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Babe's Birthday Surprise
By J. D. Maris
Tuesday, March 19, 2002

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An A.D, favorite.. Adult Story introducing Babe, an attractive redhead and her suitor..Enjoy!

Michael, was a surgeon, at Brookview Hospital.. Doc, (as he was known), knew my birthday was coming up this Monday,and all week long he's been leaving me romantic messages, on my phone,sending a rose to work, showing up to take me to lunch when I unexpectedly had a client cancel lunch.Im a redheaded high powered Filly thoroughbred, and Doc liked that.Actually, He LOVED it. I was writing and editing and reviewing, and its just this ambitious drive and determination that REALLY turns him on. You've heard that Writers live through their characters? Well, my favorite character,Babe had nothing on my personal life. Here is what happened.. It was Wednesday evening, and as I came home,began to prepare for a lonely evening to myself. My son was away at his friend's house till next week.This was my 38th birthday weekend and I had no plans.I checked my messages and there is Doc 's voice....oohhhh that soft Irish accent just gets me tingling as I remember how he makes me melt, with kisses that set me on fire. "Babe, I'm running late, so dont wait up, but just check to make sure that my suitcase is ready to go first thing in the morning. Love you, " his voice trailed off.. Dammit! he had the worst timing! I finally have time to relax and hes going away? Yep. He had this huge suitcase packed, along with a second smaller one- both with locks. Uh oh.Must be some secret mission.I wondered where a surgeon could be going with all that gear..Hmm as I enter the bedroom, there is the most beautiful array of red, pink and white roses, festively arranged in several large vases,and his fragrance filled the air. I'm looking around, the French Windowed doors, overlooking the breathtaking breakers below,were locked. This was our secret love nest. Our master bedroom was a huge, 35x35 ft square room,with floor to ceiling picture windows. A huge adjoining walk in closet, and to the left, was our love tub as he called it. Huge, marbled black heart shaped fiberglass tub,complete with skylites and glass block.It reflected light and overlooked the bluff with a panoramic view..This is too lonely for me this weekend, I thought as I began to undress and run water. I added his favorite Vanilla, watched as Bubbles foamed ..I needed to relax..and as I slowly succumbed to the frothy mix,I began to think where my closest friends were. I thought,well Ashleigh is away, Bailey is in Vegas, Kimmie was away on a model shoot in Milan, so what the hell was I going to do this weekend?Sinking deeper into the tub, my mind trailed off.I was drifting when Doc suddenly appeared and interrupted my thoughts.

There he stood, stacked and loaded and looking very hot and tanned like a surfer, in this Butler suit, asking

"Mind if I join you, Babe?"

Startled, I look across the room... "What are YOU DOING?", and I began to laugh.. Staring in disbelief. "I thought you were at the hospital, finishing rounds?"

He walked towards me, carrying another rose, chilled Champagne and a note.He cleared his throat. "Hughghmm..the gentleman you seek is away, however he asked me to personally see that you received this token of his love. Meager as it is."

I was Laughing and blinking,as he came closer with this serving tray, and resting it next to me.. He poured me the champagne,and I splashed the bubbles all over his face, with my legs.

"Uuhmmm.Does milady seek my favors?? Shouldn't you read the note perhaps?"

Upon opening the envelope,two tickets fall out onto the tub deck, and the letter reads: "You are cordially invited to join the man of your dreams in the next sailing of the Princess Cruise Ship, leaving for Ports Cabo San Lucas and the Mexican Riviera, Thursday, July 11,2002. RSVP immediately as the cruise is booked!

" "MICHAEL!!! How did you do this?" I glowed ."I thought you were going away? Your suitcase is packed? Oh my GOD!! this is tomorrow - I Have nothing to wear!!!!"

The alcohol and panic set in. "Honey, honey," He says laughing at his prank. "You're fine with what you have on now,"winking at me..
"Oh yeah,Tiger?" and I put my arms around his neck. Pulled him closer and while delivering a devilishly good French kiss, he fell into the tub fully dressed still kissing me.. Laughter Erupts..His eyes sparkling like London Blue Topaz..

"Aahhh DOC! You didn't forget my birthday after all! How wonderful..but I need to choose my things and especially those sexy, black teddies and catsuits you love.." I purred .

"Babe, you've been working on deadlines so long, I thought I'd pack what you need- its all in that little suitcase." he says teasingly.

"Well then what's in that Great Big One?" I asked innocently.
"Thats all MY stuff, Darlin. I figure I'll bring all the things you love me in,and wear them for you.I know how to race your engine, Babe."

"But Mike, we'll be gone 10 days, what Am I gonna wear ? What did you pack?" now raising my eyebrows suspiciously and drinking more champagne.

"Babe, I packed your swimsuits, especially the thongs, all the ones I love, AND plenty suntan lotion. I promise you, that's ALL you will need!"

He has now fully removed all his wet clothes, and as he begins to slowly kiss me on my neck, moving further down my wet cleavage, placing soft baby kisses against my stomach and rubbing my thighs..he eyed me....

"Babe, why do you think they call it The LOVE BOAT? leaning up kissing me hard,leaving my Body aching for more.

"Well, Honey," I say searching his eyes,and locking my long legs around his, "You are All the Man I need. Whadd'ya say, we take a test spin,since we're in water already?"

"I love you, Babe. More than you realize."Michael responded.. "I can't wait to get you to Mexico.I have another surprise for you. Jussst Wait and See!."

And with that, my whirlwind birthday surprise kicked itself off, in a spectacular haze of red hot lovemaking..all the while I thought what a lucky woman I was. Copyright (c) 2002 Donna M Maris

Copyright Donna Maris
March 2004 All Rights Reserved

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