Recent Reviews for Kacie Rahm
Sister Act (Short Story) - 3/27/2008 10:27:26 AM|
This is a wonderul tribute to your sister but it is also a fine self-revelation and validation of your own character/personality. Well-expressed, Kacie. Love and best wishes,
Therapy (Short Story) - 3/27/2008 10:22:58 AM
Very nicely done, Kacie. That was an unexpected "twist" for me. Thank you for sharing your short story. Love and best wishes,
Weekend From Hell (Short Story) - 3/26/2008 9:04:32 AM
That is some account, Kacie! I would not wish a weekend like that o anyone. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Weekend From Hell (Short Story) - 6/10/2005 2:51:17 PM
I love the way you write, as if you're writing it AS it happens. :-) I could totally visualize every horrible part of your weekend! LOL Thanks for sharing, April :-)
Weekend From Hell (Short Story) - 3/3/2003 10:47:36 AM
well you must have had the weekend of a lifetime.%! i'm glad you guys got back ok and i hope everythings going ok now...
Weekend From Hell (Short Story) - 3/1/2003 12:35:16 PM
wow, you sure had one of those days, didn't you, kaci? poor dear! at least you survived it; and at least you could tell others about it! good write with loads of imagery throughout; i could just picture the scenes as they unfolded in this write! well done, kaci! love, your friend from texas, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) to you and to your family! :)
Censorship! (Article) - 3/12/2009 11:46:04 AM
An interesting and well thought-out essay, Kacie. I must say that I agree with the points that you put forward. I don't think we realize to what degree the media is "doctored" by the powers that be. Best wishes with love and peace,
Face To Face, Leave A Space (Article) - 2/21/2009 11:03:49 AM
This is very well written and makes excellent points, Kacie. It's funny. My high school is/was also CHS (Chilliwack High School). I graduated from there as a student and later on, I taught there. Thanks for sharing this. I hope a lot of students (and adults) read it. Love and peace,
Senioritis: A Deadly Disease (Article) - 4/15/2008 9:41:28 AM
As an educator in high school, I find your point of view most appropriate, Kacie. Hopefully, your advice will be heeded. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Ozymandias; A Literary Analysis (Article) - 4/15/2008 7:57:22 AM
I was not familiar with this poem so your essay is a learning experience for me. Nicely done, Kacie. Thank you for sharing. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Over... (Poetry) - 3/6/2009 11:21:56 AM
All I ever wanted was for you to genuinely want me in your life.
If not a lover, a partner, a significant other....
If nothing else, a friend.
A shoulder to cry on.
I know EXACTLY this of which you share via your verses, Kacie. And yes, sadly, as John has written, it is a universal and ever present theme in this world/life. I find your poem achingly poignant and meaningful. I wish you love and my very best sentiments are expressed to you.
Over... (Poetry) - 3/6/2009 2:18:05 AM
Old Man (Poetry) - 2/26/2009 11:28:44 AM
This hits home for me as I witnessed this happen to my dad during the last year of his life. These verses are compelling and thought-inciting, Kacie. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes to you,
Old Man (Poetry) - 2/26/2009 2:57:56 AM
intriguing. would love to know the backstory. care to share?
1:58 AM (Poetry) - 2/25/2009 3:24:48 AM
I love this, Kacie. You chose just the right examples, and entertainingly so. Loved the parts about psyche TV, mattress commercials, and trying to find the right position. Well done; write more. JD
1:58 AM (Poetry) - 2/23/2009 7:20:28 AM
Hi Kacie, Sounds like most of my 2 ams... damn trains anyhow! :]. Love 'em and hate 'em. Thank you for sharing...
