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The Monster In My Closet
By Elijah Rousset
Friday, April 11, 2008

Rated "G" by the Author.

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This is about a child named john with a monster





                                           "The Monster In My Closet"

           There once was a boy named john, one night john was waiting for tomorrow morning to come and so he hurried up to his bed and waited for his dad to come up and tuck him in and he said dad can u check my closet? and so his dad checked his closet but there was no monsters then johns dad went down stairs and john heard a raddeling noise and hid under his blankets and called "DAD!!!!"then he hurried up the stairs and  replied  "Whats the matter son?"  and he said theres a monster in my closet and so the dad checked  but there was no monster  so he went down stairs again and soon john had fallen fast asleep.     The End.




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Reviewed by Z McClure 4/11/2008
Way to go Elijah! This is a good story. I would say use your spell-checker- at least one mispelled word slipped by. Keep on writing!
You will find that there are a lot of people here at Authors Den who will point out the strenths in your writing, but also, gently encourage you to write your best. Good story.

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