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Recent Reviews for Patricia A Boudreau
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The Gray Dorm (Short Story) - 5/2/2004 8:41:05 PM
Great story!!!love it...i waaaaant more from ya ;).
The Gray Dorm (Short Story) - 2/4/2003 3:03:40 PM
very good story, patricia! enjoyed~
The Gray Dorm (Short Story) - 2/4/2003 2:33:10 PM
Tricia, Jerry is right. this is a very good story that does make you want to read more.
It may have been a gray dorm but that little girl saw so much more.
Very nice story.
I hope to be readin more from you.
Glenna
The Gray Dorm (Short Story) - 2/3/2003 4:39:04 PM
I like it a lot- The poet in the author keeps popping up, refusing to be upstaged by the short story writer.Do nuns have feet? I like that paragraph, especially. The last of the story shows a very sensitive thoughtful young girl and makes us want the rest of the story- what happened to her? How did she relate and interact with the other girls and teachers? Did they meet boys? Adventures. Give us some more, Tricia- Jerry
A Gargoyle's Tears (Poetry) - 11/6/2008 1:28:02 PM
I love this poem. I like gargoyles, and your poem captures them beautifully. Is it possible to post it on my blog? With your name on it of course. If not, I understand. Thank you.
October Rust (Poetry) - 9/1/2004 4:16:35 PM
Without Dreams (Physical) You Have Nothing But Wintry Wind_
Unique N Different Write Almost romantic!
TRASK
Where Do Soldiers Go (Poetry) - 5/2/2004 8:37:54 PM
Such a touching poem,it proves that u have a heart of gold!
"Friends who have touched our lives,remain forever in our hearts----
Friends like--you!
A Wish (Poetry) - 5/2/2004 8:22:23 PM
The poem is just -WOW!touched my heart!You are the bestest poetess :)love ya.
Where Do Soldiers Go (Poetry) - 5/2/2004 12:55:16 PM
Tricia, such 'felt'/'honest' questions from the hear, mind, guts/anger/pain, caring/concern...
A Beautiful, Haunting, devasrting work from the depths, real questions written so well..
You know how I feel about the extraordinary mixture of emotions, this timely and ancient, as well piece, is one which should give pause to Anyone reading it...
You, my Gifted, Carin, Questioning Friend...
(((Tricia))))
so perfectly done and, it...I don't know what to say, makes images, thoughts and emotions come into the reader, extraordinary, yes--
as are you...
The comments here, prove to me what an amazing Affect you have has...
Hurts...I agree w/Mountain Poet -- I, too hope, it is as the 'same place your beautiful words come from'...
I love you...
mich
Where Do Soldiers Go (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 2:04:44 PM
Where Do Soldiers Go (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 9:18:35 AM
Sigh, perhaps, Trish, it all reaches back to the likes of my ancestors, the Vikings, who thought the ONLY way to reach Valhalla was to die in battle, as a warrior. Even the teachers of those commandments do not equate, for our well-being, the act of waging war with "Thou shalt not kill." So many poems have now been posted about this war and every aspect has been spoken of.. until now! Yours rings unique, creative and with a thought-provoking element I have not seen. Oh, yes, and as an aside, I am sitting here with tears streaming down my face to have you back in my "company"... dear heart, welcome back. love, katy xox.
Where Do Soldiers Go (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 8:05:24 PM
I had a cousin over there in the first war. Now one of my good friends is over there. I hope to God he comes back alive, too. If soldiers go anywhere, I hope it's the same place your beautiful words come from.
Where Do Soldiers Go (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 4:45:40 PM
A moving write. I wish we all had the answers.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Where Do Soldiers Go (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 2:29:41 PM
These are poignant questions, Patricia. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis
Where Do Soldiers Go (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 1:15:21 PM
This one is so powerful and I missed reading you!!!!
Excellent Tribute poem to them........
Where Do Soldiers Go (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 12:13:10 PM
A touch of pathos in those lines, and questions hard to answer.
