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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
11/22/2003 |
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| enjoyed the read |
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| Reviewed by Brutal Dreamer aka Pegs |
4/20/2002 |
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I personally was surprised Paul Melniczek write with this flavor of penstrokes. Not disappointed, mind you. Surprised.
He shadowed a little different sideof himself here. Instead of monsters in closets, storms raging, and little stick people; Paul created a more scary piece although very short, spooky just the same. The Point of View he wrote in was intriguing, the unmasking of emotions from that POV was also unique and sweetly horrorific.
Nice job... you wonder howcome a NINE and not a 10 - because I want MORE .. this was one piece I could tell you had a lot more to tell me!
*grins* NICE story Paul! |
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