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A Conversation Between Friends (On Loosing A Loved One)
By Michelle R Kidwell Power In The Pen
Friday, October 13, 2006

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A collobration between Sarah's character Susie, and my character Rebekka Rachel (legoless) Thank you Sarah for writing these with me...

 


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Hey Susie this is so unbelievable it's like I am living in a bad dream


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Susie are you there?


SusieQ82 says:


yeah, I keep expecting to wake up and find it's all been a nightmare and it's over now


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


It just seems so unfair, I pray that I will wake up and see Danniella bancing around, happy, enjoying life once again


SusieQ82 says:


Mama is so worn out, she's been in bed since 9 o'clock, when she put Daniel and the girls to bed


t just doesn't seem like she can be gone, like her funeral today didn't actually happen


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I'm really worried about my Mamma, she has been having pains and its two months too soon for the baby to come, she cant loose this baby after loosing Danniella


SusieQ82 says:


that would be beyond horrible


maybe now she can rest though, start taking things slower


I think the worst part is Daniella's killers will never be punished for what they did. They get off scott free, while everyone else has to suffer for the rest of our lives. I can't get that image of her lying in the casket, she looked like a doll


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Mamma is just so shaken up that she doesnt know what to do, Daddy is too, we all are, it's like a bad dream, and now Mamma is talking about moving, she says this house holds to many memories


SusieQ82 says:


moving to where?


please don't say out of the state? I can't lose my best friend after all of this.


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


no actually to Sonora


SusieQ82 says:


oh


I'm relieved


what do you think about moving?


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


it would be closer to you


I dont know I am kind of torn, I love the idea of living close to my best friend, and closer to my Aunts and cousins, but I grew up in Sacramento, and it would be farther from Davis, but I know it's doable, and Mamma is right, Sacramento carries to many bad memories right now


SusieQ82 says:


yeah, but it has good memories of Daniella too


you would be losing those too


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


not really because when you come down to it the memories we carry with us, and actually she has been thinking about this since before Danniella was kidnapped and murdered, and she's kicking herself for not doing it sooner, but I know it does us no good to play the blame game


SusieQ82 says:


yeah, I know. I wish Maddie would stop blaming herself


it's not going to bring her sister back


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


it's just hard not too, and Maddie and Kia have been doing alot of that lately, I am worried about Kia, she is withdrawing in herself, and falling into a depression, she and Aunt Kendra and most of the children are here with us, accept for Tyler which of course you know since your Mamma took him for Aunt Kendra


SusieQ82 says:


yeah, he was sacked out when we got home.


I'm sorry I left, but I needed some space. I was about to go out of my mind. I'm not use to large families, so I am still adjusting


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I grew up around Aunt Kendra's family so I guess I am more use to it


SusieQ82 says:


Mama said I can spend next week w. you guys if I want to


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


That would be good


I would like to be thirteen again, not have the weight of the world on my shoulders


SusieQ82 says:


that is, if you want company, of course :P


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I don't know how much longer I can stay awake tonight, I just want to crash an get some serious sleep, but every time I close my eyes I see Danniella


And I want to reach out to her and bring her back to us, but her body is in the ground now and her soul is with Yeshua


SusieQ82 says:


well, you know I learned before I was even 13 there was very serious evil in the world.


it's hard b.c it's so final, to see her in the casket then see that casket put into the ground and buried


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


yeah it is, I am not going to be able to stay awake much longer Sus, I am so exhausted I feel as if I havenít slept in six months


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


you make the choice dont let anyone else make it for you


SusieQ82 says:


they are really pushing it, every time I talk to them on the phone.


I'm worried about going off alone w. them, w.out Mama. I don't think they can attend to my needs, and I can't handle them all by myself


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


yea thatís understandable


SusieQ82 says:


I mean, I can go to your house or stay w. Kendra and Kia and not worry about getting the help I need, but it's not the same w. them


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


well yeah Aunt Kendra knows how to care for our needs, Aunt Kendra has SB, so she can relate to needing extra care


And Mamma knows how to care for your needs, so you have no worries there


I am afraid I can't keep my eyes open any longer Susie can we talk maybe tomorrow night, or maybe I can call you, would that be okay?


SusieQ82 says:


but all their other grandchildren are "normal" even the young ones aren't as dependant on them as i would be


egoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I dont think I could read if I tried thats how worn down I am physically and emotionally


SusieQ82 says:


I wish I didn't have to depend on her so much.


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I know the feeling


SusieQ82 says:


I hope I don't fall going from my chair to the bed.


well, you have a good night. I hope you sleep well. You might have to get something to help you sleep for a while, until you have had time to adjust.


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


I know thats what I am afraid of


I have fallen from my chair more than once :S


SusieQ82 says:


it's bad b.c I can't get up by myself either


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


It's bad for me if I get hurt, because I donít have that pain warning to let me know something isnít right


SusieQ82 says:


yeah


I often wish I didn't


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


NO YOU DON'T


 


SusieQ82 says:


sometime when you are more awake, I have news I am dying to share w. you.


legoless(F)(L)(A) says:


Okay I cant wait but I think its best that I am more awake


Gb and Good Night Susie


SusieQ82 says:


you just don't know, or you wouldn't want to wait :P


take care, good night



 


 


 


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Reviewed by Denise Contreras 10/14/2006
Great read well done.
Hugs Angela
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/14/2006
It is good to talk about things when they happen; and I am glad that Rebekkah and Susie have one another! Very well done, Michelle and Sarah; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(


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