Listen (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 7:02:35 PM
Very sweet sentiment, very well said! Jerry
The Sinking (Poetry) - 8/24/2003 5:35:29 PM
Such ships as these do arouse the mind and touch the soul.
~Jackie~
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 7/19/2003 7:37:31 PM
Fine tribute to courage by a fine poet from Maine. My buddy, Tricia- Jerry
Emotionless Emotion (Poetry) - 6/14/2003 7:24:30 PM
Painful and bleak, but that very good mind will figure out how to proceed- as you did. Good stuff, Tricia- Jerry
A Wish (Poetry) - 6/14/2003 7:19:33 PM
You have such a fine way with words and your content is always solid and real. I love the way you write,gal!! Jerry
Reflections (Poetry) - 6/14/2003 7:15:10 PM
Damn good, Tricia! Sweet moments you'll have many of in your new home. Jerry
Earth Dancer (Poetry) - 6/6/2003 6:05:49 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Tricia- flows so fine- destiny rides...winds of chance. I love it! Jerry
Glory (Poetry) - 6/6/2003 5:58:51 PM
I like this, Tricia- Win, lose or draw, the glory will be there, on all sides. Jerry
The Sinking (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 10:17:49 AM
WOW! Great write here Patricia.
Glenna
The Sinking (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 1:56:45 PM
good write dear poet. when the ship sinks, so does the captain. but in life, we all are survivors.
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 4:11:01 AM
A very beautiful tribute....Your writing is truly wonderful..Ty, Dani
Dream Weave A Notion (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 3:41:23 PM
Sweet fiend micha or sweet friend?freudian slip?lol-
also- heavens- Beauty of a poem- seamless- you too must think alike. Thanks- Jerry
Into Wonderland (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 3:33:33 PM
I really like this poem. succinct and vulnerable, Tricia. Jerry
Haunted Memories (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 5:48:48 PM
Oh, damn...Tricia, I...this is so beautiful and it, it hurts, aches, hurts...and I...oh...just thank you, you have such a gift, I may be near tears, but, well, thank you... for your gift
and for you, how grateful I am for (((You)))
this is so beautifully written, yet this pain...all too real, bravo, Tricia! Oh....
The Planned Obsolescence of Destiny (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 12:38:45 AM
Oh, you have said this with passion and more, very thought provoking, moving one to stop...and only hope for the best...wonderfully done...'playing God with a hand wielding a power it can't understand' oh! +++++++
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 12:30:23 AM
yup, oh or a good friend, ahyuh... to talk to, even when she's so far away...then again, there's always me 'n'charlie (rose) BUT...he's not on Saturday Nights, so I am often dateless, and he talks a lot, so it can help keep me quiet, lol...oh, Trish, really, there is much truth here, and when PBS started running commercials, one really started going, huh? this, in any case, was quite well done and although I admit to needing the Zzzzzz effect, upon occasion...this, this has much to say and says well, very, very well...ah, the almighty $...Sigh~
love your work, and the author!
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/19/2003 11:50:35 PM
Well written !
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 2/19/2003 6:13:06 PM
ahhh, the opiate of the masses.....very good!!!
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 10:04:16 AM
Beautiful old friend...
Man in the Moon and I (Poetry) - 2/6/2003 6:37:45 PM
being a well adjusted lunatic myself,i can relate very well...you an the moon did nice with this one!!!
Haunted Memories (Poetry) - 2/6/2003 6:36:06 PM
wow! do i know you?
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/5/2003 8:51:10 PM
sometimes we must commandere the ship...very good!!!
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/5/2003 9:54:32 AM
A meaningful 'borrowing' from Mr. Whitman, indeed.. but that's not what this is about.. I took senior lifesaving as a kid.. you go under those waves, Tricia, I'm there! And now, I sit here weeping for the utter beauty and depth with which you have told this, I fear, auto-biographically. I cannot bear to think of you this sad. katy.
