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Let Me Take You
By Kathleen L. McDonald
Saturday, June 05, 2010

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Two lovers dance and find intimacy while holding each other. Erotic work.


Let me take you, trust in me”

As he turned her palms up to kiss them

Pressing his lips to one and then the other

“Let me show you how I truly feel”

Cupping her face and stroking

Her cheeks with his thumbs

As his fingers slid back into her hair

“Let me take you”, as his lips cruised over hers

He asked for complete surrender

And surrender was a lot to ask

She gave him her mouth and

Then she gave him her body

They were dancing again, circling,

Swaying as the dreamy pleasure

He offered slipped into her like rich wine

“Let me take you”. He whispered

He was murmuring in her ear about

Her skin, her scent as he stroked over her

She felt like she was floating not dancing

Giving him what he wanted, she surrendered

Though it was slow, he could feel it

That gorgeous yielding of self

Undressing her as they danced

Taking almost painful care

Taking almost painful pleasure

As he removed each barrier that

Blocked his hands from her flesh

Slowly inch by inch she yielded

It was erotic, dancing in the firelight

The candlelit her naked body

Pressed close to his while he

Was still completely clothed

The light played over her skin

The chill making her shiver

Under his adoring hands, feeling

Her pulse jump under his mouth

Her breath catching as he touched her

Jerking as sensations overwhelmed

Digging her nails into him as he

Began the serenade of love

Little tortuous stokes that

Had her breath going short and harsh

His own blood pumping madly

“Let me take you” he whispered

Her body plunged and melted against his

Eyes glazed and stunned by emotions

He poured her unto the bed

And she watched him as he undressed

Skimming his finger over her leg

Lifting it and bending it he rubbed

His lips along her calf

“So much more I want of you”

Yes, so much more he wanted

And surrendering to it, to him

Gave him all he wanted

The deepest, darkest pleasures

Quivered inside of her

As he exploited and explored

Taking and taking

Until they both reached ecstasy




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Reviewed by Dark Knight 11/2/2014
One wonders if this has happened to you before or it is a fantasy yet to be enjoyed? -- well done-- I think I would prefer the fact that a woman would hold me tight against a wall with my writs handcuffed and her having her way with me-- that might make for an interesting poem
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/17/2010
Thank you for sharing this passionate and sensual account, Kat. Love, hugs, and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 6/5/2010
So very erotic, Kathy and I could feel the passion building with every line and her willingness to give herself to him completely. Very well done. ~Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by George Carroll 6/5/2010
Ah sweet memories recalled. Tenderly elicited.

Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/5/2010
Very nicely done Kathleen, your romantic side shines in this one.
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 6/5/2010
Oh, Kathy, you have most certainly "taken me." Very erotically emotional. I love the sound of your wordsm and the feel of his lips along her calf. Oh, yeah, you've certainly "taken me" with this one.
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