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A Conversation Between Friends Cont..D ( With Sarah L Tagert) Story 1100
By Michelle R Kidwell Power In The Pen
Wednesday, October 04, 2006

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Sarah's character Susie and my character Rebekka Rachel find themselves discussing the pain of not knowing where Danniella is

 


 


 


 


 


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Hey Sus


How are you feeling?


SusieQ82 says:


I've been better, how are you?


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Same here I feel as if my world is spinning out of control with Danniella gone.  Why would someone want to take an innocent little girl?  It doesn't make sense to me


SusieQ82 says:


I don't know, it doesn't make sense


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


She's only a little girl


SusieQ82 says:


it seems like some of her relatives took her, doesn't it?


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


yea it seems but you probably know as much as I do


I feel as if I am being left out in the loop


SusieQ82 says:


I wouldn't say that. Mom's been keeping as much as she can from me


I just happen to overhear things, but don't tell Mom


don't tell anyone, but I heard Mom talking to Rick and she told him your mom had gotten an email w. a picture of Daniella tied to a chair and blind folded


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Same here Mom and Aunt Kendra talk in whispers, and they talk on the phone when they think I am asleep, I am still at Aunt Kendra's, but you know that I saw you today LOL


Yeah Kia told me about that, at least she doesnt think that this should all be kept from me


SusieQ82 says:


yeah, I think they are getting ready to move you over here, that's what mom said


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Maybe it would be good to be over there, I overheard them saying that Kia may stay for awhile with you guys, if your Mom says its okay, because she has to go to Russia she's adopting another little girl, but she wants to wait until we know more of what's going on


SusieQ82 says:


yeah, Kia is coming over here too


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I thought so


SusieQ82 says:


Maddie is here as you know


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Maddie came back today didn't she?  She had appointments Monday and Tuesday and she was with Mom?


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Okay that was a stupid question Sus, of course she came back this afternoon, my mind is still not here for obvious reasons


SusieQ82 says:


it's ok, neither is mine


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I am sorry i have been so focussed on Danniella I have not asked you how you are dealing with all that you've been through


SusieQ82 says:


it's ok. I understand


it's a miracle, but it seems I might not need the spine surgery


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Praise the Lord, I'd dance for you but I don't have my prosthesis on LOL


SusieQ82 says:


lol


yeah, so there might be light at the end of the tunnel for me


after all


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


okay that was lame, but I just had to say it LOL


SusieQ82 says:


did you know Mama and Rick have called off the wedding, at least for now?


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


oh my gosh no, why?


SusieQ82 says:


Daniella


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Oh


I miss her so much Susie, and Maddie is starting to scare me she is just going deeper and deeper within herself


SusieQ82 says:


I know, she hasn't said a word since your mom dropped her off here.


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


It's not really like her


SusieQ82 says:


no, it's not


I haven't seen her this withdrawn since the first day she got here


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I know it is rather scary


SusieQ82 says:


yeah


she's really playing the blame game. She feels like her sister being taken was all her fault


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


yeah I know


She feels as if she is to blame because she can't walk, I have tried to talk to her about that, but she just closes up on me


SusieQ82 says:


she's crying now. I can hear her in the next room. I feel so powerless


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


It hurts me so bad to see her hurting like this


She actually got mean with me the other day, she told me that it should be easy because I couldn't feel pain, she knows that I can feel emotional pain, and she knows what not feeling physical pain has done to me


I was just left without knowing what to say


SusieQ82 says:


she's lashing out b.c she's hurting, you just have to forgive her


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I have that just kind of shocked me


SusieQ82 says:


she's snapped at me a couple of times.


it's not like her at all, she's usually so humble and timid


I'm about to throw a shocker in here, so get ready


she doesn't understand that I do know how she feels. I nearly lost both my sisters once.


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I know you did I remember


SusieQ82 says:


why did I remember that now, and I couldn't before


I mean, you told me, but I actually remember it myself now.


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I dont know it will come back to you slowly


I guess


SusieQ82 says:


I wish I hadn't remembered now. It's all coming back to me, vividly.


why couldn't I have just kept forgetting? Now I see why no one wanted to tell me


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I'm sorry Sus, its not fair I know


SusieQ82 says:


sorry if I start making mistakes, it's hard to see through the tears.


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


believe me i understand


SusieQ82 says:


I


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Kia is in her room crying now herself, but she started back to school today, and not everyone treated her kindly


SusieQ82 says:


I'm trying not to bring Mama in here though and Lacey is sleeping in my room while Maddie is here


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Yeah Kia is trying to pretend that everything is okay, but its hard to hide it when we are sharing the room, and I finally got her to talk to me a little earlier


Why are some people so mean Sus?  I really don't understand that


SusieQ82 says:


We live in a cruel and now I see that worse than ever


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Kia told me what happened and I found myself shocked, I mean I guess I shouldnt have been with all the craziness, but I was


Some smart allec sophmore boy decided to kick her crutches from under her, and she was knocked to the ground on the cement, for like a minute until one of her friends came to help her, she just feels so bad about it


SusieQ82 says:


yeah, look at what that monster did to those girls in that Amish school


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


yeah that was horrible


SusieQ82 says:


yeah, it was


I cried for hours when I heard about it


SusieQ82 says:


it seems like I have been to the breaking point most of the time w. everything that is going on


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I feel that I am to the breaking point alot myself, with Danniella, and Kia, and still coming to terms with the fact that I lost both of my legs, but I am alive, and I have people that care about me, and despite all of this I hold on to the hope I find in Yeshua, all this evil is not going to go unpunished


SusieQ82 says:


I guess it's just everything I've gone through (darn memory, I just HAD to remember!) punishments can't come fast enough and be severe enough for me.


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I have emailed Ronee and Johnny a couple of times to let them know what is going on, but Johnny is sick, I hate to think of him sick, even a little sickness can be dangerous for him


SusieQ82 says:


yeah


sorry if I am out of it, I am still crying. I'm glad Mom hasn't caught on yet


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Actually I have been too, but I am going to have to go soon, because right now Kia really needs me she's really breaking up over what happened at school, it's starting to scare me


SusieQ82 says:


yeah, I should go try again to comfort Maddie, but she keeps sending me away


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


sometimes you just have to keep trying


SusieQ82 says:


she's just withdrawing more and more


I think she went to sleep. It's quiet in there now


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


But Kia is really feeling as if she is less than whole and I hate seeing her feel that way, her brother and sisters all have one form of disability or another, but she went from having hearing loss, and having to where glasses to loosing her leg on top of that, and its really starting to get to her now, and then shes upset about Danniella too, she was with us when it happened


 


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Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/5/2006
Excellent dialogue piece, Sarah and Michelle; brava! Very well done, girls!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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