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THE STORM
By Albert L. B Williams
Wednesday, June 21, 2006

Rated "G" by the Author.

Precautionary Tale about the weather


The Storm


By Albert Williams


Roddy Bane shakes his head as the weatherman


announces that a hurricane watch is in effect for the


islands. His wife Sheila-Anne is seated on a settee across


the room; his sixteen year old daughter, as beautiful as a


morning sun, is standing by the front door. Mr. Bane is


absentmindedly twirling a glass filled with rum.


“Can’t he find something proper to tell people?” he


mutters. “Good Lord, I’ve lived all my life here and no


hurricane ever…”


“Aw, won’t you hush up!” interrupts his wife who is


trying to make sense out of the weatherman’s


predictions.


“This is serious you know, they say this is a dangerous


storm,” she adds making a gesture with her hands to


silence him.


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“A dangerous storm…Bah” retorts Mr. Bane.


“Nothing but a little…”


“Well listen nuh,” chides Sheila-Anne, her eyes glued


to the TV set as the man on the television points out the


current coordinates.


“I wonder what’s it like to go through a hurricane,”


says Tarah, almost to herself, flicking a handful of her


dark-brown tresses over her right shoulder as she peers


out into the fading light.


“Not a very nice thing,” responds her mother, who


saunters towards the front door where Tarah is standing.


“I can remember my mother telling me that in 1935 a bad


hurricane hit Dominica and plenty people did get killed,”


she says nodding her head sagely.


“All this meteorological stuff……Bah!” interjects Mr.


Bane. “Never heard anyone talk about a hurricane in…”


he leans back into his favourite armchair frowning.


“Papa God, make this storm pass us,” utters Sheila-


Anne as she quickly makes the sign of the cross.


“All you not hearing,” ejaculates Roddy. “All you and


dat TV is two of a kind, I wish dat hurricane would come


for true and let me hear you talk bout storm coming.


“Roddy!” exclaims Mrs. Bane, her teeth clenched and


eyes glowering. “How can you say dat?” she spurts.


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118


Mr. Bane doesn’t reply, instead he leans forward


reaching for the centre table where the bottle of D-Special


rum, newly opened, is standing. He tops his glass with


some more of the stuff. Without much of a thought he


dumps the contents into his mouth, swirls it around, then


swallows with a gulp. The stinging beverage makes his


eyes twinkle with redness, as his face contorts with a


hideous grimace. He coughs.


Mr. Bane is a sawmill operator at a local lumber yard.


This afternoon he is home earlier than usual as the


company has let the workers off since midday, so that


they could look after their families in the anticipation of a


direct hit by the storm. He had passed by Port-of-Call for


a drink or two with a few of his colleagues, and by the


time he reaches home he was thoroughly intoxicated.


Tarah, who herself would normally have been out


with her friends about this time, has taken the


government’s warning seriously. She has decided to stay


indoors, keeping periodic checks on the storm’s progress


via the radio and television for updates.


Mrs. Bane peering out of the window observes in the


distance huge masses dark of clouds, she says, “Boy! The


sky so ugly, I’m glad you are here with me. I’m going to


check the kitchen to see if we might need anything.”


As the afternoon wears on the sky changes drastically;


an otherwise red and orange sunset is obscured by the


foreboding cheerless clouds.


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119


Mr. Bane is propped up in his favourite armchair,


dressed in the same blue jeans and denim long sleeved


shirt that he wore to work today. His head is cocked to


one side as Tarah tries to wake him pleading. “Daddy,


come on, help me to nail some plywood over some of the


windows,” she begs. “They say the hurricane will hit us


at midnight,” she adds shaking him. Roddy’s reply is


blurred and angry.


“Aw leave me alone,” he chides, “can’t you see…Can’t


you see no hurricane, Bah!”


Tarah gives him a disgusted glance.


Suddenly a dazzling streak illuminates the evening


sky, plunging the villa into a thick darkness, followed


several moments later by a deafening roar overhead as


thunder pounds the already humid atmosphere.


Tarah covers her ears giggling while her father is


startled. “What the !…what was dat?” he says springing


to his feet in a daze.


At that moment Mrs. Bane returns from the kitchen


holding a long white candle, its warm flame casting


dancing shadows. “Hello dear,” she says “the lightning


must have cut the light. We have a flashlight nuh?”


“Yes Mum,” answers Tarah, “I’ll go and get mine.”