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/4/2003 6:12:34 PM
graceful & heartrending
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/4/2003 5:56:17 PM
oh, and the pain, such pain...still, my friend, so beautifully etched, flowing within your wondrous way, you...oh, just, well...the beauty so caprures those sightless eyes and the emptiness wrenched from one...love you so much, and always, your work, too!
mi
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/2/2003 8:56:38 PM
Excellent write
so good.
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/2/2003 6:44:33 PM
Excellent! well constructed!
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/2/2003 6:42:18 PM
silence can be golden ;)
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/2/2003 6:18:03 PM
My captain oh my captain I have just read a great poem!! great job!! Liked it alot!
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 2/2/2003 5:41:41 PM
Thanks a nice tribute.....
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/2/2003 5:37:21 PM
very well done Pat.
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/2/2003 4:55:33 PM
2-02-03
Whence You Give Up . It You Are Already Dead!
TRASK
The Sinking (Poetry) - 2/2/2003 4:53:57 PM
Very poetic, Patricia ;)
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 2/2/2003 3:41:17 AM
We will overcome and we will never forget.
Tears for this beautiful tribute.
Jill
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 10:27:36 PM
Oh, Pat...(((trisha)))
thank you... and yes, a beautiful tribute...
you ... and god, yes, the families...again, bless you, good, kind friend and wonderful poet...you have said what many of us couldn't...(((you)))
mich
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 10:24:00 PM
Beautiful tribute Patricia.
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 9:32:44 PM
Beautiful tribute... well done!!!
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 9:07:44 PM
2-01-03
Miost Excellent! Thank You Your Comments!
TRASK
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 8:38:20 PM
Timely and touching and well written...thank you
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 7:38:36 PM
A sweet and well written tribute.
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 7:36:04 PM
Pat,
Thank you for sharing, this is by far the most moving thing I've read concerning this tragic day.
David
Dream Weave A Notion (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 7:23:03 PM
Ahhh, what minds can do when they blend.. when they share. The last 8 lines gave me tears.. the entire poem made me smile, to be in the company of such wordsmiths. This is how we grow wings and truly fly. sigh. Lovely. katy.
Look to the Skies (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 7:17:01 PM
Oh, my, how utterly, utterly moving this is. You have a heart spun of gold and a mind woven of pure magic. You have honored these people, as you always honor us in the den. Simply beyond words. Love, katy.
Dream Weave A Notion (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 4:55:01 PM
In dreams eveything is possible. In the light of day, many dreams vanish into
nothing. Maybe a recurring dream might be achieved. Who knows? Bill
Dream Weave A Notion (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 4:32:09 PM
I love the motion of a dream-weaved notion. Sometimes it's better than a fine brewed potion.
Dream Weave A Notion (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 4:09:30 PM
Excellent poetry.
Dream Weave A Notion (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 11:53:06 AM
This is simply fantastic! Great work, you two.
Dream Weave A Notion (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 9:53:44 AM
Oooh!! I love this!! You both have done and Excellent job writing together, and Wow!! I am looking forward to much more from you both!!
Hugs,
Maria
Dream Weave A Notion (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 9:43:18 AM
A j ourney of beauty
Peggy
Dream Weave A Notion (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 7:12:50 AM
What a rthymic flow and beautiful imagery it is such a great journey of dreams wanting to be fulfilled this was a great poem nice job!!
Clear Skies (Poetry) - 1/29/2003 2:07:50 PM
And a poet flourishes, plying her art, under those same umbrella skies. Clean and fresh. Thanks, Tricia. Jerry-
Free Thought (Poetry) - 1/29/2003 2:02:08 PM
Sweet, fine insight! Shows a mind that understands whimsy! Keep 'em coming, Trish- Jerry
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/25/2003 6:31:27 PM
Tricia,
I have felt this way many times.
This poem brought back many many feelings...
So I would rather not remember.
But it also brought back a good one...
The feeling of freedom when no longer surrounded by the walls.
This is a wonderful write.