Soundtrack (A Final Memoir) (Poetry) - 2/23/2009 2:15:32 AM
This is really nice,You are very talented.I enjoy reading this,take care
Holly Would (Poetry) - 2/23/2009 2:13:13 AM
Lovely poem,take care
Dynamic? (Poetry) - 2/23/2009 2:11:50 AM
Nice poem,take care
1:58 AM (Poetry) - 2/23/2009 2:10:33 AM
Excellent poem,take care
Holly Would (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 11:07:20 AM
Absolutey exquisite lines, sage one!
1:58 AM (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 11:04:44 AM
love this, very very creative writing
1:58 AM (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 10:04:40 AM
Oh Kacie. I can soooooooooo relate. I just went through this a couple of nights ago. The more you want to sleep, the more sleep will not engage. I find this poem very compelling. I particularly like:
I picture oceans.
I inhale the tide, and exhale the undertow.
Truly a wonderful offering. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
Gemini (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 9:54:57 AM
Extremely well exressed!
1:58 AM (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 9:49:01 AM
Nice poem, Kacie!
1:58 AM (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 8:39:11 AM
Hey invite your dog to sleep with you and you'll fall asleep fast as will your pet..
Dynamic? (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 12:55:29 PM
A most interesting perspective, Kacie. Sure makes one think. Love and best wishes,
Dynamic? (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 2:28:49 AM
I like the way you've taken just a few words to convey both anticipation and longing. Nice.
Blue Circles (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 8:26:11 AM
You are so expressive, Kacie. I can't explain the "blue circles" but I can relate though. I love the harsh honesty of your writes. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Believe (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 8:23:44 AM
I love your philosophical outlooks, Kacie. I don't know how I missed these gems of yours. Never too late, right? Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and best wishes,
Another Jason (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 8:21:55 AM
You write so honestly. You are brave, Kacie. I hope your dad has gone past that and really "see" you. My words do not do justice to what you express here. I wish you all good things.
Agression, Depression, Happiness (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 8:17:18 AM
I can relate. Thank you for sharing, Kacie. Love and best wishes,
Happy (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 8:15:51 AM
You surely have me thinking with these verses, Kacie. I don't know how I missed this one before. Time sure does fly. For some reason, I can never read your poems just once. There's always more to "get." Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Holly Would (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 8:11:27 AM
Hey Kacie! It's nice to read you again. I appreciate the philosophical perspective that you offer here. I am reading your poem for the third time. You grabbed my soul with these verses. Love and best wishes to you,
Ode to the Prelude (Poetry) - 5/26/2008 7:50:45 AM
Very cleverly expressed, Kacie... ...I appreciate your wit and humor. Love and best wishes to you,
Soundtrack (A Final Memoir) (Poetry) - 4/28/2008 3:44:42 PM
Wow, very creative, I enjoyed the read
Out To Get Me (Poetry) - 4/28/2008 3:15:39 PM
Leaves me breathless... ...I so hope you are fine, Kacie. Love and best wishes,
Soundtrack (A Final Memoir) (Poetry) - 4/28/2008 2:40:54 PM
Wow! You've outdone your creative self, Kacie. Nicely done indeed! Thank you for sharing this gift. I send you love and my best wishes,
Control, Halt, Delete (Poetry) - 4/27/2008 11:33:01 AM
Boy, is that last line the truth, lol.
Control, Halt, Delete (Poetry) - 4/24/2008 4:36:11 PM
Ah, all words of wisdom to file away for a needed day....
Be always safe,
Control, Halt, Delete (Poetry) - 4/24/2008 10:21:38 AM
Cleverly expressed. It seems to me that you "speak" from experience, Kacie. And I would hardly classify your verses as "poetic dzzzzzz." Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Gemini (Poetry) - 4/16/2008 3:50:50 PM
First Kacie, let me congratulate you on graduating from high school on D-Day. Maybe it is fitting that your class should graduate on this day, when the Allied forces invaded France on June 6, 1944, and started moving the Nazis back toward Germany. Good luck on your chosen major in college, and not too many parties now, study is very important.
