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Chase pt. 2 The Chainsaw written by the phantom pheonix and Linda Hill
By the phantom pheonix
Sunday, March 16, 2003



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We think we might make this into a continuing series

She heard him ask
As he put away
The bloody axe
For a chainsaw
"Do you want to
Play chase with me?"
"Yes I will play chase
Do you think you can catch me?"
"Feisty aren't we then I will give you a run" he says as he started the chainsaw.
She runs from the room
In her frenzy
She falls as the chainsaw nears
Buzzing like mosquitoes in her ears
She jumps up frantically and runs
Opening the front door
She races outside
Her heart pounding
Like a steady train
He sees her flee
Like a frightened deer
And he smells her fear
And enjoys the game
As he goes after her
She feels
Exhiliration
And raw naked terror
As the chainsaw again nears
And screams escape her
Now frozen lips
As he comes closer
And she sees a cave
And crawls in
The drip of water
And the dark shadows
And she cringes in fear
As she runs.and hides in the darkness.Hoping he will not see. Angered he yells out.
"Come out and play
Come and play with me
Let's play chase"
Tears freeze on her. Now flustered cheeks. And fear is mounting. She almost ceases to breathe. Lest he may be near. Deep into the cavern he creeps. His chainsaw now not running. As he listens for her. Stillness echoes. She can now hear. Her own heart beating rapidly. The tension high. He could be far away. Or breathing down her neck. He is enraged. Where the hell is she?. He is thinking. As out of desperation. He stalks out of the cavern. He hears now her footsteps. But she doesnt see him hiding. Behind a nearby tree. As he watches her. Come out of the cave. Then with a savage rush. He comes at her. She hears the rustling of the autumn leaves. And quickly turns. As he grabs her. And she hids the sharp rock. Behind her back. As she waits. Waits for the right time. As he swings the chainsaw. And she jabs the rock. Into one of his eyes. There is the gush of blood. The scream of pain. As the chainsaw. Falls out of his hands. She grabs the chainsaw. And turning it on. She stands eye to eye. With flames of hate. In her eyes.
"Come on damn you come on!" she screams angrily. He staggers. Holding the bloody hole. Where his eye once was. As he screams. In rage. And leaps at her. In his leap. She slices out with the chainsaw. As he screams in horror. As his left ahnd is torn off. He falls to the ground. Writhing. In utter pain.
"Go play chase with yourself" she hisses.
As she runs away. Hoping to find help.


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Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/24/2003
This was excellent! Yes, please do more!

Love it you two,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 4/15/2003
i know its art...but its creepy..like those Halloween/Jason stories...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/16/2003
great write, chad and linda! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Reviewed by Paul Berube 3/16/2003
P.P. / Linda, great story. Could become quite a horror flick. Keep em coming.
Reviewed by Magie Roger 3/16/2003
Chase me Chase me,Did you chase linda hill? Did you catch her? When will you continue to chase again? Let me know Phantom Pheonix. When you stop chasing her let me know. I'll get ready you can chase me.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 3/16/2003
Hi Chad and Linda, I really like what you both did here. Sort of Friday the thirteen. Sure it would be interesting to continue. It is east to read and follow. It also has suspense! Nice Job!
All the best to you both.


tony

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