The contours on Tarah’s feminine silhouette recede into


the darkness. Mrs. Bane sets the candle on a saucer,


placing it on a shelf below the portrait of Jesus Christ,


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120


then she turns, walks over to her husband who’s still


sitting in his armchair. She touches him lightly on his


knee and sighs. After a pause she says, “so look at you,


Mr. Bane. You should be ashamed of yourself.”


She turns and continues speaking . “Drunk like a fish


when you should be helping us get things under control.”


Another clap of thunder rumbles in the heavens and


slightly rocks the house, followed by a burst of heavy


raindrops large as golf balls that now beat upon the roof.


Tarah returns with the torch, training its beam from


window to window. She says, “I really wish we had


boarded up the other windows.”


“Let’s just take it easy,” advises her mother trying to


sound comforting. “Maybe…Things won’t be as bad as


all that.”


Tarah complains further that she is feeling chilly since


the evening temperature had dropped a few degrees as


the evening thickened over the island. When she went to


search for the flashlight she had donned a thick woolen


sweater and a pair of slacks to keep her warm. She also


brought a small transistor radio which she has on a local


radio station, its soft music mingling with the feeling of


apprehension in the living room.


Roddy is still clutching his empty glass, but now he’s


singing a refrain of a reggae number; “When the rain


falls,” he croaks, “it won’t fall on one man’s house top,”


he runs his hand over his unshaven face, then points in


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121


the direction of his wife and child and adds, “Remember


that.”


Time draws by slowly. The evening is uneventful.


Tarah is sitting by the front door on a low stool. She is


thinking over what her mother has said about the


hurricane of 1935; then she shudders at the thought of so


many people being killed.


Mr. Bane has other thoughts as he peeps between half


closed eyes. He silently concludes that his wife was naïve


enough to expect a hurricane of some silly tale told by her


mother, perhaps to keep her quiet like a little girl, or


discourage her from playing outdoors in the wind and


rain. As the midnight hours arrives, Mr. Bane breaks the


gloomy silence.


“As you see, midnight, no hurricane,” he laughs, a


deep-belly kind of ridiculous laugh.


Mrs. Bane retorts defensively “well it’s better to be


prepared than to be not ready and wind and rain come


smashing up everything and you don’t know what is


going on.”


“But I want to see the wind and rain, like how they


does show it in the learning channel,” Tarah says with a


smug smile on her face, making the dimples in her cheek


stand out like two holes on either side of her mouth.


“Anyway,” replies Sheila-Anne, “you and your father


does really get under my skin.” She begins to walk


ALBERT WILLIAMS


122


around the room checking to see of everything is in


order, then she sits on the sofa and sighs, “well my dear,


we might as well try to get some sleep.” She tries in vain


to stifle a yawn. “Perhaps your father is right, dem


weather people always predicting.” She nods in the


direction of her husband who is already asleep in his


armchair.


Dawn breaks under the ferocious winds, a low


atmospheric pressure has created ideal conditions for the


deadly vortex that has developed into a category four


hurricane—a very dangerous storm. Roddy, Sheila-


Anne and Tarah listen to the extremely high winds


accompanied by torrential rains that are now pouring as


if all the waterfalls in the world had been diverted over


the Bane’s residence.


Roddy, who seems to have slept off the effects of last


night’s carousing is houting above the screeching


scenario. “All you,” he bellows “get buckets, bath


tub…anything to put where dat leaking,” he advises.


“This really looking bad,” says his wife. Roddy nods in


agreement, his mind now sober, but rather confused not


knowing what to do in the present circumstances. Roddy


has never experienced anything like this before. He turns


his head abruptly to what sounds like someone trying to


yank off the entire roof. Roddy Bane is a well built man,


having gotten plenty of exercise from handling loads of


lumber at his work place. He considers himself fearless,


afraid of no one; but at the moment he feels a painful ache


in his chest at the mounting concern for his dear family.


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123


Up to eight inches of muddy rain water flows freely on


the floor. An earthy odor permeates the air. Outdoors the


gale continues to blow from every direction. Suddenly,


Mrs. Bane screams, “Oh my God.” Through the open


front door she recognizes Tarah’s girlish figure


crouching against the weather as she attempts to record


the scene on her camcorder. “Tarah!” shouts Mrs. Bane


with tears welling in her eyes, “get back inside.”


Her order passes in vain. Tarah’s fascination with the


phenomenon has her trapped within its magical grasp.


Meanwhile, Mr. Bane himself is at the entrance in a trice.


He too shouts to his daughter. “Tarah!” he yells, cupping


his thick hands around his mouth, “what do you think


you are doing?” “Come inside,” he commands her.