As for this poem, I know exactly where you are coming from. I have lived this masquerade for many decades, and when the "fake" me started to come out, I prayed something would happen to shove her back inside, so I could live the life I needed to live. It usually did. Thank you for sharing this honest part of your soul. You wrote this one very well, and very true.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & hugs, Barbie
Double Double Pile of Rubble (Poetry) - 4/16/2008 9:22:53 AM
The time that has gone by is witness to the sentiments that you expressed when you wrote this, Kacie. Love and best wishes,
The 2'nd Letter (Poetry) - 4/16/2008 9:21:04 AM
It is truly sad that some people can behave in this way. A powerfully emotive write, Kacie. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Gemini (Poetry) - 3/31/2008 2:47:48 PM
Wow, it really built up to a great ending! Michelle
Your Addiction *Revised* (Poetry) - 3/31/2008 12:36:47 PM
A very powerful and honest write, Kacie. Sadly, this is a common theme. I send you love, peace, and my best wishes,
Under Her Bed (Poetry) - 3/31/2008 12:34:54 PM
It is very sad that such truth exists. A compelling write, Kacie. Love and best wishes to you,
Gemini (Poetry) - 3/30/2008 7:55:06 AM
So powerfully and honestly expressed, Kacie. Be true to your "self." It is plain to "get" from what you express that you are a goddess. So. Reign on. Love and best wishes,
Gemini (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 9:49:07 PM
...of two...you pen of one...within two...one is hidden...and in lines of poetry...one finds twins.
well done Kacie...
Gemini (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 1:10:21 PM
Always difficult to know which side of the self to adhere to, guess that is why we sometimes make mistakes. Artfully written...
Be always safe,
Gemini (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 11:53:10 AM
Naaa, looking at your bio, this is third person fiction. Yet tip top notch prose...
Gemini (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 3:30:49 AM
Wise ponderings in "Gemini" make it a poetic-philosophic grand.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Gemini (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 2:43:50 AM
Very well written. Your word usage is excellent. Take my word for it, always listen to that overbearing part of you. That's the part that usually cares about your well-being. Truth lies beyond that mask and truth is the part that gets recognition. Always be true to yourself and life will deal you a winning hand. Peace, Love and God's Blessings Always, Paul.
Cut Off (Poetry) - 3/27/2008 10:17:05 AM
Harsh but real and thus very effective, Kacie. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Cut (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 4:58:30 PM
Very nice poem... I am glad this is in your past and I appreciate such an honest look at "cutting". People don't realize that this happens often in society.
To Dust (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 1:19:10 PM
A wonderful piece reflecting upon that which will be left behind, to search for a new beginning, well done....
Be always safe,
To Dust (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 9:39:26 AM
Time passes quickly, especially as graduation nears and we begin to reflect upon the new roads that will be in our futures. May each road you find be one that brings you closer to your dreams.
All the best,
Beautiful Tricia (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 9:17:10 AM
Bountiful and profound. "Beautiful Tricia" is gratitude and friendship in fraternity.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
To Dust (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 9:12:35 AM
I like this composition... "To Dust" flows on waves of the sea of inner mind. Outstanding painting of thoughts in motion.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Cut (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 8:59:38 AM
Raw and honest, this goes right to the soul of the reader. Love and best wishes to you, Kacie.
To Dust (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 8:56:34 AM
Powerful introspective reflection that can relate to the universal theme of time passing and life's flow. Nicely done, Kacie. It is also fine to read you again. Love and best wishes to you,
Beautiful Tricia (Poetry) - 3/20/2005 11:21:56 AM
Such a sad and heartfelt tribute. I am sorry to be late on commenting but I just accidentally came upon this. My deepest sympathy, Kaci Riann. Love, peace, and strength to you. Regis
Beautiful Tricia (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 2:33:32 AM
Wonderful expression. I am sorry for the loss.
Beautiful Tricia (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 3:27:34 PM
very beautiful picture (of you all)
so sorry for your lost
you have got to believe that her spirit is still her
and that you will meet again
you are doing a wonderful job in keeping her beautiful spirit alive
take care dear heart!!!
