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My Father Did This To Me. (Part Three) -Graphic Language And Content-
By Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Saturday, September 29, 2007
Rated "R" by the Author.
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The young boy in this story has found out more than he wanted to about his father.
If you are easily offended, please don't read; if you want to read this story, please read at your own risk and discretion.
Things like this happen in real life, unfortunately; God help those poor people who must truly live in the pits of hell!
 I am an emotional wreck.
I find out that my cocksucking father is more of a monster than originally thought. He not only molested me; he molested my sister, and he raped my mother.
He also molested other children, some as young as two years old. Little babies. He's ruined their lives forever. What kind of goddamn sicko would do that to an innocent little kid who has hardly begun to live?
My father would, that's who.
And now because he has ruined our lives, I am stuck here in the psycho ward, getting electroconvulsant therapy and intense emotional counseling. I still am plagued with nightmares, and my physical body is all fucked up. I shake. I have horrible, vivid nightmares night after night. I see "things" like giant black or blue spiders spinning webs on the ceiling, or shapeless squiggles in my field of vision.
My sister is now involved in a cult, a satanic cult, and I have seen what it has done to her. She has gotten painfully skinny, and I know she is being paid to perform nasty sex acts with strangers--grown men, even other kids. Even our dad has gotten into the act. He was in prison, but he sweet talked his way out; now he's jeopardizing her life--and my own life is in extreme danger.
I once snuck a peek at my sister when she went to one of her "secret meetings". What I saw will haunt me for the rest of my life. Naked bodies performing lewd, grotesque gyrations that no human being has a right to witness. Blood sacrifices done on tiny children, even babies; babies being skinned alive, burned alive, stabbed, tortured. Their pitiful, pain-filled screams will linger in my subconscious for the rest of my days.
I haven't been back; what I have seen is too horrible to even think about; it's enough to make me want to vomit all over again. I can't eat, I can't sleep, I can't even think because I know that our dad, our very own father, is involved in this sick game using children as puppets, and until he is done away with or locked up for good, no child is safe from him--or other bastards like him.
(To be continued.)
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| Reviewed by chris stienstra |
10/1/2007 |
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Graphic and real life....
There are so many children and families at risk. This is one of society's greatest black sins that haunts all of us.
My best regards,
Chris |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/30/2007 |
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I say kill the bastard slowly by starting by pulling his balls out with a tong!!
Say no more...get way to upset!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
9/30/2007 |
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WoW! Kaeren this is some heavy load of agonizing memories for any one to carry in in their memories, sometimes evil must be fought with evil
a scumbag like that should be delt with accordingly.
Peace be with you
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
9/29/2007 |
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Graphic and stunning prose! Powerful anatomical references! You show your versatility here, Karen Lynn...to be able to write in other forms and make your audience feel emotion will lift you up out of a low spot. You've hit your mark today! Be well you and Karla.
Love,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love |
9/29/2007 |
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| I hope in the continuation the father is "done away with". How awful--no other word for it than EVIL. |
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| Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine |
9/29/2007 |
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| You poor child. I had no idea you have been thru such horror. I put this at the foot of the cross for you and I join in prayer that this siuation will change and that the vitims be blessed by God. God hates such horrors and this man is possessed by Satan. Cunsult the Catholic Church. There are priest who can cast Satan out of such individuals. Peace be to you 'lil flower |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
9/29/2007 |
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| A heavy one is this one. Unfortunately, as you say, it not only can be true but there are several news stories this week about child abuse. Pitiful ones... |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
9/29/2007 |
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This is an excellent write, thank you for sharing, keep it up and be blessed in the writing
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
9/29/2007 |
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Thank you Karen for the warning, as of the first two lines I knew I couldn't read any farther as I get very upset over these sick monsters and yes I realize this is happening in the world and I would love to see these people in deep pain and It wouldn't be nice for me to write what I think should happen to them, tears flowing.
Newfie Hugs for the innocent, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/29/2007 |
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There are those monsters out there who do this and get away with it; ruining young innocent lives forever. Know what we ought to do with those caught molesting/raping? Cut off their privates; cut off their arms and legs; cut out their tongue; let 'em wallow around on the ground, and people walking by can just kick the **** out of 'em!!!!!!!!! ANYBODY who molests or rapes, especially an innocent child, is SUB human. I wouldn't even insult animals by comparing a molester to one!!!!!!!!!!!! GRRRRRRRR A hardhitting, raw look at man's inhumanity towards another. Well done. *tears*
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
9/29/2007 |
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Yes, Karen, it is very graphic, but there are just some things your can't sugar coat. When we hear news of another sexual attack on someone the language seems so carefully chosen that it conceals what really happened.
It is so sad to know that young children's lives are destroyed at the hands and evil of some sick person. Keep telling your stories, Karen. I think people can learn from them. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/29/2007 |
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This is shocking write but sadly also true in some cases in this world that most consider civilized but no other animal on earth can act as cruel as mankind can towards it's own. Well done Karen.
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| Reviewed by Ann Scarborough |
9/29/2007 |
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And locked up and treated the way he treated those children!!
OH Karen! This is POWERFUL!! You got my attention instantly and kept me riveted!
Love and hugggssss a plenty!
annie |
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