Recent Reviews for Brandi L. Wroblewski
Brave Enough (Poetry) - 3/9/2014 8:06:35 AM|
Thank you all so much for taking the time to read my poems and comment on them! I appreacite your kind words!
This Ends Now (Poetry) - 3/9/2014 8:04:40 AM
Thank you all! Karla, what I meant to express through that line was, so many people risk their lives for our freedom and a lot that die don't receive the full regocnition that they deserve. I never meant to imply that people do it to make a name for themselves. I'm very sorry for the confusion!
Instead of Two (Poetry) - 3/9/2014 8:01:21 AM
Thank you both!
Bomb Shelter (Poetry) - 3/9/2014 8:00:01 AM
Thank you all very much, this is one of my earliest poems (:
You've Got it all Figured Out (Poetry) - 3/9/2014 7:58:12 AM
Thank you all for the kind words <3
You've Got it all Figured Out (Poetry) - 3/20/2010 9:21:17 AM
emotionally combustive ...
You've Got it all Figured Out (Poetry) - 3/20/2010 5:46:05 AM
Very expressive writing. I hope more understanding and compassion comes your way.
You've Got it all Figured Out (Poetry) - 3/20/2010 3:49:26 AM
It always amazes me how people can judge and analysis us without even knowing our hearts...I like your "I don't give a damn what you think" attitude that says so much. True poets write what they feel not what people want to hear. Well done Brandi.
You've Got it all Figured Out (Poetry) - 3/19/2010 8:25:56 PM
I believe I do know what you are talking about, Brandi; and you provide pause for thinking with your words here. Love and best wishes,
Simplest Form (Poetry) - 2/11/2010 12:27:38 PM
Sadly, love is often a very stormy and painful experience. I can relate to what you express via your verses here, Brandi. Love and best wishes,
Salvation (Poetry) - 2/11/2010 12:21:09 PM
But the key is "salvation," Brandi. In spite of all the "f***-ups," there is always hope; and I do sense that in your verses here. Take care. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
naD the naM (Poetry) - 12/25/2009 11:47:59 AM
Powerfully expressive and meaningful, Brandi. For me, I have not found that "time heals all wounds." Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
naD the naM (Poetry) - 12/25/2009 10:33:10 AM
Only time, will make the difference. After 30 years, I still see my Best Friends face, only now it is with a smile. Be Well, Carin
One N Glen (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 7:00:45 PM
this gave me goosebumps brandi,i almost wanna cry now its a deff good poem about your step dad passing away.
Sinking Feeling (Poetry) - 6/7/2009 6:33:42 PM
You express your message well, Brandi; and I think the style is fine. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Sinking Feeling (Poetry) - 6/6/2009 5:58:55 PM
hatred and fear always lead into unfortunate directions ... the off an on rhyme works well ...
This Ends Now (Poetry) - 6/6/2009 5:19:15 PM
A well written poem,great work,take care
Sinking Feeling (Poetry) - 6/6/2009 5:17:17 PM
This is very nice.I enjoy reading it.This style of poetry is just fine whether it rhymes or not :-).Be proud of your work,take care
This Ends Now (Poetry) - 4/11/2009 4:43:24 PM
You write from your soul, Brandi. That's what I do unless I decide to "fake it." I am drawn in to understand what you express. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Brave Enough (Poetry) - 4/11/2009 4:40:10 PM
This is worthy of pause for reflection... ...and when one realizes s/he is finished reading, s/he is compelled to read again and "get" what you are expressing via your verses. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
Watch It Swing (Poetry) - 4/11/2009 4:38:01 PM
This could be quite a song but as a poem, it's just fine in expressing what is aching in your soul, Brandi. Love and best wishes,
Contempt (Poetry) - 4/11/2009 4:36:22 PM
I find your verses thought-inciting and compelling in emotions and meaning expressed, Brandi. Love and best wishes to you,
Brave Enough (Poetry) - 1/5/2009 3:16:07 AM
An excellent poem you have written,take care
Watch It Swing (Poetry) - 1/5/2009 3:13:31 AM
A heartfelt and emotional poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
Watch It Swing (Poetry) - 1/4/2009 7:37:48 PM
Amazing how we somtimes lose sight of what we have until it is no longer there. Heartfelt write...