At that frightening moment, to his horror, he sees his


daughter being lifted clean from her feet and being


hauled several metres along a slippery lawn before she is


lodged in a low-cut hedge that acts as a fence along the


perimeter of the front lawn where she nows hold on to


prevent herself from being blown further, as well as for


the fear of the loss of her life, her camcorder now carried


aloft by the powerful currents tumbling and smashing


before her eyes. Roddy is almost dumbstruck, he gapes


unbelievably as Tarh is obscured from sight by the screen


of leaves, dirt and other debris hurled between them.


“What!” exclaims Sheila Anne, “do something” she


shrieks, tears now streaming down her face.


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124


“God helps me utters Roddy, as he bites hard into his


lips, “I’m going to get her,” he adds, his hands trembling.


“Hurry Roddy!” screams his wife again, the strong


wind blowing her hair into her face. They gaze for


moments as Tarah wedged among the branches of the


shrub some forty feet away, stares back at them with a


look of utter surprise and terror in her beautiful brown


eyes.


Roddy crawls on all fours, gripping the earth as one


would grip a blanket, inching his bulk forward, pushing


against what seems like the strength of twenty men. He


curses under his breath, wishing he could say the word


and all at once still the storm, but Roddy realizes there is


no way out. He now fears for both of their lives. As he


closes in to Tarah he calls out to her, “don’t move—


Daddy is coming to get you.” A few more feet and he has


reached the bushy branches of the schrub.


He orders Tarah to hold on to him while he firmly


grips the young lady around her waist.


Tarah instantly obeys her father. She feels more secure


as Mr. Bane’s towering form acts as a human shield, and


together they retrace their tracks back along the lawn,


pausing at times on all fours as the cruel winds wipes


around them. All the time Tarah is thinking about the


power of the wind as she witnessed first hand a number


of fruit trees completely uprooted. She also saw portions


of the roof of roofs of the neighbour’s home flying in the


storm like kites. At last they reach the house where Tarah


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125


sees her mother waiting anxiously, her hand holding her


jaws like one who has a terrible toothache.


It’s all right,” purrs Mrs. Bane looking over her


rescued daughter.


“Mother,” Tarah says. “I never know wind could be so


strong.” She gazes fearfully over her shoulder at the


dramatic view of a hurricane in full force.


“I never knew,” says her mother, glaring at Tarah,


“that you could be so irresponsible to try something like


that.”


“All I wanted was to record some action,” confesses


Tarah, “so we could watch it later.” Meanwhile the storm


is unrelenting like a monstrous octopus, its tentacles


lashing the villa with a barrage of powerful gusts.


Hardly a minute has passed since the child’s return to


safety, when Mr. Bane realizes the roof of the house will


not hold. “All you,” he says “lets go under there,”


pointing to an open space beneath the counter in the


kitchen, as the gusts outside seem to intensify.


“Quick!” he shouts. Sheila-Anne and Tarah huddle


beneath it clutching each other, followed by Mr. Bane as


what sounds like a huge wave envelopes the area


spewing large chunks of the stonewall, almost enclosing


the three of them in a dark tomb.


ALBERT WILLIAMS


126


For the next few hours the family is utterly quiet. Only


the horrifying screech of the wind can be heard, that


echoes in their very bones. Finally the wind subsides and


the sun shines with a brilliance as if nothing disastrous


had taken place. It’s brilliant midday rays revealing total


devastation.


Roddy Bane, meanwhile is pushing against a slab of


the stone wall that has enclosed him and his family under


the counter where they had weathered the storm.


Finally succeeding, he climbs out, then helps Tarah,


then Sheila-Anne. “Well,” he sighs, “I’ll never doubt


another weatherman again. They knew what they were


talking about this time.” Roddy took his wife in his arms,


kissing her gently on the cheek.


“Hey, you two,” says Tarah, “I want to experience


another. This is fun but just a little rough, don’t you


think,” she added rubbing her chin.


“You and your adventurous mind,” teased Mr. Bane.


“one of these days you will understand the real


adventure.”


“You mean I’ll be on televsion reporting live from


Dominica for CBS!”


Amid the ruins of their home they all break out in tears


of joy to be saved from the worst of the storm.


“I’m not sure about that,” replies Mr. Bane, “but you


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127


nearly became a missing actor in a revised “Gone with


the Wind”.


“I guess that’s what they call riding the storm,” says


Sheila-Anne as she draws Roddy and Tarah towards her,


pressing them to her breast.




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Reviewed by TERESA CROWE 7/17/2006
I like this story. I have a storm story to but it is not half as good as yours.Is this a true story? thanks, Teresa






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