Glenna
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/25/2003 11:36:58 AM
Trish- They weren't put up overnight; they won't come down overnight- I know the walls you mean. I had to level mine with a move- physical, dynamic. This is a hell of a good poem! Describes what many of us have felt but didn't know how to describe. One suggestion, Trish. In the second verse, you might want to add an "s" to friend. Thanks for the good writing. Jerry
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 6:07:04 PM
What a rollicking, rockin', rollin', robust round of rhyme you've got here! You tell 'em, Trish.. give 'em enough cable and they will hang themselves! (em.. except for Discovery and A&E.. I like those.. tehe). God, even the Weather channel is more entertaining than most of it.. ah, well..This is yet another bright star in your glittering sky of great poetry. katy.
Storm (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 5:58:17 PM
Jaysus.. this is amazing! a work of art, and I mean 'visual' art.. I'm in awe of how you can move me, any reader, to the eye of this storm.. IM THERE! God, you're good! katy.
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 5:54:30 PM
Oh, Trish.. such a feeling of desolation.. I can feel my hand on your shoulder, hoping it might bring some sort of comfort.. it takes the kind of word-magic you have to allow us into even your deepest places.. but, please, don't let this be today for you. I don't want you to feel such pain. Not you. katy.
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 3:37:42 PM
Hi Patricia,
Nice to read your words again they are always awesome,
Best wishes from
Kay
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 2:15:37 PM
Intense write Patricia...emotional read with the format excellent work!
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 1:18:04 PM
Very nice work, Patricia. I enjoyed the sense of place in this piece. Nice form and line breaks. Much enjoyed, thank you.
Be well,
Michael
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 1:00:25 PM
oh, Tricia..
(((You)))
those walls, yes, i know them...and I KNOW...YOU WILL BREAK THROUGH...
this, yes, I...it is felt (that fear/the realization that they were THERE...more pain and then...God, the rsolution and prayer to be set free...yes, oh, my friend...and...and just, this, thank you...and it is well done, has a rhythm, as it ...builds and comes to it's inevitable climax...oh, God...again, you WRITE...and so honestly, as a heart beating-beating and...I say, Bravo!
(((You))) my inspiration, friend and wonderful Poet...I ...thank you!
(yes!+++++) I so hope to see...more...it helps...yes? (me, too ;-)!!!!!
Love,
mich
Into Wonderland (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 12:59:06 PM
Wow I really liked this one
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 12:57:39 PM
I felt panic and watched my own walls then realized in a slow fog that sometimes the walls are the fears and doubts we place on ourselves
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 12:28:51 PM
Excellent moving of the emotions through your well chosen and arranged words.
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 12:00:08 PM
I know the feeling, and you have described it, and gave "feeling" to it in this poem! Excellent Write!
Hugs,
Maria
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 9:45:27 AM
Wow! Fantastic write, Patricia, I caught myself glancing at my walls...
:)
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 8:33:44 AM
I felt the increasing panic as the poem goes on...very manipulative and very, very good!
The Walls (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 8:16:18 AM
Nicely done.
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 6:44:45 AM
Gave it up years ago.. Muc hbetter with wing in my face nature at my eyes.. Well done..
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 1/23/2003 3:57:14 AM
TV is an escape and usually not a good one. Like your poem very much.
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 9:52:16 PM
tv promotes the illusion...
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 6:00:13 PM
...the ssslip of pages turning
I like the way you started rolling from "cash" thru to "Junction!!", like a drumbeat twirling down from a steady rhythm to the single cymbal being eased out with the brushes.
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 4:52:33 PM
Very nice!
Jack
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 4:19:01 PM
This is terrific, Tricia! I didn't know you did social, cultural commentary. You do it with a keen eye for crap! Really like it. I have a couple of suggestions:line 8- mash; line 12-roll, line 22- moonlit--Question mark to finish your poem off? I sure hope you do some more like this. You're very good at it. Jerry
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 3:46:23 PM
*grins* ain't it the truth. only t.v. i watch is the news (that's bad enough), the weather channel (gotta have it!) and "american idol" (ONCE in a while). hysterical write...no wonder many of us are boobs--watchin' the tube. :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 3:03:17 PM
Now I remember why I don't have cable.
