Become a Fan
By Mitzi Kay Jackson
Friday, September 27, 2002
In the blood of Caucasian there was the need and more heatedly desire for superiority....to be above all...the be all...at this very moment there was a war amongst her community all about power the so called new against old ways.....but really it was all about young whites and old whites who were controling and maintaining...the few of us that were living amoung them were hagglers were just followers of the rules and kept to ourselves....but the winds were changing there were the newer few blacks who ran with the younger new agers...the more likely loser of this inside war. Why cause they had no ideal of history they only though of theirselves and the power that they could have over the humans......They troubly under estimated the elders.
Eve drank cause she walked along the ages. She lived throughout centuries and Blacks now today don't seem to realize their "peridodic victory"....They are so proud to say we came a long way!!!!! But Eve seen the massacres throughout the times 1-2-3 countless at times....and to walk the streets now seeing them proud to beable to drive Benzs' in dilapidated neighborhoods...walking in alligator shoes....WE HAVE LOST SO MUCH TRYING TO BE LIKE AND KEEP UP WITH OUR EUROPEAN FAMILY......
Our blood was full of insecurities and egotism...it was filled with a lackness of and unsecured trust. Eve thought our color made us so different that we stood out enough, and doubled by the fact that no one wants to be different....we felled boy did we fall.......but unlike our European family who are "the' great salemen"......"the great conspirator"...the truth never leaves us it just get surpresed and surpressed til it pops back up and explode in our own faces....Eve swallows another drink to that thought, her head lowered then she feels a form standing in front of her with slightly blurred eyes she looks up.
It was John...he was a goodman just about as good as one could be...his heart was full of everyones problem that he knew, that is why he played music that is why he played music where he played music...he knew like she knew the troubles of this world, he knew of his past and her past. Only he studied and read...... she had been there. With a warm smiled he stood waitng for her to invite him to sit or else he would speak quick and simple pleasantries and make his way back to his side of the planet.
Eve liked John because he was intelligent....he was full of ideas and dreams...but most of all he was honest...and at times shy and sweet. Eve's blood was stirred her visions of Lee, past thoughts of her last feast, her people and now her legacy. The drinks swirled inside of her she could feel it mixing in with her blood lifting her nerves bouncing them back and fourth off the inside of her skin. Eve aquired a smile just enough to give him the ok...maybe one of their conversation would cool her down...slow her down but she had reached her limit for sure. Eve took her onxy graced hand and rubbed her hair from out of her face and before she could say anything...
John had made himself comfortable across the table at her booth and grabbed both of her hands..."Eve, I must say that as long as I have had the pleasure I have never seen you so......" and with that he paused thinking to himself this isn't the way to start with her. "Baby are you ok?" John said wishing to erase his earlier words. Eve looked him in his spirit green eyes with a hazel rim and saw a slight wanting and a genuine concern...Eve looked deep into him it was hard to read him because under certain looks he would become embarresed...his education elevated his consciousness.... So her roam through him was almost spiritual. Eve removed her hands from his..."I know John I am done for the night....I did enjoy your set tonight" "I couldn't tell from that laugh you bellop out" they both looked at each other and laughed again a deep sound aroused from her stomach her head went back and her eyes closed feeling more than the tickle of his words...
John cut his laugh short and gazed upon her face and neck glowing....and her chest that was peeking out from the top of her fitting dress. "God" he said to himself........which she caught from the straighten of her head. "Glad to have gotten that from out of you...." Eve wanted to pour out another but she thought it better to hold it in only slight gigles got past her lips. "Have you eaten?" Another sideways gigle/laugh.....
knowing that she had planned to get her fill tongiht ..............."Yes, I will be leaving soon" and before he could say anything Eve looked back at him in his face saying "I will stay around long enough for my head to clear though".....puting him at ease... "I was wishing you'd be here tonight.........I have something special for you that I composed with you in mind" John said
removing his thin long fingers that was in tents on the table as he had been leaning forward, elbows in the air. Now in a relaxed postion he motioned that he would be back and walk over to the bar where Lee was standing. "What's the occasions?" Lee said as he made-up John's request for a smooth Long Island with crushed ice and lemon&lime...... John looked hard at his piano than to Eve and took a deep breath......."Yeah it is in the air thick tonight" Lee said, and as he handed John his drink he imformed him not to be messing with his woman over there(talking about Eve) "I'm sure to be" both smiled with hints of truth in their eyes. (Jokingly)
John brief intermission was over in no time and he was back up on the stage fingers grooving to a soft, sensual rhythm.....the sounds flowed and encircled everyone there...continuosly hi's and lows that stirred the emotions made the sin inside her suduce herself....right as Lee brought the second half filled cup of coffee over to her their ways a break in the music a one second break a
drop in the line....
and there it was "Lee will you take me home?" Her eyes crying for love ....... her eyes spoke volumes that flowed from the pores of her body and dacned around Lee lifting the hairs off his skin like statci.............there was no question for him the yearning he had for her had surpast his pride, his commitment to himself. Now he would count the seconds when he would be alone with her.
Lee looked at John performing John was playing like he had never heard him play before everyone was in awe.....was in their own utopia together. The rhythm had a flow that spilled out love containers of it allover the flow. Hands were doing the under-the table-dance. So was legs and feet touching and rubbing and hitting spots that was never meant to be hit in public. People moved closer together and the undertone of the music was moans and secret sighs.........The opening of the bar door broke Eve's dream of licking the skin off John's neck and in walks a tenderly built redhead, with creamy skin and a brown satin like trenchcoat........
Lee meet her on the otherside of the bar she had been there a couple of times alot when she and John were dating...she was back in town and wanted to surprise John. She order a white zinfendale and settle on a barstool turning watching John play. At the end of John's set those who were left in the bar was on fire over half the crowd dipped out and John sat there afraid to look up at the woman he had played so feverishly for.
