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A Conversation Between Mothers (Louisa Mason and Audrey)
By Michelle R Kidwell Power In The Pen
Friday, May 25, 2007

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Louisa May says:

You're Mom is sending you to a better place, we just had a long talk about it


 


 


 


 


Louisa May says:



Hey Audrey


Louisa May says:



I gave you all a scare didn't I?


MotherHubbard7 says:



Hi


MotherHubbard7 says:



how are you?


MotherHubbard7 says:



Yes, you certianly did


MotherHubbard7 says:



I think poor Susie might never get over it


Louisa May says:



Actually all considered, I am doing okay, longing for something over than this hospital food


Louisa May says:



LOL


MotherHubbard7 says:



well, you might as well get use to that one, as you will be having it for a while


Louisa May says:



I know


Louisa May says:



But seriously I wanted to talk to you about Susie


MotherHubbard7 says:



and after you come home, you have to be on that heart healthy diet


Louisa May says:



I know


MotherHubbard7 says:



I know, you want to talk me out of sending her to that facility


Louisa May says:



I can live with that, because at least I will be home


Louisa May says:



Yeah its not a good place Audrey, I speak from experience


Louisa May says:



There are better options, better facilities


MotherHubbard7 says:



she needs help, and that is the closest place available


Louisa May says:



Closest is not always the best


MotherHubbard7 says:



I would have to send her to Kansas if I didn't send her to this one


Louisa May says:



Please listen to me, because I am speaking from experience


MotherHubbard7 says:



at least she would get the help she needs, even if they aren't the most caring to the patients


Louisa May says:



Then send her to Kansas


Louisa May says:



They have many deaths linked to that facility


MotherHubbard7 says:



we can't afford that facility


Louisa May says:



Several patients killed themselves


Louisa May says:



I will help you


MotherHubbard7 says:



I just don't know what to do. I don't want her to harm herself again


Louisa May says:



Thats not the answer Audrey


Louisa May says:



If I had been sent to a place like that I would not be here today


MotherHubbard7 says:



there doesn't seem to actually be an answer


Louisa May says:



I was once in Susie's place


MotherHubbard7 says:



I didn


Louisa May says:



I will help you send her to Kansas


MotherHubbard7 says:



I didn't know that


Louisa May says:



Not many people do


MotherHubbard7 says:



I don't want her that far from me


Louisa May says:



There is a private facilty in Tenesse, I can help you send her there, I have the money and I would be honored if you would let me help her in that way


MotherHubbard7 says:



as it is, I am not sleeping at night because I am trying to always know what she is doing


Louisa May says:



You have to get sleep yourself


MotherHubbard7 says:



I couldn't live w. myself if she tried again


MotherHubbard7 says:



she still won't tell me why she tried in the first place


Louisa May says:



i know


Louisa May says:



She wasnt really trying to hurt herself


Louisa May says:



I know it doesnt make sense but she wasnt


MotherHubbard7 says:



she told me, but I am not sure I believe her


Louisa May says:



Believe her, I told you I have been in that place before


MotherHubbard7 says:



what if she is just trying to cover for what she did?


Louisa May says:



It may be hard to believe but I wasnt trying to kill myself when I slit my wrists


Louisa May says:



I am sure you have seen the scars


MotherHubbard7 says:



yes, I have


MotherHubbard7 says:



I am just sick with worry she will do it again


Louisa May says:



I have talked to her I dont think she is trying to cover what she did


MotherHubbard7 says:



I'm sure you think I don't love my daughter, b.c I would send her to such a horrible place


Louisa May says:



I never said that


MotherHubbard7 says:



I know you didn't


Louisa May says:



But I told you I would help you send her to the private facility here in Tenesse, will you let me do that?


MotherHubbard7 says:



I hate to burden you with that expense


Louisa May says:



I have come to think of Susie like a niece, I would do the same with Rebekka Rachel


Louisa May says:



it's not a burden


Louisa May says:



I have the money, I dont like to talk about it, but I have it


MotherHubbard7 says:



I know it can't be cheap


Louisa May says:



I didnt say it was cheap I asked if I could help


MotherHubbard7 says:



I guess so


Louisa May says:



I was rewarded money from the courts from the man who raped me, I havent been able to use it, it just felt wrong, but for this it seems right


Louisa May says:



I would help Rebekka Rachel if she needed that kind of help and I will do the same for Susie


MotherHubbard7 says:



I know Susie will be glad not to be going to the "prison hospital" as she calls it


Louisa May says:



I know I researched this place yesterday, they can bring stuff with them, even there laptops for the first week they go through extensive therapy


MotherHubbard7 says:



I hope it is nicer than that other place


Louisa May says:



Its alot nicer


MotherHubbard7 says:



I have to agree with Susie, that other place was like a prison


Louisa May says:



they have gardens that wrap around the buliding, they have a recrecreation room


MotherHubbard7 says:



I think she hasn't stopped crying since I told her she was going there


Louisa May says:



And only a week of having to be away from there family, then they have visiting days three days a week


Louisa May says:



And they have spiritual counselling as well


MotherHubbard7 says:



I worry about her so much.


