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Under Water Cave
By val l salazar
Saturday, July 08, 2006

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I wrote this some time ago, and wanted to add it written now.
My Fantasies at work, I have a lot of them.

The Underwater Cave
In a place called Point Sal were the furthest point of California pokes out into the Pacific Ocean, there is a cove you have to hike down too. From the top most peak the wind blows hard and you can see a beautiful sunset. In the cove are many wind blown caves that you can explore. One evening I hiked to the edge of the cliff, at the tip, of the point, it was low tide and the water had drawn back quiet a ways uncovering under water caves.
I watched for a while and saw it wasn’t all that deep maybe four feet down; there was an opening that light could be seen from above the waters surface. I hike back down to camp and thought all night about the dangers of going in the cave without an air tank. I thought about what it’s and how would I ever know what’s there if I didn’t take this chance. So I woke early the next day and did my chores, asked if I could go snorkeling and left. I told no one where I was going or of what I planned to do.
I watched the water as it ‘s tides came and went it was much deeper during the early day, so I practiced snorkeling most of the day to see how long I could hold my breath, before long it was evening again and early enough to give it a few good tries.
The first time I found the opening easy enough, but was scared I’d run out of breath before I came up in the cave, also what I might see in there. I did this several times before I gained the strength to go for it.
I dove deep and swam fast into the whole it had a strange allusion of colorful light up inside the water under the opening, I kicked off the floor at the bottom of the inside of the cave to get up faster, it was only about four feet deep inside the water, but as I saw the huge cave inside it was so beautiful, and colorful. There was a beach edge all the way around the shallow water and the walls were high, lit up from the top of the cave somewhere, like a slit from the cliff above. I sat on the sandy beach to catch my breath, and I looked around, the walls were covered with starfish all sizes and all colors. They were lit up like neon’s and moved constantly within each other’s. It was so beautiful and I was in awe, I felt as if I was in a galley of stars, not made for mans eyes but for Gods eyes, The moved slowly and twisted around each other at times as if they were making love on a black silk sheet, with a black light on. I kept this secret for my own pleasure spot, a place to go none else knew of. Later when I had a true Love I could bring them there and show them the amazing find. Stars from heaven and underwater s tars two beautiful romantic places to share with someone special. If only in my mind it was beautiful. By Val
Rewritten 7-8-06


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Reviewed by Peter Paton 7/8/2006
Val

You have discovered heaven on earth
Very spiritual write

Peter

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