Death By the Tube (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 2:54:13 PM
Kind of like death by lethal injection: TV IV! Great poem!
Storm (Poetry) - 1/10/2003 6:47:05 PM
excellent imagery!
Storm (Poetry) - 1/10/2003 2:48:06 PM
loved the imagery and expressions...wondrous!
Storm (Poetry) - 1/10/2003 2:01:51 PM
Windy and wild, Patricia! I love storms, and your images were wonderful!
Erin
:)
Storm (Poetry) - 1/10/2003 1:45:57 PM
felt the intensity of the storm while reading this...the imagery is fantastic, so is the word crafting. excellent! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Storm (Poetry) - 1/10/2003 12:26:26 PM
outstanding imagery in this! felt all the fury of the storm as i read this intense write! beautiful write; thanks for sharing!
Storm (Poetry) - 1/10/2003 10:20:25 AM
Love the last phase. This was really well written.
Storm (Poetry) - 1/10/2003 10:03:40 AM
evoke in me the sudden violence of the storm, the human reaction, abd the sudden bkested calm following.
good show !
john+
October Rust (Poetry) - 1/9/2003 5:07:28 PM
I especially love the last verse, Trish! It just doesn't get any better. I agree with Katy and if you'll take me, I'll live inside your head, too. lol-
She Watches (Poetry) - 1/9/2003 4:55:17 PM
Rhythm, rhyme, beauty, love, longing. Fine piece, Tricia.
Facing Forward (Poetry) - 1/9/2003 4:50:45 PM
A great poem! A great philosophy! Much wisdom!
The Planned Obsolescence of Destiny (Poetry) - 1/9/2003 4:46:58 PM
Very good insight and depth here, Tricia- I like the format, too.
Listen (Poetry) - 1/1/2003 10:24:10 AM
Wonderfully written-by a wonderful friend!
Earth Dancer (Poetry) - 1/1/2003 10:21:35 AM
You've done it again old friend!
The Planned Obsolescence of Destiny (Poetry) - 1/1/2003 10:18:41 AM
Man is the most dangerous of all beasts. As Mark Twain said: "Man is the only animal that blushes-or needs to".
The Planned Obsolescence of Destiny (Poetry) - 12/28/2002 10:09:24 AM
I rarely if ever use the word perfect, but it fits here Patricia...You have reduced to a few words a complex matter, with clarity and perfection! Bravo!
The Planned Obsolescence of Destiny (Poetry) - 12/28/2002 9:00:23 AM
So long as he can ... mankind will try to improve on nature ... it seems that this is a deep need in the recesses of his ID. Bill Murray
The Planned Obsolescence of Destiny (Poetry) - 12/28/2002 5:01:50 AM
Someone needs to clone this.
The Planned Obsolescence of Destiny (Poetry) - 12/28/2002 4:58:49 AM
This is so true and I can relate to it.
Keep writing!
Glenna
Earth Dancer (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 8:38:51 PM
This is beautiful. I loved it. It embraced the reader with such charm and passion and such soothing words with melody. Brilliant!
Happy New Year!!
*-Brittany-*
Earth Dancer (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 6:59:22 PM
Loved the imagery of this piece.
Earth Dancer (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 5:39:40 PM
wonderful imagery...captivating write...
Earth Dancer (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 2:26:01 PM
Wonderful poetic images.
Earth Dancer (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 11:43:49 AM
good write -- great initial image:
"The earth is a dancer
dressed in blue
swirling white scarves in the sun."
absolutely smashing!
john+
Listen (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 9:35:07 AM
Definitely inspiring and so wonderfully written!
Gods and Goddesses Bless
~Nikki~
Listen (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 4:06:19 AM
Very inspirational indeed! It is said that we all have an angel on each of our shoulders.
Happy New Year!
Sandie Angel :o)
Listen (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 10:53:29 PM
Just perfect... and believe me, I am all ears.
Listen (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 6:25:01 PM
This poetic piece is inspiring~*
Listen (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 4:43:02 PM
I heard the swish of angels wings as I read this;-)lovely write!
