Recent Reviews for JoAnna Drelleshak
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Relative Terror (Short Story) - 6/8/2008 1:34:42 PM
Excellent read! Russell getting the boot was my favorite though I did like how Nicolai's situation turned out in the end. Very strong characters!
Death and The Dreamer (Short Story) - 6/8/2008 1:19:48 PM
Wow! Very poignant and true. Excellent short there my friend. I will have to add you to my 'authors to watch' list.
A Different Point of View (Short Story) - 6/8/2008 1:11:52 PM
Great mix between reality and fantasy! Even though sad, lovely ending!
Relative Terror (Short Story) - 5/16/2008 4:28:09 AM
hehehehehe...I love it. It sort of sounds like something I would do, though the older brother I personally would have kicked out probably after a month if his temper is as bad as it seems.
Awesome job
Death and The Dreamer (Short Story) - 2/28/2008 9:52:13 AM
Loved this short story. Must read your poetry too. My husband deceased as of Aug 17 07 and am still grieving. If he was not such a nice and loving person, maybe I'd get over him sooner. But he is in heaven now with many colors, he loved his colorful things.
Relative Terror (Short Story) - 8/7/2006 8:02:47 PM
Excellent story, but since you asked for feedback, I suggest you go over it and edit this. Lots of typos. But they can be easily fixed...especially if you have someone else edit it for you. Fresh pair of eyes...
Regardless, it was very entertaining, witty and oh so real...hehe
And the title is perfect! :)
~Cheryl
Relative Terror (Short Story) - 9/29/2005 10:18:15 AM
This is a great story, JoAnna. I see it was posted a year ago, and wonder if you have done anything with it since. I'm also interested in hearing how your novel is coming along, and if you are working on any others.
A Different Point of View (Short Story) - 4/29/2005 5:55:09 AM
I liked the alternating point of views, and how the fairy returned to open the flowers every morning for her.
Relative Terror (Short Story) - 10/24/2004 4:20:10 PM
Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful!
Relative Terror (Short Story) - 10/2/2004 9:13:58 AM
Superb story! - (but I'd take care of the typos.)
Stephanie
Relative Terror (Short Story) - 10/1/2004 9:50:54 AM
excellent write!
A Dead Giveaway (Poetry) - 10/26/2009 10:17:54 PM
To the piont honest and open good piece
Element: Fire (Poetry) - 11/15/2008 5:42:53 PM
facets of a fire...love it
Me, Eternity, Strong, Forever (Poetry) - 11/15/2008 5:31:58 PM
love is all that can be needed to show more love...........from eternity to eternity
A warning in vain (Poetry) - 11/15/2008 5:25:23 PM
quite of a dark disposition..i can see you have handed you foes over to secrecy...brilliantly mazed in
One step to far... (Poetry) - 8/15/2008 10:28:02 AM
Splendid.
One step to far... (Poetry) - 5/25/2008 11:54:03 AM
Not afraid to take the next step, but wishing not too and don't want to be burned. Been there and not expecting love to come to me now. Taking care of an ill hubby was so much for me and sad too and don't want to do it again.
One step to far... (Poetry) - 4/4/2008 8:39:10 PM
I like the format of this, it's different. And the repeating of the idea of close but far works well, too.
One step to far... (Poetry) - 4/2/2008 4:26:22 PM
Sometimes when the heart guides one down a path we must reach out and try. Your emotions are still re-living what was, perhaps it is time to put what was in the past and move on to something better....
Be always safe,
Karen
One step to far... (Poetry) - 4/2/2008 3:14:28 PM
Sometimes when we are burned by a romantic relationship, we think about that one step too far. This is a raw emotionally charged piece, that deserves to be posted on every woman's office, bedroom, and kitchen walls. You wrote a mountain of electrically charged emotion, JoAnna. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), sister Barbie
One step to far... (Poetry) - 4/2/2008 7:15:48 AM
Intense feelings and emotions of love and desire battling with the pain and anger perhaps of the past...always an interesting battle but if it were me I would stretch out my heart a little bit further...
hugs
Fee
One step to far... (Poetry) - 4/2/2008 4:12:41 AM
May that step always be out of reach and move on with your life.
One step to far... (Poetry) - 4/1/2008 10:16:58 PM
Oh the blinding reality!!
Love the presence and curious hesitation to step back into it... one step too far!!
Great visuals and honesty JoAnna.
Love, Suzie :-D
One step to far... (Poetry) - 4/1/2008 9:38:41 PM
They say that it's not the miles of the marathon that bring you to a grinding halt, but the last few metres. The last few steps too far. Brilliant work in brevity.
Farwell to a friend (Poetry) - 2/28/2008 9:56:26 AM
I too lost a dog I loved for 13 years. She was faithful to the end vbut suffered with arthritis. I miss her and she cannot be replaced. Thanks for the poem. So good Mine was sassy too a cocker spaniel named Joy. Have a cat named seashore now who is 12 years old.
Me, Eternity, Strong, Forever (Poetry) - 2/28/2008 9:54:26 AM
Yes, your style is different. I am a friend of Bonnie May the author from Colo. She lived as my cousin's neighbor for 10 years and is a beautiful person. She is in hosp at moment getting a pace maker to make her heart better and loves feedback too. Many authors on Authors den are making poems to her. She is well liked as you will be too. Love your poems. Am concerned with death very much. B ut not afraid of it. Like your style. You own.
Think Before You Speak (Poetry) - 1/15/2008 8:59:19 PM
Amusing turn of events to grant the wish. I enjoyed it, well done.
Ed
A Lesson Well Learned (Poetry) - 12/6/2007 8:22:41 AM
nice poem
love how you can
feel likes it
you with tha problem
A warning in vain (Poetry) - 10/25/2007 9:53:03 PM
Your poem is scary.
A warning in vain (Poetry) - 7/23/2007 4:38:55 AM
The owner of that flaccid muscle sure provoked a lot of poison. Hope it dissipates. Interesting write!
My Councilor (Poetry) - 2/25/2007 1:41:51 PM
"Wet, slimy reality dripping from your pores"......I too have met such monsters JoAnna.......I enjoy your work.
Peace,
Bill
A warning in vain (Poetry) - 1/25/2007 10:21:51 AM
I don't get it?
ha ha. No, i do get it. it's great.
On Being Thankful (Poetry) - 11/17/2006 8:59:25 AM
yes...you make a good point. words can be the most damaging weapon of all...which is why they should be used carefully...and effectively.
Enjoyed this write,
Wendi
Shattered (Poetry) - 11/12/2006 6:46:22 PM
nice poem filled with emotion
Think Before You Speak (Poetry) - 7/12/2006 7:21:51 AM
marvellous
Out Of Reach (Poetry) - 6/27/2006 5:45:19 PM
Hi Joanna!
This reminds of something similiar that I wrote awhile back. Always desiring what is just beyond our reach. Seems as though this is one of those horrible traits that we humans have.
Copy and paste the following web address to take you to my version of desire. Thanks! Have a great evening Joanna!
Debbie
http://debsdiddies.blogstream.com/v1/pid/81000_I-SKIPPED-WORK-FOR-THIS.html#TP
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