Beautiful Tricia (Poetry) - 2/1/2005 6:37:30 AM
well put kaci...tricia was such a humongous loss...i'm gonna save this poem if thats ok with you...i need all the memories i can get. hang in there.
Beautiful Tricia (Poetry) - 1/31/2005 4:06:28 PM
Sorry for your lose... When everything settles down, cherish the memories, they'll last a lifetime...
Beautiful Tricia (Poetry) - 1/31/2005 6:02:20 AM
It always is so sad when a young person dies no matter how they died.
Beautiful Tricia (Poetry) - 1/31/2005 4:16:43 AM
A real sweet pen of such a sad moment in ones life. I'm sure she's read your thoughts. We never know when we're called home, or how our means of getting there delivers it's self. Enjoy the moments you had, and rest ashurd that she'll live forever in your thoughts.
Cut (Poetry) - 6/1/2004 8:54:18 AM
this is an amazing write. the one that brings youfrom the realm of a novice to an artist.
Cut (Poetry) - 5/31/2004 8:31:28 AM
wowzer, hope you are truly better, you're a cute girl, go have a fun life, that's what its all about
Cut (Poetry) - 5/29/2004 4:57:31 PM
Karen: The reason I did this in the first place was to sort out a lot of problems in my life...you can read "Your Addiction" or "Another Jason" or just about all of my poems to see what they are. But when my friend started cutting I realized that it gets me nowhere and I stopped, evry now and then I get an urge, but I haven't cut for 3 months and 6 days.
Retta: Thank you for your kind words, the anguish isn't ALL in the past, but my bad habits are, I rediscovered writing is all.
J. Allen: I particularly found comfort in your review, thank you for reviewing my poem, and commenting on the writing moreso than my problems.
Lori: Thanks bundles for your review, I'm definitely a happier girl these days. I think I got the main message of yoru review even though I don't know what "catharsis" means.
Cut (Poetry) - 5/29/2004 8:17:10 AM
I am glad you are no longer harming yourself, Kaci, but why did you do it in the first place? There are better ways to deal with your pain, and writing is one of the best therapies around! Powerful, hardhitting write!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Cut (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 7:35:12 PM
I am glad this expression of the pain and anguish you felt is in the past, this poem was outstanding,
Cut (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 6:53:14 PM
Excellent statements in this write, which speak of another, more darker side of the psyche. Well written piece.
Cut (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 6:15:47 PM
I'm gldd you are "better" about the old phase. I know how writing can be a wonderful catharsis. Great expression.
Happy (Poetry) - 4/2/2004 4:05:33 PM
A smile goes a lot further than a frown. Keep smilin'!
Happy (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 3:46:57 PM
no reason NOT to be happy... ;)
Happy (Poetry) - 1/29/2004 6:33:50 AM
very well done.
Happy (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 6:41:28 AM
This is a different kind of poem for you kaci, but I like it alot. It's hard to be so happy when everyone else is so sad...
Out To Get Me (Poetry) - 12/9/2003 11:09:01 PM
excellent rant ...
Hell (Poetry) - 11/12/2003 8:46:05 PM
I am very glad that you got away. Now perhaps you know what to do next time. Thank you for this, Kaci.
Hell (Poetry) - 11/11/2003 8:43:18 AM
well done. i think one of your best. very creative.
Hell (Poetry) - 11/10/2003 8:59:07 AM
scary, intense write; glad you are okay, kaci! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :(
Hell (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 10:06:16 PM
hell may be a nice place to visit but i wouldn't want to live there...
expressed very creatively...
Hell (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 7:52:24 PM
I tried a different path, ....I am glad you chose a different path and did not have to stay. This was an excellent write, and food for thought.
Hell (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 5:27:39 PM
hey kaci, nice job, i didn't quite get the meaning...but its a nice peice of work. .::Hugs::.
