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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/24/2003 |
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This was excellent! Yes, please do more!
Love it you two,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
4/15/2003 |
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| i know its art...but its creepy..like those Halloween/Jason stories... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/16/2003 |
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| great write, chad and linda! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :) |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
3/16/2003 |
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| P.P. / Linda, great story. Could become quite a horror flick. Keep em coming. |
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| Reviewed by Magie Roger |
3/16/2003 |
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| Chase me Chase me,Did you chase linda hill? Did you catch her? When will you continue to chase again? Let me know Phantom Pheonix. When you stop chasing her let me know. I'll get ready you can chase me. |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
3/16/2003 |
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Hi Chad and Linda, I really like what you both did here. Sort of Friday the thirteen. Sure it would be interesting to continue. It is east to read and follow. It also has suspense! Nice Job!
All the best to you both.
tony |
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