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THE STORM
By Albert L. B Williams
Wednesday, June 21, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
Precautionary Tale about the weather
The Storm
By Albert Williams
Roddy Bane shakes his head as the weatherman
announces that a hurricane watch is in effect for the
islands. His wife Sheila-Anne is seated on a settee across
the room; his sixteen year old daughter, as beautiful as a
morning sun, is standing by the front door. Mr. Bane is
absentmindedly twirling a glass filled with rum.
“Can’t he find something proper to tell people?” he
mutters. “Good Lord, I’ve lived all my life here and no
hurricane ever…”
“Aw, won’t you hush up!” interrupts his wife who is
trying to make sense out of the weatherman’s
predictions.
“This is serious you know, they say this is a dangerous
storm,” she adds making a gesture with her hands to
silence him.
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“A dangerous storm…Bah” retorts Mr. Bane.
“Nothing but a little…”
“Well listen nuh,” chides Sheila-Anne, her eyes glued
to the TV set as the man on the television points out the
current coordinates.
“I wonder what’s it like to go through a hurricane,”
says Tarah, almost to herself, flicking a handful of her
dark-brown tresses over her right shoulder as she peers
out into the fading light.
“Not a very nice thing,” responds her mother, who
saunters towards the front door where Tarah is standing.
“I can remember my mother telling me that in 1935 a bad
hurricane hit Dominica and plenty people did get killed,”
she says nodding her head sagely.
“All this meteorological stuff……Bah!” interjects Mr.
Bane. “Never heard anyone talk about a hurricane in…”
he leans back into his favourite armchair frowning.
“Papa God, make this storm pass us,” utters Sheila-
Anne as she quickly makes the sign of the cross.
“All you not hearing,” ejaculates Roddy. “All you and
dat TV is two of a kind, I wish dat hurricane would come
for true and let me hear you talk bout storm coming.
“Roddy!” exclaims Mrs. Bane, her teeth clenched and
eyes glowering. “How can you say dat?” she spurts.
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Mr. Bane doesn’t reply, instead he leans forward
reaching for the centre table where the bottle of D-Special
rum, newly opened, is standing. He tops his glass with
some more of the stuff. Without much of a thought he
dumps the contents into his mouth, swirls it around, then
swallows with a gulp. The stinging beverage makes his
eyes twinkle with redness, as his face contorts with a
hideous grimace. He coughs.
Mr. Bane is a sawmill operator at a local lumber yard.
This afternoon he is home earlier than usual as the
company has let the workers off since midday, so that
they could look after their families in the anticipation of a
direct hit by the storm. He had passed by Port-of-Call for
a drink or two with a few of his colleagues, and by the
time he reaches home he was thoroughly intoxicated.
Tarah, who herself would normally have been out
with her friends about this time, has taken the
government’s warning seriously. She has decided to stay
indoors, keeping periodic checks on the storm’s progress
via the radio and television for updates.
Mrs. Bane peering out of the window observes in the
distance huge masses dark of clouds, she says, “Boy! The
sky so ugly, I’m glad you are here with me. I’m going to
check the kitchen to see if we might need anything.”
As the afternoon wears on the sky changes drastically;
an otherwise red and orange sunset is obscured by the
foreboding cheerless clouds.
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Mr. Bane is propped up in his favourite armchair,
dressed in the same blue jeans and denim long sleeved
shirt that he wore to work today. His head is cocked to
one side as Tarah tries to wake him pleading. “Daddy,
come on, help me to nail some plywood over some of the
windows,” she begs. “They say the hurricane will hit us
at midnight,” she adds shaking him. Roddy’s reply is
blurred and angry.
“Aw leave me alone,” he chides, “can’t you see…Can’t
you see no hurricane, Bah!”
Tarah gives him a disgusted glance.
Suddenly a dazzling streak illuminates the evening
sky, plunging the villa into a thick darkness, followed
several moments later by a deafening roar overhead as
thunder pounds the already humid atmosphere.
Tarah covers her ears giggling while her father is
startled. “What the !…what was dat?” he says springing
to his feet in a daze.
At that moment Mrs. Bane returns from the kitchen
holding a long white candle, its warm flame casting
dancing shadows. “Hello dear,” she says “the lightning
must have cut the light. We have a flashlight nuh?”
“Yes Mum,” answers Tarah, “I’ll go and get mine.”
