Edge of California (ex. 4) (Article) - 12/12/2002 8:33:15 AM
i like it.
i thought the conversation would bore me (im not a big conversation reader) but it was actually really interesting. nice job brian
Edge of California (ex. 2) (Article) - 9/5/2002 5:19:22 PM
hey... i only had time to read this one. but will get back to the next to parts soon! it was good. the only thing i dont like so far is the fact that you use etc. so often. it gets sort of irritating. but other than that, i really like it. it has a great flow and really good imagery. nice job