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Recent Reviews for Micha Julian
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The Sponge Paradox/1st Person & One Small Sponge's Enigmatic Journal...(an experimental 'story'/'memoir'...) (Short Story) - 9/26/2006 12:15:34 AM
Working with socially and emotionally troubled men and women in the ditch of life reduced me at times to being a sponge. But this sponge was a foolish sponge. He jumped into the ditch instead of reaching down to pull the guy up. I got soaked and sank in the mire; his or her mire - they hauled themselves out dry and just walked away. That's what it meant for me to be an unwitting sponge - to be sucked dry or soaked in someone else's problems and the discarded. I had to learn the hard way. You put it very reflexively.
The Sponge Paradox/1st Person & One Small Sponge's Enigmatic Journal...(an experimental 'story'/'memoir'...) (Short Story) - 8/18/2004 4:23:28 AM
You have touched so many lives Mich.*smile* I will always be proud of you. Just remember, a womans faults are many but men have only two. Everything that they say, and everything that they do...*smile*
Paretti and Son (Chapter 0ne) an exercise/in progress (Short Story) - 1/4/2004 1:25:52 AM
Micha - great stuff! More, more! Are your from RI by any chance?
Alex D.
The Sponge Paradox/1st Person & One Small Sponge's Enigmatic Journal...(an experimental 'story'/'memoir'...) (Short Story) - 4/8/2003 1:54:03 PM
i find this a very good transposition...
The Sponge Paradox/1st Person & One Small Sponge's Enigmatic Journal...(an experimental 'story'/'memoir'...) (Short Story) - 4/6/2003 7:56:52 PM
Micha Michele,
What a burst of womanhood you rest in twirling, empathy of lightly laced depth, painted upon dawns born, yet seen nor discovered. A heart such as yours remains a rare commodity to be found among mankind this day.
Gaurd well this earthen vessel and treasure so rare, for it remains the highlights of the sky, that keeps men looking upward in yes, hope, woven in steadfast grace. How well you have spoken on behalf of your heart this day! I bow deeply in gratitude clad retreat , for your splashed essence upon parchment, this day etched.
Warmly,
Rodney Evan Bohen
Paretti and Son (Chapter 0ne) an exercise/in progress (Short Story) - 3/23/2003 4:17:06 PM
good one
Paretti and Son (Chapter 0ne) an exercise/in progress (Short Story) - 12/22/2002 6:53:58 PM
good...needs more detail,dialogue is good!
The Sponge Paradox/1st Person & One Small Sponge's Enigmatic Journal...(an experimental 'story'/'memoir'...) (Short Story) - 12/14/2002 4:47:59 PM
(((mi-moo))) This is so brilliant and yes I see the truth in this. Being a sponge is all caught up with trying to try.
This made me think of a short story by a Russian Author that I read in College. All my books are packed up or I'd try to find it - Gogol I think was the author. I love this and you my brave brave friend.
*Hugs*
Hoovsie or as Yem use to say, Hoovies
The Sponge Paradox/1st Person & One Small Sponge's Enigmatic Journal...(an experimental 'story'/'memoir'...) (Short Story) - 12/7/2002 3:45:37 AM
interesting
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Paretti and Son (Chapter 0ne) an exercise/in progress (Short Story) - 12/1/2002 2:25:31 AM
*smile*..Now ya see, Rocco woulda told him he wanted ten times on Shadow Gay at Lincoln in the fifth..In addition, seeing he had to travel Route 146 to get there, he woulda dropped another six bucks on a trifecta box for the route number..*smile*...Oh and don't forget to bring back a dozen calzones from that little place up off Allens Avenue...LOL ..Maybe a bit of spumoni for dessert? Keep it up, I want to read more~ instead of the Soprano's you could have the next hit serial show..you can call it the
"Alto's"...*smile*...
Paretti and Son (Chapter 0ne) an exercise/in progress (Short Story) - 11/30/2002 4:57:50 AM
Wow, Michele! You hooked me in right away! This reads like a fast paced movie script! The dialogue is so real and I hope you add more soon! Wonderful work!
*Hugs*
C
And What About 'Love'? Hah! (Just a Rant, hmm...) (Article) - 9/19/2006 8:40:30 AM
John Lennon sang 'How can i give love when i don't know what it is i'm giving.' In other words some of us are are so emotionally illiterate that love gets lost in the miry pit of mixed emotions. It struggles to emerge from those lies, deceit and betrayel, it is often subordinat to these. Thing is, its gatekeeper is the one who tells you that he or she loves you. Really?
Evocative 'rant', Micha, but riddled through and through with substance. I felt it. Been there a thousand frowns before.
And What About 'Love'? Hah! (Just a Rant, hmm...) (Article) - 6/13/2006 6:58:04 PM
two flowers
to a butterfly
are two loves
one red
the other blue
or
to a flower
a butterfly
is but
a passing shadow
Well, I ran out of (smart) comments
And What About 'Love'? Hah! (Just a Rant, hmm...) (Article) - 9/28/2003 3:49:45 AM
thought provoking read
well done
And What About 'Love'? Hah! (Just a Rant, hmm...) (Article) - 9/25/2003 8:27:29 AM
(((mi-moo))) The Why Bother part really hit home for me. But then there is the choice that is made to maybe be kind, reach out and move past. (((You))))
As always, from the heart and a lot of truth and pain.
Love,
Hooves
And What About 'Love'? Hah! (Just a Rant, hmm...) (Article) - 9/24/2003 11:58:55 PM
{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
Just cuz.
