Since you so honestly and forthrightly stated the obvious fact, I have a feeling he will see the light.
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 9/2/2013 6:54:08 AM
The fall is my favorite time of the year and I like the way the paintbrush of nature smears the backdrop of hills!
Waiting on the retreat, to see these scenes that write!
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 8/29/2013 9:58:14 AM
Ah yes...the splendid colours of fall are just around the corner...lovely poem, Deborah...
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 8/29/2013 7:38:12 AM
a lovely autumn pice
Most enjpyable reading
Love & Peace
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 8/28/2013 2:44:20 PM
Beautiful ode to Nature
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 8/27/2013 3:04:26 PM
I love to walk through the woods and admire the colors (the trees' new wardrobe). You expressed the process of the leaves changing so nicely.
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/27/2013 1:24:40 PM
Very strong three finishing lines. Who would not love to hear "You are the only one/I have ever loved/In this way." Beautiful, Deborah. ~~ Diana
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 8/27/2013 7:38:49 AM
Once again, I am reminded about the fall color that I miss so much. An interesting way of expressing the way leaves change into a new fall wardrobe.
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 8/27/2013 5:30:08 AM
and what a colorful time it will be
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 8/27/2013 3:47:29 AM
I would think the leaves would "want" to change into the beauty which happens every fall.
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 8/27/2013 3:43:54 AM
I can't wait for that lovely Fall Wardrobe Show to begin, and I plan to take it all in, at a place just like the one depicted in your marvelous graphic.
Green Leaves of Summer (Poetry) - 8/26/2013 6:34:46 PM
This is a fine lyric, penned with heart and soul.
The picture is a lovely piece of this gestalt.
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/20/2013 3:53:37 PM
those are sweet private moments
sorry they bring tears to the muse
Unfading Love & Silver Roses
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/19/2013 9:18:54 PM
When heart and soul
but not until then..
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/19/2013 9:16:09 PM
Murphy's Law, but
poetry a winner!!
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/17/2013 6:16:49 AM
I can relate to this poem completely, sometimes that one love just won't let you be...
Much peace, love and light,
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/17/2013 5:13:59 AM
beautiful words of naked and searchingly sad vulnerability
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/16/2013 4:26:51 PM
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/16/2013 6:54:30 AM
I feel your sadness and pain. I wish you happiness.
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/16/2013 4:24:35 AM
Beautifully romantic....well done, Deborah...
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/15/2013 5:32:27 PM
you can't be close enough when you feel like that can you? come closer indeed.
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/15/2013 2:47:42 PM
This is such a lovely romance poem. I enjoyed reading it and can
understand how it must feel to really want to be with someone you
really love. It must be a miserable feeling to want someone and
seems as though they can't or don't hear your voice calling out to
them. keep writing such blissful poems.
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/15/2013 12:17:04 PM
I wonder, does she see, read, or hear your plea?
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/15/2013 8:16:52 AM
That is a sad refrain, and unfortunately one that many of us have had to deal with. I know I do. Her name, Nanette. She died before I could make it right.
Wanting You Nearer (Poetry) - 8/15/2013 8:16:44 AM
Writing should stir the soul, and this does, and breaks my heart.
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/14/2013 11:59:52 AM
Is it really a game of chance? I hope not. I want to believe in destiny, don't you? Maybe we don't always lose. Well penned
Daydreamers.. .. . (Poetry) - 8/14/2013 11:58:14 AM
Take me back there to that time with you. Sometimes I too, wish time could run backwards.
The Darkness Crept (Poetry) - 8/14/2013 11:57:19 AM
Sounds like a dark place many of us have visited, well penned and affecting.
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/14/2013 3:41:54 AM
love is all of those i agree
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/13/2013 8:40:56 PM
Thought provoking romantic poetry. RC is the key.
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/13/2013 4:41:45 AM
My opinion is that the other guy lost, big time, and will eventually know it, as will you.
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/12/2013 3:23:47 PM
I have learned is to love and "bless them anyway" No love is ever lost or wasted. Much love to you my friend and BTW I get it ;-)xoxoxo
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/12/2013 3:19:51 PM
it's all rigged.........must be.
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/12/2013 3:16:23 PM
Love never comes to you when you are looking for it or "in the game". It comes when you're not expecting it. True dat!
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/12/2013 1:32:04 PM
Once you know the odds, you don't play. There is something to be said for, in the game of love, to let it come to you rather than play the game and lose.
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/12/2013 12:49:14 PM
I 2nd Edward's reply!!
Embrace every opportunity
play footsies under the table
& spill something in their lap
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/12/2013 12:11:14 PM
"They" say we only regret what we didn't have the courage to do when we had the chance. Live on and love on, my dear, cause you're in the game!
Game of Chance (Poetry) - 8/12/2013 10:32:36 AM
Ahhh, but I dare say there aren't ALL bad memories. Besides, there is still time . . .
Daydreamers.. .. . (Poetry) - 8/7/2013 1:06:17 PM
Whimsical, and I love it.
The Darkness Crept (Poetry) - 8/5/2013 5:08:09 PM
enjoyed the reading
The eye is creepy.....lol
love & peace be with you
Daydreamers.. .. . (Poetry) - 8/5/2013 5:05:45 PM
love & Peace
Daydreamers.. .. . (Poetry) - 8/5/2013 3:52:34 PM
Cute pic , clouds with faces or animals, ha!
The Darkness Crept (Poetry) - 7/18/2013 3:23:45 PM
give them muses a name
I like to listen in on them
whoever or why ever they are
Mediums The Palmist Seers
Daydreamers.. .. . (Poetry) - 7/18/2013 3:22:06 PM
sweet sweet summertime lull
this poem kicks off my flip flops
to feel the grass & just relax & enjoy
Sunshine Sunny Side Up
& The Slip-N-Slide Beer Fest
My Back Yard
Daydreamers.. .. . (Poetry) - 7/17/2013 11:51:03 AM
Precious be the memories,You
have brought out in me, Deborah,
as I daydream right along with You
Daydreamers.. .. . (Poetry) - 7/16/2013 8:00:45 AM
Conveying a much larger message than daydreaming about the past.
Daydreamers.. .. . (Poetry) - 7/15/2013 5:21:43 PM
May you never stop daydreaming!
Daydreamers.. .. . (Poetry) - 7/15/2013 10:53:34 AM
You have hit the nail on the . . . er . . . what was that . . . Never mind, I didn't have such a great childhood, but looking back there were many, many moments when I "Lay in clover / And watch the clouds" overhead and was at peace with the world. For the first time in my life I'm thinking if I could go back I wouldn't do as I did before. Very nicely written, and it made me think . . . really think . . .
The Darkness Crept (Poetry) - 7/15/2013 5:47:17 AM
Great poetry, Deborah...that last line packs a powerful punch...
The Darkness Crept (Poetry) - 7/13/2013 3:06:18 PM
Out of the darkness..
light for Your Path,
The Darkness Crept (Poetry) - 7/13/2013 7:44:22 AM
It was no dream when she called me, “Erik.”
The Darkness Crept (Poetry) - 7/12/2013 8:03:46 PM
You have crept up on us with this one. Very fine!