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Family Struggles Part Two (A Conversation Between Audrey & Naomi With S/T)
By Michelle R Kidwell Power In The Pen
Sunday, November 18, 2007

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Messianic Mamma says:

I really think tis a mistake to completely cut your ties from him

 


 


 


 


 


Messianic Mamma says:



Hey Audrey


MotherHubbard7 says:



hey


Messianic Mamma says:



How's Susie?


MotherHubbard7 says:



in alot of pain


MotherHubbard7 says:



the doctor said her pelvis is going to take a long time to heal


Messianic Mamma says:



ouch that has to be painful


Messianic Mamma says:



Other than that what else is she going to have to face


MotherHubbard7 says:



well, she's in the body cast from the waist down


MotherHubbard7 says:



for 8 weeks


MotherHubbard7 says:



the doctor wanted her imoblized because she has to move in such a tramautic way to get around at all


Messianic Mamma says:



ugh


MotherHubbard7 says:



so, she will spend both holidays in the cast


MotherHubbard7 says:



unlike what most people might believe, I don't blame Wayne for this. It just happened, I know it's not his fault


Messianic Mamma says:



I know you dont blame wayne


MotherHubbard7 says:



and I don't hate him


MotherHubbard7 says:



I just want the fighting and stress to end, that is why I am cutting ties w. him, for the good of everyone


MotherHubbard7 says:



believe it or not, I am not just thinking of myself here


Messianic Mamma says:



I know you arent


MotherHubbard7 says:



I just don't know what to do


MotherHubbard7 says:



I feel like I am between a rock and a hard place


MotherHubbard7 says:



I don't want these hard feelings to go on


Messianic Mamma says:



I wouldnt recomend travelling back to England with Susie just in the cast


MotherHubbard7 says:



I'm not planning on it


MotherHubbard7 says:



not any time soon


Messianic Mamma says:



good


MotherHubbard7 says:



I don't want to run away from this, but at the same time I don't want anyone to hurt anymore


Messianic Mamma says:



I know Audrey


Messianic Mamma says:



I wish there was more I could do or say


Messianic Mamma says:



Audrey I feel so inadequate right now


MotherHubbard7 says:



I do too


MotherHubbard7 says:



do you understand better why I feel the way I do though?


Messianic Mamma says:



I am not sure


MotherHubbard7 says:



if I had ever dreamed our meeting would cause so much heartache I never would have tried to find my brother


MotherHubbard7 says:



I hate the impact this has had on him


Messianic Mamma says:



I know but I really think you should talk this out with him


MotherHubbard7 says:



I have tried


Messianic Mamma says:



I could not imagine not having a relationship with my sister Louisa


MotherHubbard7 says:



all we end up doing is fighting


Messianic Mamma says:



I think that will change, if you both give it time


MotherHubbard7 says:



I don't want to hurt him anymore


MotherHubbard7 says:



I have done enough damage


MotherHubbard7 says:



he hates us


Messianic Mamma says:



I really think tis a mistake to completely cut your ties from him


MotherHubbard7 says:



well, I have tried to talk to him


Messianic Mamma says:



I am going over to the hospital can you meet me there and we can talk


Messianic Mamma says:



I fell myself last night, and Micah wants me to make sure nothing is broken


MotherHubbard7 says:



I know he thinks I am being difficult, even impossible, but I am not trying to be


Messianic Mamma says:



I know you arent


MotherHubbard7 says:



yeah, I am here w. Susie now


Messianic Mamma says:



Okay, I will talk to you in a few


MotherHubbard7 says:



he's way too emotional to be reasonable


MotherHubbard7 says:



ok, see you soon


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Reviewed by Kathy Armijo 11/18/2007
In the end, it is important to know that every avenue was exhausted. Then, if it doesn't work out, it won't be from lack of effort. But ... if it resolves itself to everyone's betterment, oh what joy. My two cents on this dialogue - if I were a participant, this would have been my advice.

You make the reader think about what they'd do if they were in a similar situation.

God bless you. Kathy
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 11/18/2007
Michelle and Sarah,

Painful to read: the physical, the mental, stress.

Blaming Dr. Wright for trying to share a little of what gets him through *his* problems isn't going to help, Sarah. He's under a lot of stress right now, being pulled in twenty different directions: work, health, family worries, etc, etc, etc., one problem mounting on top of others not resolved.

I know: going through a bit of this, myself, with my best friend, T. T. EXPECTS bad things to happen, because that's all she remembers. If there is anything good, it is overshadowed by the littlest thing that wasn't perfect. There is never any good news, ever. It's always bad. It's getting to the point where I don't want to be around her, any more...she has few friends now, and I can kind of see why?!?? I have my own problems dealing with life, but can't be surrounded by all the negativity!! But, if I "abandon" her, I'd be made to feel guilty, and so I stay friends, miserably.

What do I do in this situation???

Anyway, got off on a tangent. Sorry 'bout that! An excellent dialogue between friends.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/18/2007
How about a happier story next time, ladies?? Other than that, this is very well written and laid out! Hope things improve for all involved! With the holidays coming up, it wouldn't help being angry at each other; Christmas is about family and togetherness. Just a thought!

Happy Thanksgiving to you two; and happy birthday early, Michelle!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Poor Susie. A broken pelvis. *OW*


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