Melanie
And What About 'Love'? Hah! (Just a Rant, hmm...) (Article) - 9/24/2003 6:37:26 PM
Dem, girl...you do know how to rant. [grin]
Mary sits and taps (Poetry) - 8/15/2008 2:34:54 PM
Keep writing your heart
Rodney
Mary sits and taps (Poetry) - 7/19/2007 12:26:20 PM
you amaze me all the time...
Mary sits and taps (Poetry) - 10/23/2006 7:34:42 PM
that's what happens when you live you life out in your children ...
good imagery ...
Mary sits and taps (Poetry) - 10/22/2006 4:42:42 PM
Reminds me of a song I heard years ago sung by Richard Harris called Paper Chase - don't know why, not sure if the lyrics are apt, but something about a paper cup comes to mind. We drink out of paper cups and throw them in the bin afterwards. Think it may be something to do with the line 'You'll see her face, the paper face, and you'll go running from long sweet dying daydreams'
Sighing rather than running pleads here in this long moment of reflection that conjures up demons from the past. They don't come running to us, we make them do that with our wont to relive the past. We end up beating ourselves sometimes leaving ourselves luke warm for a while, and who wants to drink luke warm tea? Not very tasteful for sure.
Your poem prompted me to dredge up that song I sung - in my deaf aid way - a long time ago - I won't bother going beyond the middle eight but shoot to the fade out - that's better.
Mary sits and taps (Poetry) - 10/22/2006 3:59:37 PM
Micha, this reaches inside of this woman's soul and bares her pain and thought for all of us to see. Very poignant and very heart wrenching.
Fee
Mary sits and taps (Poetry) - 10/22/2006 3:14:27 PM
Moments of a former life has a great tendency to rear its not so nice head ecery so often. I know Mary. she is me . . . and you . . . and . . .
Mary sits and taps (Poetry) - 10/22/2006 2:57:02 PM
Oh interesting write
the mind keeps the past alive and well, yet does not resolve the past to comfortable presence......we all have that tap....and those brewed tepid memories of "what if"
sigh
pax a
Mary sits and taps (Poetry) - 10/22/2006 2:48:19 PM
This is outstanding............... has a nostalgic calming affect.
Love & Death (Two Than Bauks) (Poetry) - 10/18/2006 10:09:19 AM
I was
in no mood
to deal with
either love
or death
both were dying
until I read
your smile
Crawling (Poetry) - 10/10/2006 6:11:03 AM
this is like a seeding comeing to life.....
I see this as positive, and uplifting
perhaps after over coming a heart break
pax A
Love & Death (Two Than Bauks) (Poetry) - 10/9/2006 5:41:30 PM
I've never read any quite like this and I need to say that you did an exceptional pen for yourself, Micha. I enjoy your heart, wisdom and creativity. You've blossomed in wonderful ways. I am so very proud of you.
Love,
Susan
The Emperor's Old Clothes (Poetry) - 10/9/2006 4:05:35 PM
I am in no mood to comment because I think I am clothed though feel naked.
Love & Death (Two Than Bauks) (Poetry) - 10/9/2006 10:51:06 AM
Brief but most effective. Thank you for the poetry lesson, Micha. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Love & Death (Two Than Bauks) (Poetry) - 10/9/2006 12:06:15 AM
Love it, Micha.
A new form for me.
Elizabeth
Love & Death (Two Than Bauks) (Poetry) - 10/8/2006 7:11:08 PM
interesting genre with a sad yet clever twist ...
Love & Death (Two Than Bauks) (Poetry) - 10/8/2006 6:18:26 PM
Bitter sweet. Love then sadness..
I gotta get my love gene removed..
Love & Death (Two Than Bauks) (Poetry) - 10/8/2006 3:36:44 PM
These are so wonderful and meaningful. I liked the notation prior the poetry makes it a richer experience for the reader. Brilliant....
Love & Death (Two Than Bauks) (Poetry) - 10/8/2006 1:24:41 PM
Interesting and precise, I like them.
Fee
Love & Death (Two Than Bauks) (Poetry) - 10/8/2006 12:23:08 PM
Both well done; especially enjoyed the last :o) I find this form as interesting as the 'Ku; must try a few again soon.
Hope you give us more...
Micke
Love & Death (Two Than Bauks) (Poetry) - 10/8/2006 12:21:32 PM
Oh my, these were excellent. lovely style!
Reindeer
The Emperor's Old Clothes (Poetry) - 10/7/2006 7:26:22 PM
Pen is sword in this penned gem of wise insight. Wonderful Job Mia.....
The world is so confused as to what is happening half the time I feel we are not told enough in the dark.....
Peace& Love,
Joselyn
The Emperor's Old Clothes (Poetry) - 10/7/2006 1:28:01 PM
As an origianal or a repost this work says it all in this world of political unrest and wars that are not wars but still people die.
Fee
The Emperor's Old Clothes (Poetry) - 10/7/2006 1:27:01 PM
If only life were that simple, Micha, and no one is more cynical than me of ideologies - but there are two emperors involved. All we can do is keep praying that God will invervene and soon.
a chapter, one... she/undone (Poetry) - 10/6/2006 9:40:05 AM
Yes my friend you have wreitten this was a very unique style and an understanding to all that will read your work. Well done.
Inside Scarred (Poetry) - 10/4/2006 4:44:14 PM
honest, moving and well written ...
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