Be always safe,
Brave Enough (Poetry) - 12/16/2008 4:29:44 AM
So good to read your work again Brandi. It resonates and disturbs. What good poetry should be!
This Ends Now (Poetry) - 11/8/2008 5:09:36 AM
The courage is in you. Don't give up the fight! You give rhymed poetry such meaning. Have you thought of writing songs?
This Ends Now (Poetry) - 11/7/2008 2:40:14 PM
Several things stood out: your impeccable rhyming, for one. :) But, that being said,
" ... You can't make it right if the choice is wrong
We've been pushing and pulling for far too long ... "
tells me that we need to take care of our own before trying to police the rest of the world - am I right?
" ... risking your life for an 'honorable mention' ...."
We don't sign our names, raise our hands, don the uniform, serve our country to be recognized. We do it because we want to. As the daughter/sister/niece/cousin of Veterans, as well as a USAF Veteran myself, I followed in my heroes footsteps. Still, it would be nice if those whose orders we've followed would say, "Thank you" and keep promises made.
Thank you for penning this one.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Instead of Two (Poetry) - 11/7/2008 5:10:59 AM
You weave words and feelings together like a magic carpet. "If you can't look away then take a big look around..." Wow! You are a brilliant writer! I hope you can keep on writing this way; it gives you a taste of freedom.
Instead of Two (Poetry) - 11/6/2008 6:12:22 PM
A story poem that comes straiht from your heart, nice writing...
Be always safe,
House Not Home (Poetry) - 10/13/2008 6:34:23 AM
Very well done ..have a wonderful and safe day...HUgs
House Not Home (Poetry) - 10/12/2008 5:25:05 PM
How sad and yet no bitter resentment, you are right though, all hoses are not "homes" and that is what is needed, "homes" where all the love is. Very well written....
Be always safe,
House Not Home (Poetry) - 10/12/2008 1:02:49 PM
Brandi... a lot of my writing came from teenaged experiences with an alcoholic parent too. The writing helped me get through it. You may even want to try writing in another voice using fiction. Inventing a character who can overcome these trials may help. I know times will get better for you. Art will get you through.
House Not Home (Poetry) - 10/12/2008 11:59:19 AM
What a heart-wrenching story about a broke home. It's all too common. Wonderful and insightful write.
One N Glen (Poetry) - 10/10/2008 3:52:51 PM
Regret is such a powerful thing. It really helps to turn it into poetry.
Bomb Shelter (Poetry) - 10/10/2008 3:45:13 PM
The final stanza is so powerful and lyrical. Bravo! Keep up the writing girl!
One N Glen (Poetry) - 10/10/2008 8:16:07 AM
Step Dads who acted as Dads are special, for they give love and you received love; and your love to your step dad in return in evident in this. May you find peace within yourself. Your Dad loves you no matter what, and I bet you he is looking down at you from heaven and wants you to be proud of the person you have become.
A wonderful tribute to your step dad!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Can You Live Without (Poetry) - 10/10/2008 1:57:15 AM
I doubt that anyone could live without love. There exist a fine line between reality and fantasy which we all walk every day of our lives. You are a good writer with an awesome mind. Don't ever let anyone take the fantasy away from you. Peace and Blessings Always, Paul.
Bomb Shelter (Poetry) - 10/9/2008 5:48:57 PM
Powerfully written; well done!
Can You Live Without (Poetry) - 10/9/2008 5:48:29 PM
Great job, kiddo!! Only 17?? WOW!! I'm impressed!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Welcome to the Den; you're among friends!
Can You Live Without (Poetry) - 10/9/2008 5:34:16 PM
Hi little one
This is very well written..from one so young. You have captured the hurts of Love as an elder would. Continue your writing journey as you are talented. I will enjoy reading more.
Bomb Shelter (Poetry) - 10/9/2008 5:31:42 PM
Well my little one...you have captured me with this writing. I read it twice and my mind keeps seeing our soldiers in war...hiding in their foxholes and thinking---what you have written.
Can You Live Without (Poetry) - 10/9/2008 5:27:03 PM
All the passions that lead to the never ending longing in search of loving and being loved, well expressed.
Be always safe,