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Lonely Girl: The Other Woman
By Chessly Lynn Nesci
Monday, May 10, 2010

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The lovebirds started talking about how they felt about each other when a beautiful young girl appeared. ~Peace~


            Lonely Girl: The Other Woman



It was the sixth day of the cruise and the sexy waiter resumed his job as head waiter. He was the boss and could take off when he wanted. He usually never took off so his staff knew something was up.  Four days in a row was a first for the workaholic. Since his wife died tragically, all he had was his daughter Carrie. Everyone knew her as Care bear because she had a heart of gold and always thought of others before herself. Carrie’s mother died in a head on crash when she was just a baby. Her father was all she had and she was very protective of him.


 That was the secret that he was holding back, fearing the woman of his dreams would disappear when she knew he had a teenage daughter. He was in love once and very happy. It wasn’t his choice that the drunk driver took his wife. He thought he would never feel love again until the first day he saw the Lonely Girl. She was sitting alone on the balcony and stared at his package. She was the first woman to take his breath away and he couldn’t hide how he was feeling.  It was passion at first, then love stepped in and took over. It was magic when they looked into each other’s eyes and felt totally connected as one.


He had to tell his woman about his past and the daughter that was such a big part of his life. Would she approve of someone else taking the place of her mother? The Lonely Girl was so used to getting hurt that she just assumed he would dump her for the other woman. What she didn’t realize is he was falling for her just as much as she was falling for him. The feelings were finally mutual and they were in for a passionate ride down lovers’ lane…How often do you meet the person of your dreams and have them love you just as much as you love them?


 On the eighth day of the cruise the Lonely Girl decided to sit down with her man and find out what his intentions were. They didn’t know anything about each other except that they matched sexually.  Every time they locked eyes something happened inside. They started talking about how they felt about each other when a beautiful young woman appeared out of nowhere. She sat down with the two lovers and introduced herself. The Lonely Girl had a smile on her face knowing he wasn’t in love with someone else after all.


 A daughter she could handle but another woman that he was in love with would break her heart. She hugged the daughter and the three of them laughed until the sun went down. After his daughter went to sleep the lovers got down and went to town. The love making was so intense and at the end they both cried. For the first time it was tears of joy instead of tears of pain. They weren’t afraid of the love affair ending anymore. They both knew it was going to blossom into so much more…To be continued




                    © Copyright 2010 Chessly Lynn Nesci








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Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/11/2010
What they said? "I couldn't put it down, needed to read more..."
Great going! More, please?


Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/10/2010
Exceallant turn of events that leave the story open to all sorts of future possibilities...

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