Louisa May says:



Thank you for letting me do this, I feel as if I can help her in someway


MotherHubbard7 says:



of all my children, she is the most fragile


Louisa May says:



the way I was helped


MotherHubbard7 says:



I hope it helps


MotherHubbard7 says:



she's just been so affected by everything that happened to her


Louisa May says:



People look at me and feel the same way but it takes alot of inner strength to surive what we have survived, and to live with this monster MD


MotherHubbard7 says:



I imagine it does


MotherHubbard7 says:



she's so strong, even though she does not think she is


Louisa May says:



Yes she is


Louisa May says:



I am afraid I have to go Audrey, the nurses are coming in with a sleeping pill


MotherHubbard7 says:



ok, I will let you tell Susie the good news


MotherHubbard7 says:



she is itching to talk to you


Louisa May says:



Good and tell her I am going to make it


Louisa May says:



That the heart attack was mild and she did the exactly right thing


ouisa May says:



just a second


MotherHubbard7 says:



she just came in the room


Louisa May says:



these pills knock me out quickly :S


MotherHubbard7 says:



ok, she is just going to talk on my account, not sign in to her own


Louisa May says:



okay


Louisa May says:



Hey Susie!


MotherHubbard7 says:



Hi


MotherHubbard7 says:



Mom told me you are going to be okay


MotherHubbard7 says:



I wanted to say I am sorry


Louisa May says:



Yes thank you, you did the exactly right thing


Louisa May says:



About what sweetie?


MotherHubbard7 says:



for causing you to have a heartattack


Louisa May says:



that wasnt you sweetie, the MD has started affecting my heart


MotherHubbard7 says:



it's all my fault


MotherHubbard7 says:



I made you drag up your past when you were already low, and it made you have a heart attack


Louisa May says:



When I dropped the plate at lunch yesterday, that should have been the clue because I had a sharp pain going through my arm


Louisa May says:



No honey it was not your fault, and you did the exactly right thing, if you hadn't been so quick to action I may not be here


MotherHubbard7 says:



but talking about your past had to upset you


MotherHubbard7 says:



and you didn't need that


Louisa May says:



No honey


Louisa May says:



It wasnt that at all


MotherHubbard7 says:



I should have asked that of you


Louisa May says:



Sometimes you have to talk about your past


Louisa May says:



You cant hold on to that pain


Louisa May says:



so actually you helped me


MotherHubbard7 says:



talking about mine gives me nightmares and flashbacks


Louisa May says:



I wanted to share with you some good news though


Louisa May says:



its more fresh for you sweetie


MotherHubbard7 says:



I haven't eveen told Rebekah Rachel or anyone some of the stuff I went through


Louisa May says:



I know honey


Louisa May says:



Did you want the good news?


MotherHubbard7 says:



I haven't eveen told Rebekah Rachel or anyone some of the stuff I went through


Louisa May says:



I know honey


Louisa May says:



Did you want the good news?


Louisa May says:



You are not going to have to go to that PTSD facilitity


MotherHubbard7 says:



really? that sounds too good to be true


Louisa May says:



You're Mom is sending you to a better place, we just had a long talk about it


Louisa May says:



This place you are going to you can bring your journal even your laptop


MotherHubbard7 says:



I'm surprised you were able to change her mind


Louisa May says:



and you arent restrained


Louisa May says:



I knew she would sweetie, she only wants the best for you


Louisa May says:



I can't talk long though honey, the nurses just gave me a sleeping pill


MotherHubbard7 says:



but she can't afford the other place


MotherHubbard7 says:



it's private


Louisa May says:



You can come by and see me tomorrow if you would like though


Louisa May says:



Thats not your worry


MotherHubbard7 says:



I have a confession to make


Louisa May says:



What sweetie?


MotherHubbard7 says:



I kinda sorta hurt myself on purpose last night.


Louisa May says:



What did you do sweetie?


MotherHubbard7 says:



I cut my wrist, but not all the way across. not as bad as before. I just made a few little marks


Louisa May says:



Its not good


Louisa May says:



Thats not good sweetie


MotherHubbard7 says:



I was so frusterated b.c Mom wouldn't listen to me


Louisa May says:



I told you I would talk to her


Louisa May says:



I am going to have to go though sweetie, these pills kick in pretty quickly


MotherHubbard7 says:



but I tried to talk to her and she wouldn't listen to me


Louisa May says:



But I am going to be okay, I want you to know that


MotherHubbard7 says:



I'm sorry


Louisa May says:



I talked to her sweetie


MotherHubbard7 says:



I started to not even tell anyone


Louisa May says:



Why are you sorry, you arent giving me the pills


Louisa May says:



Good Night honey


MotherHubbard7 says:



no, that I hurt myself


MotherHubbard7 says:



I let everyone down again


Louisa May says:



no honey but you have to stop that okay?


MotherHubbard7 says:



I will try


Louisa May says:



ok


Louisa May says:



Good night


Louisa May says:



I will see you tomorrow okay?


MotherHubbard7 says:



ok, good night


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Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/29/2007
Excellent conversational piece between two concerned mothers; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)


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