Recent Reviews for Cynthia Martin
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My Body, Part Two (Poetry) - 9/11/2009 11:56:03 AM
Super poetry! Young at heart, loving and kinda wonderful YOU are!
Amen
My Body, Part One (Poetry) - 7/25/2009 4:27:39 PM
A perfect scenerio of a sort of perfect person who is willing to share who they are, what they look like and wherefore they are going.
terrific photo of self too
My Body, Part Two (Poetry) - 7/25/2009 4:26:34 PM
No arthritis setting in you yet. Good luck.
What I Like To Do? (Poetry) - 5/21/2009 5:11:55 AM
Fun!!!
Anna
My Body, Part Two (Poetry) - 5/21/2009 5:11:11 AM
I'm exhausted after reading this. Giggle....Good job.
Anna
My Body, Part One (Poetry) - 5/21/2009 5:10:24 AM
Love the lyrical flow of this one. Great job Cynthia.
Anna
Fall - Leaves (Poetry) - 3/22/2009 6:37:39 PM
Dear Cynthia. I came accross your den and found this lovely and original poem. I like particularly these two lines which express the feeling; "When, they all got excited and started to feel, Then, my leaves began to crumble" Great, Love Emile
Fall - Leaves (Poetry) - 1/4/2009 5:35:20 PM
Another delightful write that call to the child within me. Thanks for sharing, Cynthia. Love and best wishes,
Regis
What I Like To Do? (Poetry) - 1/4/2009 5:33:28 PM
I like the way you "play" with words. I've been known to do that myself. Check out, "Whaddup, Doc?" Love and peace to you, Cyntia,
Regis
My Body, Part Two (Poetry) - 1/4/2009 5:31:35 PM
A fine addition to part one, Cynthia. I find your words uplifting. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
My Body, Part One (Poetry) - 1/4/2009 5:30:37 PM
This is a fine ode to your "physical you," Cynthia. I find it very vibrant. Thank you for sharing. Love and blessings,
Regis
My Body, Part One (Poetry) - 1/3/2009 9:20:03 AM
I never thought about it like that. But it is a blessing when your body is healthy physically. Moreover it's even greater to know that your body is part of the spiritual body of God. I think your words illustrate both and you've really said something that's simply powerful! Do it Sista!
Fall - Leaves (Poetry) - 9/12/2008 5:09:01 AM
Cynthia,
Wonderful write, colorful and magical. Hope you take Michelle up on her offer to publish!
Many blessings,
~Linda
Fall - Leaves (Poetry) - 9/11/2008 2:33:59 PM
This is great for kids because the visuals are so strong and would come alive with illustrations. I would add another chill at the end though and one less child's name because you have the whole set of three things working for you in the first three stanzas. If you are interested in publishing credits, i do a children's magazine and would love this for the Autumn issue- we only pay in copy (2 copies of the magazine you are in), so if you are interested check out the website address on my page. Great work. Michelle
The Cute Chick With Maroon Lipstick (Poetry) - 9/7/2008 1:38:36 AM
Hey Cynthia,
Very sweet and a lovely rhyme--right on track.
Summer At The Beach, Part Two (Poetry) - 9/6/2008 5:37:36 PM
Glad you summered near or at the beach. Would of loved to be there too with you for real/
Summer At The Beach, Part One (Poetry) - 9/6/2008 5:36:43 PM
Great, I just love the beach in summer and the swimmers and to laze at edge of waves and just get a little wet.
The Apartment Is Empty Or The Empty Apartment, Part Two (Poetry) - 9/6/2008 5:35:46 PM
I know loneliness too. Many people just don't have much and still survive. A story so sad but true.
The Apartment Is Empty Or The Empty Apartment, Part One (Poetry) - 9/6/2008 5:34:53 PM
Too bad, this story is sad.
Flurries, Part One (Poetry) - 9/6/2008 5:33:42 PM
Winter will be here before we know it in PA. It is always nice to watch those snowflakes from inside now that I am old and don't care to play in it for years.
The Great Grand Child, Part Two (Poetry) - 9/6/2008 5:32:31 PM
Great, he's growing up so nicely and will learn lots at school. Make lots of friends too hopefully.
The Great Grand Child, Part One (Poetry) - 9/6/2008 5:31:43 PM
I am going to be a great grandma in April. So excited too.
What I Like To Do? (Poetry) - 9/2/2008 1:55:31 AM
This is nice,take care
Edwin
Flurries, Part Two (Poetry) - 9/2/2008 1:54:08 AM
This is very nice,I enjoy reading Part 1 and Part 2 of your poem.Keep up the good work,take care
Edwin
Flurries, Part One (Poetry) - 9/2/2008 1:52:01 AM
Snow is such a wonderful part of Mother Nature,I don't mind shoveling the snow.I can remember when I was a kid,I used to throw snowballs at my friends at school and use the school steps as a sled where kids would glide down on the steps.It was a lot of fun.I enjoy reading this poem as you express the sheer joy of playing in the snow.take care
Edwin
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