Listen (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 4:22:36 PM
12-26-02
Most Excellent!
TRASK
Listen (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 4:02:15 PM
Beautifully written with softness creeping behind it with a melody so sweet and harmonious as well we appreciate the love threaded to sew the words together. Patricia, a job well done.
Happy New Year!!
*-Brittany-*
Facing Forward (Poetry) - 12/25/2002 5:37:10 PM
12-25-02
You Make The Best Of What You Have Got,i.e. So Many, Millions Brcause Of Greed, Have Literally Nothing__Zero...
As Tomorrow Truly May Never Come Too Pass...
TRASK
Facing Forward (Poetry) - 12/25/2002 3:20:19 PM
Excellent imagery....well done!
Facing Forward (Poetry) - 12/25/2002 9:55:21 AM
So hard Patricia to turn away from the past and march forward. I hope you do not have the same problem I have in doing it. This is a very reflective writing. Your work is always very good. Merry Christmas. Bill Murray
Change (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 9:27:33 PM
I liked this, very nice Patricia!
Jack
Change (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 8:38:18 PM
I really don't know why this little poem is so special but it is Patricia. I guess it gives me a special feeling inside like a mysterious tingling inside my heart. Bill
Murray
Change (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 6:06:37 PM
Knockdown dragout good, Tricia. The rhythm, the beat, the content- all perfect. Really good poem! Thanks-
Change (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 5:57:26 PM
Loved this!!! When the Spirit calls us to change we can feel it everywhere!
Change (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 5:12:14 PM
the winds of change are powerful as this poem portrays...
Change (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 8:39:25 AM
mmm, this was one of my favourite poems today, I love it when the wind blows through the trees at the bottom of my garden. I disappear into dream mode...mind you, windy weather also wips uo kids and they are more noisy on those days.....sorry for the useless piece of knowledge!
Change (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 6:39:13 AM
True beauty in the words.
Out of Despair (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 6:08:24 AM
"...eyes wet with sight..."
What a perfect statement! Bravo.
Change (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 6:07:04 AM
Succinct, succulent and splendid.
Change (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 5:58:45 AM
Wonderful work, and description of that place for change.
Change (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 5:54:22 AM
Excellent...I love that last line "my footsteps echo...change".
Amor
Out of Despair (Poetry) - 12/14/2002 6:08:07 AM
A fine, strong, come from the heart and soul-poem. Really good one, Trish! In every way, content and form, you strut your stuff! Jerry
Out of Despair (Poetry) - 12/13/2002 11:42:43 AM
A wonderful inspirational write. There's so much strength in this one!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Out of Despair (Poetry) - 12/13/2002 5:55:43 AM
Wonderful wonderful write!!!!
Out of Despair (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 11:46:25 PM
you do rhyme like the real thing, you do poetry so that it flies off the page in perfection. a w e s o m e
Out of Despair (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 7:23:26 PM
I have felt this way many times.
This a GREAT write!
Glenna
Out of Despair (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 6:56:17 PM
OH, Trish.. this had to have been a truly cleansing write for you.. it is moving and filled with those demons..but I could feel that walk back to the light.. you have a real gift for expressing those places we sometimes try to ignore. Just super! katy.
Out of Despair (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 5:13:20 PM
This is an awesome poem. It really puts imagery in the reader's mind which, of course, livens up a poem anytime! Good write Ms. Boudreau ;)
Brittany Renee
Out of Despair (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 5:05:35 PM
wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, this is great and all I can say is wow.
Reflections (Poetry) - 12/10/2002 6:29:03 AM
Sweet and angelic! It's amazing the way God knows everything that is going to happen and yet we write our own pages in life. . we have the choice of whether to be happy or sad and that decision is made through reflecting (especially in the morning). Your poetry is right on target! Thumbs up! Soaring ten!
Reflections (Poetry) - 12/10/2002 6:21:14 AM
You have said "Good Morning" to my mind. Bravo!
