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| Reviewed by * Starman * * |
3/1/2009 |
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Great metaphor, Karla. Are you sure you weren't describing yourself?
Rockie Coppolella |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
1/4/2009 |
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| Sensual and powerful, hugely atmospheric...Love, Diana |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
12/12/2008 |
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Dear Karla,
You have a captivating style which is quite unique - I greatly enjoyed this excellent story!!
Hugs and Love,
Lance
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
11/14/2008 |
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Oh, my, Karla, you surprised me here! I thought for sure we'd be talking about one of those Texas superstorms. And I was right. What I got was a superstorm of shared passion which really started moving my emotions with your "Dark eyes promised a night of passion."
But I just hate the thought of a baby, a tiny but real person, being thought of as "a little souvenier." For sure, that attitude brings "A World of Hurt." Yes, I say it's time for this stud to stop being a sperm-donor and to start being a man. Babies need fathers, not visitors.
My dear Karla, you packed an amazing amount of drama in so few lines!
A terrific piece of literature by a great writer. Well done!
Richard
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
8/19/2008 |
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| Lol, this is great, Carla! what's done it the dark will come to the light, for sure. I love the way you write, my Texas friend! |
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| Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader) |
7/8/2008 |
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| i do so enjoy your style, my friend..your works are exquisite |
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| Reviewed by Linda Law |
6/28/2008 |
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| Karla, your writing is UNIQUE... you have a gift... enjoyed this one as well as many others! San Antonio is my "home", sure know about what you write..many of your stories are visual to me! |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/26/2008 |
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Creative descriptions, Karla. Awesome!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
3/31/2008 |
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You have done wonders with your writings. Only Karla can write like this. Unique and well-worth the reading.
Sandie May :o) |
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| Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz |
3/5/2008 |
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| Nice imagery and writing... |
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| Reviewed by Da Lady Mystik Mystik |
2/29/2008 |
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| Love the photo and the piece. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
2/23/2008 |
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| certainly a great twister Karla, had me fooled. But you can handle her. love G |
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| Reviewed by Olita Williams |
2/9/2008 |
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Keep writing!!! I want more!!!! Great imagery and I love the piccy.
Hugs from down under. |
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| Reviewed by Ace Antonio Hall |
2/5/2008 |
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With all the winds you've been through, I understand the inspiration...Your imagery and word choice more visual than any picture; powerful, and quaintly sexy. You seemed to have written this in December, but of course a good write is timeless.
Great work. |
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| Reviewed by Eileen Granfors |
1/25/2008 |
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| I like the double-edge in this, and the photo too. Ca I put a picture on a blog page? Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
1/12/2008 |
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I enjoyed reading this and quite interesting the metaphors used and the personifications of such.
Awesome!
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Sandi Schraut |
1/3/2008 |
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| Wonderful story, love the connection between the stormy relationship and the real storm. terrific!!!!Sandi |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
12/27/2007 |
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Wonderful caring intense package Karla~!
BE SAFE!
Warm hugs and Love, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive! |
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| Reviewed by Carol Rzadkiewicz |
12/21/2007 |
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Karla,
This poem is so beautifully written and so very profound. I love your use of imagery and the sub-text is powerful.
--Carol |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Mushi |
12/20/2007 |
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Lol ... indeed.
God bless,
Sandie. |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
12/13/2007 |
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| LoL!!!!!! Thanks for the humor. Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
12/13/2007 |
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Very nice, thank you for sharing.
Peace, love, and Light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/13/2007 |
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Lol....thanks for shating...you are toooo funny!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
12/13/2007 |
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Yep, I saw one of those little funnel thingys one day and told my friend someone is in for it. Not really a tornado yet, but headed for one. Sure enough they were. Thankfully it landed up the road a piece.
Walt
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/13/2007 |
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A unique and I must say lovely turn of style for you that I enjoyed tremendously. Well done.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
12/12/2007 |
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This is great Karla thanks for the laughs
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Ann Scarborough |
12/12/2007 |
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Oh my goodness! WOW!
Love,
annie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
12/12/2007 |
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| wow-a lot packed into this little write! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/12/2007 |
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Uh oh, indeed! It's about time he pays the fiddler! LOL He's been fiddlin' around; he's been a baaaaaaaaaaaad boy, hasn't he?? Cute write; very well penned1 Love the pic! YIKES.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Do more stories! PLEASE?? |
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