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By Ivana I.N Nakova
Sunday, October 28, 2007

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Find out about something that could or couldn't be true !

Dark night…outside its cold and windy, the sound of the wind makes my skin bristle, I am sitting in my chair, thinking about my conversation from yesterday…the phone is ringing, slowly like I am scared to take the call I’m going to the phone.
-Yes, the private detective office of Michele, how can I help you?
-It is me we talk yesterday, you can go this night over his place and find out what is going on there, at the moment everybody are out but be quick they wont be out for long time.
He hangs up on me. I didn’t have time for second thoughts, I grab my jacket and my hat and I left the office. I put my hand in my packet, I found the little white paper that was given to me yesterday when I had the conversation with that mysterious person on it was a one long address. I took a cab and I went there.
When the cab stopped I was in front of a big house with yellow façade, around the house it was a big concrete wall, I noticed that the people who were living in the house must be rich because the house was enormous!
I jumped the wall and get closed to the entrance on the doors there was a small message, go in the back yard on the small wooden table is the key of the house and the key of Nick bedroom where I think is the information that I need. Nick bedroom is on the third floor next to the big mirror.
Hmm, strange the person who needed my help is acting like he knows everything where do I put in here, what was my task, he already knew everything! But I was paid to go in the house so I took the keys and went inside. I am opening the big metal door and there is a surprise for me, the house on the outside was just so nice but on the inside was so dark and somehow creepy! I am going on the third floor and there’s the big mirror but it’s broken. The door of Nick bedroom was opened my six sense is telling me do not go inside, in my mind I am remembering about the words that were told to me about whose nick and what he is doing….the men who cold me told me a one scare story
“I know Nick and his family for long time but these two months they all react very unusual, Nick is so pain and cold and his mother and sister diapered and they all go out only when is dark, I am not welcome in their home anymore”-these was told to me from the person who call me one hour ago and he also sad-“the money are not important just find out what is going one”
I’m coming back from my thoughts now it is only one decision to go in or to stay out, I am making my firs step I am going in, I have never been scared from anything and now this is not time for making the first time for everything.
I push the door and I black out from the view…
Two days after.
I open my eyes I am in hospital there is the men who call me on the phone.
-Thanks god for being still alive, sorry for getting you in to this!-he saying to me, but I don’t get it, what is going on.
Then I remember, Nicks room full with blood he in the middle his family around I just sad god help me and I grab my gold necklace with a Christ on it….
Strange world is this we never going to find what is a reality and what is a fairytales.

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