Reflections (Poetry) - 12/10/2002 5:18:56 AM
This is a great write. This also reminds me of my own poem: "Pieces of Me".
It's in my own website:
http://sandie_1308.tripod.com
Sandie Angel :o)
A Gargoyle's Tears (Poetry) - 12/8/2002 6:35:55 AM
My friend, Katy sent me to this poem. Now, I owe her a big kiss for turning me on to excellance.
Into Wonderland (Poetry) - 12/8/2002 6:33:58 AM
Potent poetry perfectly penned.
The Birdhouse (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 6:29:23 PM
Creates a cozy homeplace where I wish I'd spent more of my days- and nights- I could sit in that chair now and be happy- and still-Jerry
The Old Rock Wall (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 6:05:19 PM
Some fine lines, as always, but doesn't quite deliver, for me. Jerry
Come Away (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 6:01:31 PM
Haunting...lyrical...lovely...nostalgic...Jerry
Dreamcatcher (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 5:52:13 PM
A very nice piece, Trish. Wondrous; random thought? Jerry
Your Fantasy (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 5:48:36 PM
A terrific piece of writing! Brilliant on several different levels. I think this woman should be the poet laureate of Maine. And I'm serious- she's that good!!!
Wolfen (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 5:43:57 PM
Fine plea for the wild ones, Tricia. Very effective and heartfelt. Jerry
The Prophets View (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 5:39:39 PM
I agree with Katy!! And the funny part is- you're good wherever you go!!lol- Jerry
Restless Days (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 5:33:51 PM
A good piece on a subject every thoughtful person covers, at one time or another. It's honest and open and I like it, Tricia. Jerry
Destiny (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 5:28:42 PM
Outstanding, Tricia! One of your best, I think. Great job! Jerry
Into Wonderland (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 7:02:00 PM
Patricia,
So powerful, this is. Sometimes, when my "Life Keys" have been hopelessly lost--when ultimately discovered, I have gotten the feeling in reflection, that I was simply being called to sincerely "embrace" despare--allowing it to move through me rather than fighting it--that's when it always seems the lights come on. Confounding, but so true for me. -- Thanks for your rousing support of my work, too! Vicky
Into Wonderland (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 6:31:11 PM
12-0602
Only One Key It's Your Heart Open's Door!
TRASK
Destiny (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 10:35:11 AM
We sometimes get overwhelmed by 'could have beens' and 'should have beens'- and I am guilty as any.
The Birdhouse (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 10:31:39 AM
Good stuff luv!
She Watches (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 10:30:09 AM
What can I say but excellent my friend.
Haunted Memories (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 10:27:48 AM
Hang in there old friend-time is the only healer!
Haunted Memories (Poetry) - 12/5/2002 8:00:55 PM
Wow!
Haunted Memories (Poetry) - 12/5/2002 7:12:08 PM
12-05-02
For I Am Clean,Good, I Am Gracious, I Am Kind, I Am All That Is In The Eye's Of (God)___
For Your Just Reward's Are Not In Of This Physical World,i.e With Out Dream's We Would Never Make It, It As Good memories Keeps Us Alive!
TRASK Thanks For Your Comments!
Haunted Memories (Poetry) - 12/5/2002 7:01:37 PM
"the tides of memories that crash my mind and empty through my eyes. Beautiful...poignant...yearning for what once was all you ever wanted? My Maine wolf- lady you sure can write!
Haunted Memories (Poetry) - 12/5/2002 6:55:36 PM
Excellent work, Patricia. Loved the lines.
Amor
Haunted Memories (Poetry) - 12/5/2002 5:56:29 PM
It does seem at times that our lives are but scraps of memories, and when the wind blows, we scramble to save them from disappearing with the breeze.
Haunting write.
Destiny (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 12:17:20 AM
sorry to hear iong losy kiss,,,,
Destiny (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 9:08:12 PM
12-02-02
Best Way To Tell Destiny Is: What Would You & Your Life Rather Be Doing (?) But, You Are Not Doing Just That What Want To Do and/or Be!