Eve stood up and walked over to John placing some dollars in his glass...John looked-up Eve could feel the defeat he was feeling of himself....the venerabilty he opened himself up to. John could feel Eve walking over to him...... he could feel her arm reaching out and his heart started to sink inside his stomach.........what he didn't see was Cherl standing on the other side of Eve almost in tears. John grabbed Eve arm...... " before you leave let me take some pictures of you here on stage...don't say no, don't say no" "..sure John anything for you...." Eve left him behind her for him to find a renewd love with Cherl.....
The bar empytied and the flow of blood through her bloodline was mellow and warm Lee caressed her shoulders and kissed the nape of her neck while she sat at the bar watching him and John clear tables and put up chairs a routine they did together on some nights when the two of them would sit up there talking men talk....or Lee giving advice.
John had once loved Cherl it was her immaturity that erked him but he had never turned her away not once and he wasn't for surely not going to turn her away tonight....not after that blow to his manhood that he knew was more than likely going to happen. He sidewayed watched them (Lee and Eve) he followed Lee's hands on that glowing skin, he traced Eve's sigh in the air.....John opened his bag kissing Cherl on her forehead and took out his camera...then he turn full frontedly toward Eve and Lee slowly walking over to them he took Eve's hand from off her lap smiling at Lee and lead her to the stage. First she spreaded her black clog completely around her the only skin you saw was her collar bone and neck. The next was a picture of her laying on the stage floor.....
Eve and John danced with the camera between them for close to forty-five mintues while Cherl played music on the jukebox and Lee tidy up and joined Cherl at the music maker......John and Eve was hearing their own music...... she turned to please him and his camera and he caught her at her best............then he just stopped he stood motionless then he coldly/hurtfully said thank you.
John swallowed his thought so that Eve couldn't read his expression but it didn't work. There was no more that she could do for him at this time. Her thoughts and heart was stuck in the past relationships between their bloodlines........It would have been more crossing than he could even imagine. Color and past realities were just a semi leap across. Eve watched as John packed up his things Cheral walked over and stood over him....and that is when it came back to him he remember the smell of her skin and with his eye closed her laid his face into her stomach wanting to welcome her back home....
Lee sat next to Eve on the stage rubbing through her hair....John and Cherl said their goodnights and walked out...Lee followed locking the door he knew that he wouldn't even make it to his car with her.....he had been containing and behaving as long as he could. Smelling the rise of his blood Eve began to feel giddy and her senses stired...she could feel the pull of her fangs....again her mind becamed filled with the question? should she conceal them or should she just plunge inside of him like he was going to do her? Sitting behind her her pulled her back to him with one hand on her shoulders and the other holding her hair out of the way he kissed her neck sucking her shoulder blade...passionetly rubbing her stomach and breast turning her side ways so the cuppled breast he had in his hand could fill his mouth, fully turned to him leggs wrapped around him while he stood on his knees he covered her....................
Lee woke to a burning hunger...it felt as if his stomach had strunk and that he was opening his eyes for the first time......His eyes had been cried shut sealed by tears....trying to sit up in a bed he doesn't even remember getting in...in a room filled with ancient paintings and jewery and furnishing.... he could feel the chill in the air............but it wasn't American air...sitting up he grabbed his stomach then he falled on to the floor Lee tried to pull his thoughts together....The bar, John, the redhead, Eve!!!! I split second thought of passion but the pain was over whelming everything was bright and clear then more shrinking of the stomach..."Ah........ he yelled out and her vision was coming to like a dream but he wasn't dreaming was he? She was flowing to him flowing............. her steps was so smooth that it seemed as if she was sliding through the air......
"Eve" he called out to her rising his arm for her assitance. they felt as if he had forty pound weights on it........Eve lifted him up without a struggle back onto the bed.... feeling her body pressed against his he could now remember the feel of her body and he started to rise but the pain kick him again right in the gut....Eve was moving like a stranger to him now he never figured her for the arkward morning after person...in her face it was more to it.... her expression with new to him and he had studied her. Questions circled his head and as she went around him he grab her and pulled her down holding her down....what is going on? whats wrong with me? teary eyed Eve begged him to let her go she could have broken loose easily but she wanted to feel that humanly bond with him for that moment...........
he had no choice but to let her go the pain wasn't havin it....."I will make it all better and explain everything" she brought him over a thick warm drink that he drank and felled back into his own dreams...his body felt as if it was being cleansed.........repaired.....strengthened...He stretch himself out over the round pedstal bed.......and Eve stood at the side of the bed behind layers and layers of white transparent curtains that allowed her to look through at the sunsetting in her home of Cape RoJo in the outskirts of the Gulf Coastal Plains over looking the Gulf of Mexico....it was his desire to be there....Eve hoped it would ease him calm his emotions as she would tell him the story of her and .......now him
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|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|You need to be published and I have said so b4, I just hope 'they' listen.
Love, JC xoxoxoxo
|Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione
|Mitzi this is a good read, did a good job writing this one. AuthorsDen is acting a bit on the weird side for me now or days so I am posting everything on my journals on diary-x and d-land, then updated the main website. I will be sending you and Ron a link to a place where you can post up your work at diary-x. It is called the writers muse.|
|Reviewed by RON P KING
|so far so good can:t wait for the rest.part 3 of course.|
|Reviewed by richard poor
|i agree,this is a fine start of being greater and longer....|
|Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo
|This could be made into a book ...nice work ...love your characters...|
|Reviewed by lovechild
|gurl this story flows easily along the length I love how you let us get to know the characters and very detailed this is the begining of some awesome reading!!!!!|