The contours on Tarah’s feminine silhouette recede into
the darkness. Mrs. Bane sets the candle on a saucer,
placing it on a shelf below the portrait of Jesus Christ,
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then she turns, walks over to her husband who’s still
sitting in his armchair. She touches him lightly on his
knee and sighs. After a pause she says, “so look at you,
Mr. Bane. You should be ashamed of yourself.”
She turns and continues speaking . “Drunk like a fish
when you should be helping us get things under control.”
Another clap of thunder rumbles in the heavens and
slightly rocks the house, followed by a burst of heavy
raindrops large as golf balls that now beat upon the roof.
Tarah returns with the torch, training its beam from
window to window. She says, “I really wish we had
boarded up the other windows.”
“Let’s just take it easy,” advises her mother trying to
sound comforting. “Maybe…Things won’t be as bad as
all that.”
Tarah complains further that she is feeling chilly since
the evening temperature had dropped a few degrees as
the evening thickened over the island. When she went to
search for the flashlight she had donned a thick woolen
sweater and a pair of slacks to keep her warm. She also
brought a small transistor radio which she has on a local
radio station, its soft music mingling with the feeling of
apprehension in the living room.
Roddy is still clutching his empty glass, but now he’s
singing a refrain of a reggae number; “When the rain
falls,” he croaks, “it won’t fall on one man’s house top,”
he runs his hand over his unshaven face, then points in
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the direction of his wife and child and adds, “Remember
that.”
Time draws by slowly. The evening is uneventful.
Tarah is sitting by the front door on a low stool. She is
thinking over what her mother has said about the
hurricane of 1935; then she shudders at the thought of so
many people being killed.
Mr. Bane has other thoughts as he peeps between half
closed eyes. He silently concludes that his wife was naïve
enough to expect a hurricane of some silly tale told by her
mother, perhaps to keep her quiet like a little girl, or
discourage her from playing outdoors in the wind and
rain. As the midnight hours arrives, Mr. Bane breaks the
gloomy silence.
“As you see, midnight, no hurricane,” he laughs, a
deep-belly kind of ridiculous laugh.
Mrs. Bane retorts defensively “well it’s better to be
prepared than to be not ready and wind and rain come
smashing up everything and you don’t know what is
going on.”
“But I want to see the wind and rain, like how they
does show it in the learning channel,” Tarah says with a
smug smile on her face, making the dimples in her cheek
stand out like two holes on either side of her mouth.
“Anyway,” replies Sheila-Anne, “you and your father
does really get under my skin.” She begins to walk
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around the room checking to see of everything is in
order, then she sits on the sofa and sighs, “well my dear,
we might as well try to get some sleep.” She tries in vain
to stifle a yawn. “Perhaps your father is right, dem
weather people always predicting.” She nods in the
direction of her husband who is already asleep in his
armchair.
Dawn breaks under the ferocious winds, a low
atmospheric pressure has created ideal conditions for the
deadly vortex that has developed into a category four
hurricane—a very dangerous storm. Roddy, Sheila-
Anne and Tarah listen to the extremely high winds
accompanied by torrential rains that are now pouring as
if all the waterfalls in the world had been diverted over
the Bane’s residence.
Roddy, who seems to have slept off the effects of last
night’s carousing is houting above the screeching
scenario. “All you,” he bellows “get buckets, bath
tub…anything to put where dat leaking,” he advises.
“This really looking bad,” says his wife. Roddy nods in
agreement, his mind now sober, but rather confused not
knowing what to do in the present circumstances. Roddy
has never experienced anything like this before. He turns
his head abruptly to what sounds like someone trying to
yank off the entire roof. Roddy Bane is a well built man,
having gotten plenty of exercise from handling loads of
lumber at his work place. He considers himself fearless,
afraid of no one; but at the moment he feels a painful ache
in his chest at the mounting concern for his dear family.
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Up to eight inches of muddy rain water flows freely on
the floor. An earthy odor permeates the air. Outdoors the
gale continues to blow from every direction. Suddenly,
Mrs. Bane screams, “Oh my God.” Through the open
front door she recognizes Tarah’s girlish figure
crouching against the weather as she attempts to record
the scene on her camcorder. “Tarah!” shouts Mrs. Bane
with tears welling in her eyes, “get back inside.”
Her order passes in vain. Tarah’s fascination with the
phenomenon has her trapped within its magical grasp.
Meanwhile, Mr. Bane himself is at the entrance in a trice.
He too shouts to his daughter. “Tarah!” he yells, cupping
his thick hands around his mouth, “what do you think
you are doing?” “Come inside,” he commands her.
