A Casual Thing (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:46:50 AM
Your poetry gives on so m uch meaning that you have to recieve positive feedback from all that review. Thanks for sharing with me and many others here on the lovely Den.
Upside Down (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 1:41:37 PM
Cooly said, Elizabeth! Enjoyed the images you invoked! :)
Upside Down (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 12:27:30 PM
That kind of confusion can never be put to right. Enjoyed the imagery.
~E
Upside Down (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 7:09:03 AM
Elizabeth, excellent poetry. much confusion in a chaotic world.
Upside Down (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 6:51:50 AM
Wonderful write.
Upside Down (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 6:45:15 AM
Nice write...enjoyed this!!!
Off With the Wizard of Jaws (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 10:30:52 PM
i confuss'd . . . ha!!!
The Basement (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 10:27:13 PM
o, elizabeth! (i should have read this, tonight.) I.N.R.I. "iron nails ran in..." ya got to me...again!
LSD (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 10:25:04 PM
i know what elizabeth's been doing, lately . . . WRITING! "thx for the memory," i think. wait a sec?
A Casual Thing (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 10:22:53 PM
i think i just had a "joycian epiphany..." great writing, e! i had to re-reread each line, returning "for the words..." for the Meaning's in each word...this line took me five times: "We wake to a painted on dawn." and What a Pleasure.
LSD (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 7:37:36 PM
Beautiful poem. Loved it. Was it really LSD-induced? :)
Off With the Wizard of Jaws (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 9:54:50 PM
Nothing you could say
Will keep me away
We Don't Get Along Like We Used To (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 9:14:06 PM
truly devastating and so clear
Off With the Wizard of Jaws (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 9:12:12 PM
i know exactly how that feels
At Age Six (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 9:10:54 PM
this is sad and beautiful...wonderful
Off With the Wizard of Jaws (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 7:54:20 PM
Short and to the point.
Great.
The Voice
Concrete Concubine (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 3:52:44 PM
This was my 'signature poem' when I worked with a great group of poets in Chicago. You're right - it has been edited over the years - but it was the only poem I had that would silence not only the poets and artists in the room, but the Latin Kings and barfly's too.
Eight Halsted (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 3:50:53 PM
No I was writing exactly what they said - seriously, I was writing it down as it was uttered. I'll give it a 10, of course.
Mundane (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 11:57:32 PM
"OOOooo!!!"
devilish . . . torturious . . . TEASING!!!
("where's me wet noodle when we needs it?!!?"
Szzzzzzz (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 11:52:35 PM
you DO have a "flare" for meter and sparcity of language, which, i think, works very well w/your style and the way you use words to convey meaning, theme, setting, and tonality...
Three am Love Song (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 11:24:09 PM
wow! (2nd "10" from me, tonight!) i "sort of" question the "moral:", at the end, but...i dunno...it "works"!
what i've done? i've "spiritualize" 'em (_viz_: i have BURNT them . . .) either that, or i've "lost them" in a big, brown grocery sack atop the car when i was ooooooo so ever so much looking forward to a full, drunken wkend w/"them" to comiserate...
Eight Halsted (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 11:12:01 PM
great! i loved the vernacular (and, i doubt if "that's what they ACTUALLY said," unless you were tape recording--_a la_ w.s. burroughs!--meaning: i think that you don't have to even mention that, at all.) i'm sure your "artistry" and "workmanship" and "ear for language/meter/rythmn" had MUCH to do about it! great poem...i think i'll "steal" the "dramatic monologue" format, in fact. THX!
Concrete Concubine (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 10:58:00 PM
first "10" i've given you! this one...how many times did you re-write it? i cannot yet say exactly "why," but, while reading this the first time i "felt" as if i were walking "down" a mountain, or (_a la_ "spiderman"); climbing "down" a skyscraper...hmm . . .
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