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Is Your Life Still Your Friend: Excerpt 2
By Aberjhani
Thursday, May 26, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.
This is the second excerpt from my novel, Christmas When Music Almost Killed the World, which every day grows fatter, more demanding, and, I hope, more beautiful.
Hello Dear Readers,
Thank you for your interest in this story. It is now part of the novel titled Christmas When Music Almost Killed the World, which you can view by clicking on this link: http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewwork.asp?AuthorID=25279
I would also like to invite you enjoy the new UNCUT GOODIES Series taken from the same work.
Aberjhani
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
11/18/2007 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Mushi |
7/18/2005 |
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Aberjhani, beautiful write and excellent narrations! I love your smooth, easy to read style.
God bless, Aberjhani!
Sandie |
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| Reviewed by Peter Gardner |
5/30/2005 |
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| There is some excellent description here. For some reason this reminds me of Richard Wright. The song evokes Langston Hughes and a Blues tone. Desperation of your main character is played well and I love the image "silken sighs of a harp ... sermon of a drum. " |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
5/29/2005 |
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| I was riveted and totally absorbed by the beautiful language, flow and mood of this piece. Continued success with the novel, Aberjhani! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/27/2005 |
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Interesting and I like your style, very smooth, makes the read pleasurable. All the best with it.
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/27/2005 |
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Well written!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/27/2005 |
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excellent write, ashura; very well done! :)
now on to part one... *Grins* |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
5/27/2005 |
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| Damn, man, you putting it all together here. Don't know how I have missed the preceeding chapter but I shall remedy that forwith. Good combination of dialogue and narrative. Ver good. Your description of the music Danny Blue heard through the closed door is inspiring and writting by a progressive jazz devotee, unless I miss my guess. Like your style, man |
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