AuthorsDen.com   Join Free! | Login    
   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Jeanne Miller, iHarry and Elizabeth Lawrence, iMarty Young, iMartyn Kinsella-Jones, iDonald Beaulieu, iAlan Brenham, iHank LeGrand, i

  Home > Fantasy > Stories
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Albert Megraw

· + Follow Me
· Contact Me
· Sponsor Me!
· Books
· Articles
· Stories
· 21 Titles
· 15 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Apr, 2009

Albert Megraw, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.




Featured Book
Headless World––The Vatican Incident (Sequel to The Avatar S
by Stan Law (aka Stanislaw Kapuscinski)

Sequel to The Avatar Syndrome (Three 5 star reviews on Amazon.com). Excerpts available on author's website Part Three of the Trilogy is getting ready f..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members


he is learning about himself
By Albert Megraw
Saturday, October 01, 2011

Rated "G" by the Author.

Share    Print  Save   Follow

Recent stories by Albert Megraw
· the wolf
· Cries on the wind
· the three little pigs and the big bad wolf
· the daily battle
· My Harsh and Rugged Land.
· the golden dragon boy
· the flute that changed his world
           >> View all 15


one twin learing about the other

 

 

He is learning about himself

 

 

 

 

My twin, one who sees much and yet voices not a breath in time.

Seer of much yet wanter of more than can be given.

My twin, one who’s voice is mightier than the whisper of an exploding volcano, rattler of universes, destroyer of nothingness, enlightener.

One who brings feelings never felt or understood, one who brings warmth where coldness permeated deeply into unknown territory.

Twin, bringer of passion and love.

Bringer of fine feelings that shine in the void of the blackest universe.

Bringer of joys yet unexpressed or even felt, breaker of hearts.

Twin, world changer extant. 

The shaker of universes, creator of limitless beauty, a shining star brighter than all the stars together.

Twin, whose smile creates the thundering beat of many hearts and creates torrents of emotions in those he know’s, melter of hearts.

Twin, talker extant, narrator of great things to come, one whose breath creates the universe and whose blink creates endless time.

One who has yet to talk to the deepest ocean in himself?

Twin, the one who when he breaks the chains of silence will shake the foundations of the universe and cause all things to blossom and shine.

Twin, The shaker of universes, creator of vastnesses beyond comprehension, one who’s smile warms the earth and melts the snow.

Twin, One who never commits himself to the wonders of the universe.

 One who will dull his reach for the stars and the great universe yet unseen by him?

Deep passion and vibrant life is there to have should he only look and let himself break the chains of darkness.

Silver and golden rays of lifes won unknownesses await one who looks and smile at himself.

 

 

 

 

 

       Web Site: he is learning about himself

Want to review or comment on this short story?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by Charlie 10/2/2011
I found myself smiling while reading this. I too have written a poem using the "er" modifiers to attempt to define a family member--my Mother. So I'm intrigued by this write, but slightly confused. The word "twins" immediately divides my mind, and reading about "one" makes me think "the other" is to follow. So in my mind, I never know which twin is which, although you state in the beginning it is about one twin getting to know the other. Thus, my mind is always in a state of confussion reading this.

That having been said, I like your writing style; one line builds upon another, creating layers of emotion that take in your readers. You've got some very unique and lovely lines here. I especially love, "One who has yet to talk to the deepest ocean in himself" (referring, I think to the second twin?). At any rate, the poem--because it is a poem, and I hope somewhere in the middle of a long-long story, is well-worth tightening up for your twins to treasure. How to tighten it up is a good question. Good luck with that--and with everything. --Charlie

Popular Fantasy Stories
1. The Phantom Library
2. FREE AudioBook Fantasy Short Story
3. Old Jake
4. Faux Companion
5. Secrets in Sulsut - Episode I (full versio
6. A Dream Come True
7. Shadow's Daughter: Flight of the Fox
8. Who Walks Your Psychosis?
9. An Unlikely Hero (full version)
10. Of Witches and Wands - Nomadin Chapter Two

Ni'il, The Awakening by James Boyle

Award-winning finalist 2010 Indie Excellence Awards for horror fiction. Award winning finalist 2010 Independent Publishers Book Awards (IPPY) for horror fiction. ..  
BookAds by Silver, Gold and Platinum Members

Cold Hearted Son of a Witch - The Dragoneer Saga Book II by M. R. Mathias

Zahrellion, Rikky, and their dragons, embark on a quest to find the special mushrooms Mysterian needs to save Prince Richard from Gravelbone's poison. Meanwhile, Jenka and..  
BookAds by Silver, Gold and Platinum Members

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
© AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.