Hell (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 4:31:12 PM
Very good work, and a great crafty piece too!
Am glad you are one that got away!
Hell (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 4:15:18 PM
I'm glad you got away...
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Hell (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 4:15:17 PM
I am glad he turned you loose this was very good. Kaci
Hell (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 4:13:20 PM
Sounds like you had a hellava time. I'd stay away from there if I were you. Good poem.
Under Her Bed (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 6:33:26 AM
Beautiful write Kaci. Very emotional.
Listless (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 8:38:06 AM
*smiles* I enjoyed this Kaci...p.s. I think rhyming is overrated anyway, but that's just me :-)
Listless (Poetry) - 10/25/2003 2:27:33 AM
Listless (Poetry) - 10/24/2003 7:12:02 PM
Enjoyed reading your write, I'm sure everyone can relate to maost of what you pointed out, welcome.
Listless (Poetry) - 10/24/2003 7:06:53 AM
Hey Kaci, great job, i think this poem is something alot of girls can relate too. its cool that you tried something different from the usual format. keep up the awesome work!
Listless (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 10:19:44 PM
Well it's not true that you are "unloved." This piece of expression is great self-disclosure. I think it takes courage to do that. Be proud of being you. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Regis
Listless (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 8:40:08 PM
Kaci this was very clever and well done!
Listless (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 8:24:41 PM
Top five reviews for you:
2. nice job
Listless (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 7:58:09 PM
Hey Kaci! Stop feeling unloved1 Now, y'hear? I had arrived at
the second stanza before I realised this was a poem. So, I started again and enjoyed the journey from "Go!" to "Whoa!". Brilliant concept and profesionally done! You certainly are versatile and that's good! Give us some more, please.
This one joins some other gems in "my library".
Listless (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 7:43:23 PM
Kaci!!!!!! This is the first I've seen you here in the den... can I say, Welcome!" I really enjoyed this write, and I really love how you ended it with such "hopefulness", on the light side would be a better way to say it... thank you for sharing this... Would you mind if I tried this with the same questions? I think it would be a great challenge, for all of AD.... thanks again, hope to read more of you....
Listless (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 7:13:09 PM
:( nobody loves me:( no reviews:( I feel unloved:(
Under Her Bed (Poetry) - 10/1/2003 9:21:48 AM
Wonderful write, Kaci; well done! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Under Her Bed (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 8:52:11 PM
kaci, this poem is truly a beautiful and very meaningful piece of art, nicely done.
Under Her Bed (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 6:32:44 PM
This was so powerful and sad, beautifully written, I loved this:
Whispers cast her way,
She knows everything that they say,
She hides alone in her own dismay
Nobody thought twice.
Under Her Bed (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 6:26:44 PM
Sorry forgot to ask, what's your favorite stanza!
Your Addiction *Revised* (Poetry) - 9/8/2003 9:29:48 PM
Excellent peace Kaci, a powerful write, my prayers are with your family...
Your Addiction *Revised* (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 7:35:34 PM
onfortunately, this is not very uncommon... be strong, it never gets easier...
Your Addiction *Revised* (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 6:46:55 PM
Excellant work here Kaci WOW! Good luck sincerely to you and your family!
Your Addiction *Revised* (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 4:16:50 PM
wow kaci. this is really good, the words just flow so perfect, I agree with u in that this is one of your best pieces. keep up the good work! luvs----*sarah*
Your Addiction *Revised* (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 2:47:04 PM
excellent piece, kaci; best of luck to you and your family; y'all are in my thoughts and prayers. ((((HUGS)))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :(
Your Addiction *Revised* (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 12:23:42 PM
Tough love can only go so far.
Nice piece, Kaci.
Your Addiction *Revised* (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 12:21:03 PM
Wow!! This says EXACTLY what's happening with my brother right now..and how we feel. It was so well written. I recently posted one called "A Thin Line Between Love And Hate"
Thanks for sharing this..
