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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/22/2007 |
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I love the lines you use, Tiana Starr; such imagery! My favorite lines:
"...watching ponies prance
to the beat of the bunnies
thump-thump on the bongo drum...."
Well done! A lovely tribute.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/22/2007 |
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Tiara Starr~
This is absolutely beautiful! Very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D |
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