At that frightening moment, to his horror, he sees his
daughter being lifted clean from her feet and being
hauled several metres along a slippery lawn before she is
lodged in a low-cut hedge that acts as a fence along the
perimeter of the front lawn where she nows hold on to
prevent herself from being blown further, as well as for
the fear of the loss of her life, her camcorder now carried
aloft by the powerful currents tumbling and smashing
before her eyes. Roddy is almost dumbstruck, he gapes
unbelievably as Tarh is obscured from sight by the screen
of leaves, dirt and other debris hurled between them.
“What!” exclaims Sheila Anne, “do something” she
shrieks, tears now streaming down her face.
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“God helps me utters Roddy, as he bites hard into his
lips, “I’m going to get her,” he adds, his hands trembling.
“Hurry Roddy!” screams his wife again, the strong
wind blowing her hair into her face. They gaze for
moments as Tarah wedged among the branches of the
shrub some forty feet away, stares back at them with a
look of utter surprise and terror in her beautiful brown
eyes.
Roddy crawls on all fours, gripping the earth as one
would grip a blanket, inching his bulk forward, pushing
against what seems like the strength of twenty men. He
curses under his breath, wishing he could say the word
and all at once still the storm, but Roddy realizes there is
no way out. He now fears for both of their lives. As he
closes in to Tarah he calls out to her, “don’t move—
Daddy is coming to get you.” A few more feet and he has
reached the bushy branches of the schrub.
He orders Tarah to hold on to him while he firmly
grips the young lady around her waist.
Tarah instantly obeys her father. She feels more secure
as Mr. Bane’s towering form acts as a human shield, and
together they retrace their tracks back along the lawn,
pausing at times on all fours as the cruel winds wipes
around them. All the time Tarah is thinking about the
power of the wind as she witnessed first hand a number
of fruit trees completely uprooted. She also saw portions
of the roof of roofs of the neighbour’s home flying in the
storm like kites. At last they reach the house where Tarah
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sees her mother waiting anxiously, her hand holding her
jaws like one who has a terrible toothache.
It’s all right,” purrs Mrs. Bane looking over her
rescued daughter.
“Mother,” Tarah says. “I never know wind could be so
strong.” She gazes fearfully over her shoulder at the
dramatic view of a hurricane in full force.
“I never knew,” says her mother, glaring at Tarah,
“that you could be so irresponsible to try something like
that.”
“All I wanted was to record some action,” confesses
Tarah, “so we could watch it later.” Meanwhile the storm
is unrelenting like a monstrous octopus, its tentacles
lashing the villa with a barrage of powerful gusts.
Hardly a minute has passed since the child’s return to
safety, when Mr. Bane realizes the roof of the house will
not hold. “All you,” he says “lets go under there,”
pointing to an open space beneath the counter in the
kitchen, as the gusts outside seem to intensify.
“Quick!” he shouts. Sheila-Anne and Tarah huddle
beneath it clutching each other, followed by Mr. Bane as
what sounds like a huge wave envelopes the area
spewing large chunks of the stonewall, almost enclosing
the three of them in a dark tomb.
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For the next few hours the family is utterly quiet. Only
the horrifying screech of the wind can be heard, that
echoes in their very bones. Finally the wind subsides and
the sun shines with a brilliance as if nothing disastrous
had taken place. It’s brilliant midday rays revealing total
devastation.
Roddy Bane, meanwhile is pushing against a slab of
the stone wall that has enclosed him and his family under
the counter where they had weathered the storm.
Finally succeeding, he climbs out, then helps Tarah,
then Sheila-Anne. “Well,” he sighs, “I’ll never doubt
another weatherman again. They knew what they were
talking about this time.” Roddy took his wife in his arms,
kissing her gently on the cheek.
“Hey, you two,” says Tarah, “I want to experience
another. This is fun but just a little rough, don’t you
think,” she added rubbing her chin.
“You and your adventurous mind,” teased Mr. Bane.
“one of these days you will understand the real
adventure.”
“You mean I’ll be on televsion reporting live from
Dominica for CBS!”
Amid the ruins of their home they all break out in tears
of joy to be saved from the worst of the storm.
“I’m not sure about that,” replies Mr. Bane, “but you
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nearly became a missing actor in a revised “Gone with
the Wind”.
“I guess that’s what they call riding the storm,” says
Sheila-Anne as she draws Roddy and Tarah towards her,
pressing them to her breast.
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