TRASK PS: (God) Is Always In Control Not You Or Any Other Human Being,i.e. Of Your Destiny!
Destiny (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 8:51:23 PM
Patricia,
A standing ovation to you, lady.
All elements outstading! Vicky
Destiny (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 8:18:37 PM
yes, all those might have beens if only I had had the guts -- you give voice to something i have certainly experienced!
well done !!!
Destiny (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 7:39:13 PM
WoW! So true this is.
Thanks and yes, very
thought provoking.
Destiny (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 7:26:12 PM
Wow! I liked this. Very nice!
Jack
She Watches (Poetry) - 12/1/2002 11:35:38 AM
So many are left watching and waiting at the end of the shore. Millions and millions are waiting for someone who won't come back no more. A beautiful poem from a beautiful heart. Bill Murray
She Watches (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 11:48:25 PM
This is beautiful, I like it when they rhyme and you do it very well.
Jack
She Watches (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 11:41:37 PM
The sea can be a mystery...lovely write...
She Watches (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 11:38:43 PM
Her sailor and she are together........
Nicely done
Restless Days (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 11:19:44 PM
This is a Very nice write! I especially like the last verse.
Jack
The Birdhouse (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 7:28:46 PM
I enjoyed this very much.
The Birdhouse (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 8:15:36 AM
Very nice poem and thoughts.
The Birdhouse (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 6:48:32 AM
Excellent poetry I love birds that dwell in yards... UI have several I take care of in the sky....Peggy
Imagery excellent as always...
The Birdhouse (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 5:36:09 AM
What a nice poem for me to wake up to! Yes, New wings for my day.
A Wish (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 2:43:35 PM
"The poorest man in the world is a mn without a dream." This is a saying that I take credit for written years ago. I have never seen it anywhere else. Such a lovely insightful poem. Bill Murray
A Wish (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 7:00:08 AM
Beautiful Patricia.
Everyone should see the
world thru your eyes.
10+
A Wish (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 6:58:51 AM
This is poetic perfection in rhyme, meter and flow. Beautiful content, Patricia. This is so well polished it shines.
Amor
A Wish (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 6:37:56 AM
Pat the imagery anf flow and message are so beautiful together...
Peg
Snow Dreams (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 7:08:54 PM
fantastic voice & flow...
Snow Dreams (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 5:01:38 PM
Lovely and shimmering!
Act of Hope (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 2:29:27 PM
Tricia, This is a great poem- My favorite, I think. The rhythm and the content are top notch. You just keep showing why you're one of the best-anywhere. Jerry
Memories In Bloom (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 2:19:39 PM
Yearning, sweet yearning. Jerry
The Poet Weeps (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 2:15:35 PM
This is the real thing, Tricia. So very good and so very real. It's the style you do best, I think. Texas Jerry
Choices (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 2:00:24 PM
Good stuff! What a concept for a topic- univeral for the human race. You know, Choices 2, 3, etc. I can see being possible.
It was such a ripe CHOICE for a subject. Jerry
Forgotten Song (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 1:49:08 PM
Beautifully poignant, Tricia- It would make a fine song. Jerry
Dawn's Promise (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 1:45:02 PM
Don't hit me with a snowball(iced) please. I just don't like it as much as most of yours. I only want to be honest with you, Tricia. Jerry
A Gargoyle's Tears (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 1:38:04 PM
Powerful and touching! You are one good poet!Jerry
Snow Dreams (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 1:31:14 PM
Very nice touch, as usual. Jerry- Great idea- Tricia.
Snow Dreams (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 5:16:31 AM
Time for me to fly South. Send me a postcard of it's beauty. Nice write.
The Poet Weeps (Poetry) - 11/27/2002 3:26:19 AM
This was amazing. The ending here was so spot on. Great piece.
Cheers,
Tim
The Poet Weeps (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 9:14:35 PM
Has nailed it.
The Poet Weeps (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 9:03:13 PM
you weep the tears of truth...
The Poet Weeps (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 7:43:40 PM
Good write Pat...We have to demote the captain though!
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