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Magic Star in the Ship
By Deep Rajvansh
Sunday, November 01, 2009

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A Group of teen children who have gifted some magic powers from noble ghosts were reached on a ship. On the ship they came to know about a magic star which was carrying by a lady and a typical gang was also in search of that magic star. The group of children has to apply so many magic and comic tricks on the gang to protect the magic star.

Magic Star in the Ship

                               Right had written for a luxury ship with his blue pencil. Next movement they were stood on the deck of a beautiful ship. Passenger was busy in their own activities. Old men were shearing their experiences with each other. Teenagers were enjoying in their own company. Ladies were praising and discussing about their jewelry, dresses and on food tips. Children were playing, no-one have a time to attention them. They all were behaving normally.

                As well as they were crossing the stairs a, scold headed man was rebuking to another two man.                             

                “You both are hopeless. I should not depend on you. I had arranged 15 men without knowing to anyone, but your said star is not found yet. For that we are searching to have faith on your report. You don’t know the value of that Star, from which we will be, become milliner. We will be able to rule all over the world. And it will be possible when the woman who have the Star come under our control.”

                 Both men were trying to convince him.                

“Mauji believe us we are very sure that the woman have the Star, because she was saying to her husband about the Star that, from our forefathers we are heaving this Star safely. Now I am going to contact with a great magician of Germany. He will tell all about the Star that how many powers are there inside the Star and how to use them because by the powers of Star we can be a milliner. This is the reason she is going to Germany by this ship.”

               Scold-headed said, “I knew very well about this story. You had already repeated the story so many times. If we couldn’t find out the woman here them it will be too difficult to find out in Germany.”

             By hearing all about the star, Cupper and his group saw each other. They came to know that the ship was going to Germany.

           They were unknown that all Noble Ghosts were watching and hearing them as they were watching a T.V. to having eye at the activities of Cupper’s group. As well as Ghosts heard about the Star they saw each other, immediately Ghosts called to Mr. Warn. Mr. Warn was an old Ghost appeared. Mr. Bright said by showing the activities and talks of the Krolin’s Group, “They are talking about a Star, may be this is the star in which you had saved your powers before a long time. Mr. Warn saw and here them with attention and said, “It seems that they are talking about the same Star. If the children gat it then I will be try to remember the Number, by completing the Number Star powers will be activate.”

           “But there is a problem that your Star can not be seen in the “Wonder ball.” You had been closed your power into Magic Star by a magical number key which can be the only solution.”   


               On the other side there was a festive atmosphere at every corner of the ship. At night suddenly Right disappeared and group become worried about him. They were searching Right in every where.  

              Mauji was busy by asking so many questions from Right about pencil, but Right was giving only one answer that this pencil is very lucky for me. At good happenings I had to understand that it will be done because of this pencil. But Mauji was not believed on his explanations.     

Next morning deck was full of passengers because ship caption had invited them. Krolin and his group was also there but   they were in search of right, Cupper said to Graham ‘’ if Right is not in this crowed than we should see in wonder ball to find him.”              “I know the place where your friend is, but where you are going to search of your friend”. A very thin voice came from their back. To hear the voice Marry turned out to find out, who is there. But there was only a cat looking in her eyes.

              Marry asked in low voice, “Are you saying some thing?”                 

Cat; “Yes I know your friend is hiding by a scold-headed man.”

Marry, “Are you sure?”  

                 Cat; “Yes, when I was chasing a rat, I saw scold-headed man was trying to lock your friend in a big box.”       

               Marry; “Will you take us to that place?”

            Cat, “Yes I can!” and cat becomes ready to go with them. She was happy to talk with Marry. Slowly she was going to a side.                

            Marry said; “You cats walk slowly in comparatively to dogs.”

As well as she hared the name of dog her mood changed at once. She said to Marry; “Dogs are nothing in front of us. They can bark only and we are always ready to make an attack .They are only stumpers. I have a heavy ribbon around my neck. Otherwise I can run very fast.”

              Marry; “A ribbon can’t be as heavy as you are saying. I don’t think so! If you want I can loose this ribbon from your neck, you will be feeling free.”

                Cat; “O.K. please looses the ribbon.”                       

As Marry looses her ribbon she runs away by giving thanks to Marry. Group was running with the cat. But Marry was surprised to see a small pocket under the bow tie of the ribbon. There was a heavy item inside the pocket.   She opened the zip and next movement a beautiful small Star shaped silver colored machine was in her hand. She was looking by reverting each of its sides. There was a ring made at the center of that Star shaped machine. She was testing the Star without knowing that Mrs. Williams was coming to her side. Marry took the Star in her bag and stepped on about in running speed to the group who were coming with Right by open the box. Cat was accompanied them. Marry was in hurry, she tied the ribbon on her neck and said; 

Thank you Quety you have done a great job for us and now I had make your ribbon very light also.” Quety was also feeling better then before. Again she went to her Mistress’s arms by giving thanks to Marry.

               Marry told about the Star to his Group which she had got from the ribbon and said; “I kept the Star in my bag to think, may be this is the Magic Star which was searching by Mauji.”

              Mauji was threatening to the Group that, “I know you were involve in yesterday’s evening arrangements, give the real Star to me immediate other wise I will tell the Caption about you”.

                   It was a day time and a very fine day; suddenly a cloud came with a strong wind by covering the sun. Air was becoming cool and cool, weather changed suddenly and some passengers had a look on milky white strong layer of fog at a short distance. Fog was coming around the ship, as well as it became close to the ship cooling air made them in freezing condition. No one was able to move from his place due to their body was freeze. Ship was covered with the fog within minutes. It was seems very dark due to clouds and fog. Passengers were frightened heaving their free zed body. They were helpless to go into their rooms.

Again a surprise was there; four very big white gowns were waving in the air by coming to the ship and stood like men in the gowns. But none was there except large gowns. Pin drop silent was there words were freeze in their mouth and their eyes were opened with surprise having so many questions in their mind. Shadow like gowns moving to words Krolin group and stood in front of them. They removed the fog from Krolin and his group to make a big circle...................   

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 Note: This story is taken from my first published mystery for teens named 'Krolin Group in Mysteries World'.  Read the whole book with so many mysteries inside...........











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