Good luck to you and your family.
Sophie Tucker (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 7:39:01 PM
You may not believe this, but I know how you feel, I lost my dog not to long ago too...As long as Sophie always has a special place in you're heart,everything will turn out ok. Luv ya Kaci!------Sarah
Sophie Tucker (Poetry) - 6/24/2003 3:50:55 PM
Oh, that is so sad, this was such a lovely tribute, I am so sorry you lost your beloved dog,
Sophie Tucker (Poetry) - 6/24/2003 2:32:05 AM
Sophie Tucker (Poetry) - 6/23/2003 7:59:45 PM
very heart touching. Sorry for your lose
Sophie Tucker (Poetry) - 6/23/2003 5:36:30 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! Poor Sophie Tucker! NOW... maybe someone that loves ya... OR a man that wants your heart will buy you a new puppy to make you feel better. Poor doggie...That is so sad :`(
Sophie Tucker (Poetry) - 6/23/2003 5:05:16 PM
Sad, but well expressed...sorry for your loss..good write...
Sophie Tucker (Poetry) - 6/23/2003 4:54:44 PM
i'm sorry about sophie...it's so hard when we lose someone we love (and pets are people, too--at least they think they are)
i miss my beezers (spitz) and sultan (1/2 wolf/1/2 chow) *dogs* and my kitties i've had over the years...dipsh**, garfield, friday...cajun...*snif*
((((HUGS)))) lovely pic and tribute to her
Sophie Tucker (Poetry) - 6/23/2003 4:53:23 PM
so sorry for your loss of your beloved sophie tucker. a heartfelt tribute to a special dog who was lucky enough to have you in her life! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :( >tears <
The Rain (Poetry) - 6/1/2003 6:17:08 PM
being able to go out in the rain for fun takes a different kind of person. most look at it as a spoiler. guess where i'll be next time the puddles form?
Cut Off (Poetry) - 5/24/2003 5:14:24 PM
I'm sorry you were cut off...hopefully, we'll see you back soon. Good write!
Cut Off (Poetry) - 5/9/2003 10:09:06 PM
Kaci! I like this one, just think, you'll get it back in a bit, and you can always come to me with your venting. :) hope all is well,
The Rain (Poetry) - 5/8/2003 12:53:59 PM
Kaci, This poem was lots of FUN! I just adore it ... made me smile! I love summer thunder showers with lots of lightning.
Cut Off (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 12:21:59 PM
vent dear, vent away..
Optimist (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 7:56:41 AM
Kaci, I really liked this! The last two stanzas are my favourites. ~Joseph
Cut Off (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 5:37:50 AM
Kaci, good one. Now your back.
Cut Off (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 9:00:52 PM
Ah me, I felt this one, I would be quite lost without my internet!
Cut Off (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 8:52:42 PM
Keep it up.
The Wall (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 12:17:09 AM
I feel...Dead (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 12:01:17 PM
Imagination rings the bell of knowledge; art respond to intuition, emotions reaches the
heart... The Poet interprets the sounds, poemizes the feelings and dares to poetize a new
form, and "I feel...Dead” is live! I read it, I feel it, I learn from it, and I say, EUREKA!
A true Poet is commanding the CLASS!
I greet You, Poet Kaci Riann, You are a true picture of real Poet!
Blest be Your heart.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I feel...Dead (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 1:06:21 AM
Stepping out of your comfort zone is good for you. Try it more often. A comfort zone only locks you out of all your possibilities.Good expression.
I feel...Dead (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 9:52:17 PM
This is a fantastic poem!
I feel...Dead (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 8:17:03 PM
always explore new structural modes and poetic veins of thought and you will be successful as you are in this poem... well done!
I feel...Dead (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 7:41:19 PM
Excellent, Kaci. It's great to try new styles. A lot of poets get stuck in one style and one theme.
