|Reviewed by * Starman * *
|Great metaphor, Karla. Are you sure you weren't describing yourself?
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Sensual and powerful, hugely atmospheric...Love, Diana|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
You have a captivating style which is quite unique - I greatly enjoyed this excellent story!!
Hugs and Love,
|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|Oh, my, Karla, you surprised me here! I thought for sure we'd be talking about one of those Texas superstorms. And I was right. What I got was a superstorm of shared passion which really started moving my emotions with your "Dark eyes promised a night of passion."
But I just hate the thought of a baby, a tiny but real person, being thought of as "a little souvenier." For sure, that attitude brings "A World of Hurt." Yes, I say it's time for this stud to stop being a sperm-donor and to start being a man. Babies need fathers, not visitors.
My dear Karla, you packed an amazing amount of drama in so few lines!
A terrific piece of literature by a great writer. Well done!
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|Lol, this is great, Carla! what's done it the dark will come to the light, for sure. I love the way you write, my Texas friend!|
|Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)
|i do so enjoy your style, my friend..your works are exquisite|
|Reviewed by Linda Law
|Karla, your writing is UNIQUE... you have a gift... enjoyed this one as well as many others! San Antonio is my "home", sure know about what you write..many of your stories are visual to me!|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Creative descriptions, Karla. Awesome!
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|You have done wonders with your writings. Only Karla can write like this. Unique and well-worth the reading.
Sandie May :o)
|Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
|Nice imagery and writing...|
|Reviewed by Da Lady Mystik Mystik
|Love the photo and the piece.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|certainly a great twister Karla, had me fooled. But you can handle her. love G|
|Reviewed by Olita Williams
|Keep writing!!! I want more!!!! Great imagery and I love the piccy.
Hugs from down under.
|Reviewed by Ace Antonio Hall
|With all the winds you've been through, I understand the inspiration...Your imagery and word choice more visual than any picture; powerful, and quaintly sexy. You seemed to have written this in December, but of course a good write is timeless.
|Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
|I like the double-edge in this, and the photo too. Ca I put a picture on a blog page? Eileen|
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
|I enjoyed reading this and quite interesting the metaphors used and the personifications of such.
|Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
|Wonderful story, love the connection between the stormy relationship and the real storm. terrific!!!!Sandi|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Wonderful caring intense package Karla~!
Warm hugs and Love, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
|Reviewed by Carol Rzadkiewicz
This poem is so beautifully written and so very profound. I love your use of imagery and the sub-text is powerful.
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Lol ... indeed.
|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|LoL!!!!!! Thanks for the humor. Enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Very nice, thank you for sharing.
Peace, love, and Light,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Lol....thanks for shating...you are toooo funny!!
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Yep, I saw one of those little funnel thingys one day and told my friend someone is in for it. Not really a tornado yet, but headed for one. Sure enough they were. Thankfully it landed up the road a piece.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|A unique and I must say lovely turn of style for you that I enjoyed tremendously. Well done.
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|This is great Karla thanks for the laughs
|Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
|Oh my goodness! WOW!
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|wow-a lot packed into this little write!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Uh oh, indeed! It's about time he pays the fiddler! LOL He's been fiddlin' around; he's been a baaaaaaaaaaaad boy, hasn't he?? Cute write; very well penned1 Love the pic! YIKES.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Do more stories! PLEASE??