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The Dog Who Came To Breakfast
By Maggie m grinnell
Thursday, November 05, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
This story is about a dog who wanted breakfast like any other person which is how she feels she is.
THE DOG WHO CAME
Daisy, a white fluffy miniature poodle
with sad brown eyes, is ready
Daisy runs to the table, jumps up onto
the empty oak chair and faces the
The kids have already been served
their eggs and sausage by now.
Daisy doesn’t see her plate of food.
She tilts her head as if to say ‘where
is my plate? Maybe wagging my tail.’
Swish, swish goes the tail across the
bottom of the chair.
The kids laughingly call out to their
Ester turns and sees Daisy sitting in
one of the chairs wagging her tail.
Kevin, one of Ester’s kids, points to
Daisy saying “She wants what we
have.” He grabs a piece of sausage
with his 2 fingers, reaches over
to Daisy, handing her the piece of
“Stop it” Ester demands, taking the
piece of pork from Kevin.
Kevin and the other kids feel hurt
when their mom doesn’t want to feed
Seeing the disappointed faces
surrounding the table, Ester gives the
sausage to Daisy. The kids
screams “yeah.” Daisy thought to
herself ‘Next time, go for the eggs.’
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|Reviewed by Lee Pritchett
|fun, with good strong imagery. also a good representation of a dogs personality!|