My Sweet JJ (Poetry) - 8/8/2008 7:03:09 PM
So very beautiful your words are...stay safe and well...Hugsss
My Sweet JJ (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 2:38:38 PM
Hey Allan,this is a heart-touching tribute to your baby brother and your unconditional love for him shines through like the sun.Your baby brother is lucky to have a big brother like you.Unconditional love is indeed the greatest love of them all.take care
My Sweet JJ (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 1:54:28 PM
Oh how loving and a woderful tribute to your "baby brother". Family ties run strong as they should...
Be always safe,
My Sweet JJ (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 1:26:27 PM
Great love expressed here for a baby brother.
Child's Pain (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 9:50:24 AM
I like the coming full-circle, and love the meter. There are some grammatical annoyances and typos, but I like the flow. If you'd like to polish it up, then I'd be glad to help. Message me...