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Sunday, July 23, 2006

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If All Religion In This Holy Hell Cannot Teach You Anything, But To Forgive_

You'd Better Hold On To What Few True Friends You Think You Got Left - Adlive...

7-23-06_(Revised)

SHOOTING STAR ASPIRED GREATEST STORY EVER TOLD CONTINUED:

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PHOTO:

I Had Dig Thru My Files Photo To Find
WhatIs Black Hole-So Called Modern Kind
Of Scientist'Believe Black Hole Results_

From Shooting (Collapsing) Star -WRONG_

Universe In ItselfIs ONE BIG SPACE,It Is
Continuous BLACK OPEN HOLE That In It
All Stars(Life)Collapses Into,i.e.*SEWER

For Billions Stars That Exist In Eyes Of
Man In Eye's Of (God) That Exist Deny Of
NotIsNever Ending Continuum Black Space_

REMEMBER:

I TRASK Said There Are More Hells To
Endure Than Are Particles In Entire(Due)
Universe! To Make You Understand His_

VASTNESS Of (GOD)-That You Humanity Is
But Mere Spec Of Dust In His Eye,It Is
Whence He Wipes His Hand Away(Eye) You_

Humanity Will No Longer Exist! If Above
Can't Make You See How Mediocre Love
Of Human Beings Is Shit -Then You Have_

To IMAGINE VASTNESS Of (GOD)_

Imagine (God) Sitting On Chair At Your
Desk, Looken Down On You As You Are Sure
On Floor As An ANT - To Kill You He_

(God) Merely Steps On You With His Foot!

NOW:

Thats How Large Vastnness Of(God)Is And
How Small You Are(Mere Spec Of Dust)And
Gone From His Eye-You Are Now Dead In_

Black Hole (In Black Space)Of Universe
Which Is Merely a Continuum...

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I TRASK Can Go On & On But,You Still Do
Cannot See Read Past Less 3rd Grade(You)
Mentality...

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ME,TRASK "POETIC PROPHET"c 2006
TRASK...

* UNIVERSE Is Never Ending Sewer And
It Ends On Planet EARTH...

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GRADITUDE FOR TRUE FRIENDS:

My True Friends I Cannot Count Them On
1 Hand-They're TOTAL STRANGERS From UPON
Out Of Nowhere: Tom,Bill,Gus,Go Past_

James,Bill,Dr.Pete,Authorsden: Linda,Be
Elizabeth,Peter,Others-SimplyHad Name Be
Names -"I Play No Games-Seek No Fame"_

No Refrain IN THE END -I,TRASK Will Be
There For You In VASTNESS Of (God) See
ME,TRASK I'll Be In His Eye(s) Of (God)...

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BIG HINT TO YA IF:

You Don't Want Your Name Mentioned Or

Do Irrespective-It Is Already Written In

(God)'s His Your Book Of Life...

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Reviewed by richard cederberg 8/16/2006
You bring some things into perspective here Trask.

I think your were generous considering mankind specks of dust in God's eye. More like imploded molecules of stench on a festering dung heap.

Powerfully honest from the heart write. I admire you saluting true friends, they are few these days.

I think I've met the muse you had for this write. keep rocking the quill with the ink true said from heart poetic prophet.

In fraternity ...

Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Peter Paton 7/24/2006
Trask

Count me in brother..
And thanks for the honor..
It's a privilege to be in your exalted company...and us LA kids have got to stick together !

Peter
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/24/2006
Loud and clear message!!

Love Tinka

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