I feel...Dead (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 7:40:53 PM
This was a wonderful poem and it awesoem that you expanding you type of genres I try to also
I feel...Dead (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 5:54:16 PM
Its great that you are expanding in your attempts. Great write and I am looking forward to reading more.
I feel...Dead (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 5:51:59 PM
wonderful poem, good for you to try all genre's, this makes a well rounded poet.
I feel...Dead (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 4:12:39 PM
Excellent poem kaci! It flowed perfectly!
The Rain (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 8:45:31 AM
Nice Kaci, a lady of action. I like action. you r a rhymer.
The Rain (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 6:16:55 PM
The Rain (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 5:36:42 PM
Your Addiction (Poetry) - 4/3/2003 8:35:06 PM
When I saw the title I had to come and check this out, I wrote a piece called "My Demon" on this same topic. You handled it well. Good one. Mal.
Optimist (Poetry) - 4/3/2003 8:33:25 PM
I really enjoyed your use of repetition, I love rhyme when it is done well. Great write. Mal.
Optimist (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 8:39:57 AM
Kaci,I love this one, great write, keep it up gurly!
Optimist (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 3:50:58 PM
great poem kc, even though i'm not sure what an optimist is I think ur poem helped me get an idea!
Optimist (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 6:07:51 AM
Excellent write from you...BHUWAN
Optimist (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 9:35:30 PM
i like your sense of optimism...
Optimist (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 5:54:14 PM
Optimist (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 5:46:29 PM
Beautifully written. You tell how it is. Your own way. Great poem!!!
Optimist (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 5:15:37 PM
Hey I have a challenge! I would like pessimist's, optimists, Sadistics, and those who are all around to wrte a poem about what they do not do and what they do to replace that. It should be fun!
Optimist (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 5:01:17 PM
that was great! (and this is coming from a pessimist...heh)
Agression, Depression, Happiness (Poetry) - 3/5/2003 10:42:47 AM
for one-i don't really like to cry. partly because at my house i'm not really allowed to cry (dad) and partly because i know things will get better. They always do. no matter what the problem is... I know you hate me for it but "i laugh because i must not cry"-Abe Lincoln. But sometimes i do feel like i'm gonna explode....
I love....... (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 10:39:38 AM
this is super funny!!!!i totaly agree about sappy b-f's. It rarely happens but it's worth looking for
Headrush (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 2:25:42 PM
Nice write. I agree with you, I like the first.
Headrush (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 1:34:59 PM
Poems that just flow out are some of the very best I think. You did well here, I have also read through some of your other poems and have enjoyed what I've read. Nice work!
Headrush (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 1:22:26 PM
Definately the first and last (which are identical). Like I said, sometimes the unfinished, is polished and done ;) This was very expressive. Sounds like many of my beginning pieces. Put together nicely. I know what you mean, it just flows from up there (points at head) to down there (points to fingers). Don't try to explain it because you can't ;)
Headrush (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 1:05:26 PM
i love it all, kaci! thanks for sharing this! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) happy 2003! :)
The Wall (Poetry) - 1/1/2003 1:04:21 PM
Good Write Kaci, and you conqured that writer's block, I believe... ;) I like.
The Wall (Poetry) - 1/1/2003 2:51:59 AM
The Wall (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 7:48:20 PM
Actually, I have concocted a little healing method for Writer's Block. Go to the newsletter section and the first article is on it, entirely. It's very good. Oh, and your poem DOES NOT stink ;)
*- Brittany -*
The Wall (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 7:12:49 PM
It will go and you will write like the champion you are. Bill Murray
Happy New Year.
The Wall (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 2:21:37 PM
Excellant :) Happy New Year .. j
Natural Disaster (Poetry) - 12/13/2002 8:09:17 PM
Timothy's 9/11 speech (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 8:18:45 AM
ive heard this before be you its great
Believe (Poetry) - 12/10/2002 7:46:51 PM
good job.Creativity rules!