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A Delightful Moment
By L. K. Craft - Hisayasu
Thursday, September 07, 2006
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
If you're fortunate, you will breathe in a moment that lives forever.
A Delightful Moment
By L. K. Craft
Shyly, he gazes across the room.
Slowly, he bites his bottom lip, as if to inflict a little pain while enjoying me.
Our eyes briefly connect.
Quickly, he retreats by looking down.
Intrigued, I move about the exhibit thinking . . .
His captured smile beckons to be sorted out.
Many years later, still sorting . . .
© Copyright 2006 L.K. Craft
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| Reviewed by Sandra Daves |
11/5/2006 |
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| I very much like the way you are able to incorporate your emotions through words. As a writer, I try to filter my thoughts through my mind, heart and soul before I put pen to paper. Good job! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/23/2006 |
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Wow. I like this. I think I've acted like the guy in your poem more than once. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Jack Daley |
9/8/2006 |
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Wow! you sure put a lot into very few words. I admire a writer who can do this.
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels |
9/8/2006 |
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| loved this one!!!! |
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