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“Don’t kick my dog!” Briana shouted.
“I didn’t kick him. I moved him over with my foot,” Debbie said. She didn’t take her eyes off the book she was reading.
Sometimes Briana loathed her sister. And she hated sharing a bedroom with her. They didn’t have much choice, however. They lived with their parents in a small townhouse.
Gianni let out a canine yelp. Briana got off her bed, walked over to Debbie and slapped her face. Debbie jumped up immediately and grabbed Briana’s long black hair and pulled her head from side to side. She then pushed her hard, which made Briana lose her balance and fall to the floor.
“That does it!” Briana said. She got up and flew out of the bedroom.
“Big tattletale!” Debbie called after her. She couldn’t hold back the tears. The lives of the two girls together seemed unbearable lately. She went back to her homework but found she could hardly concentrate.
Two minutes hadn’t passed when Briana burst into the room. Debbie looked up.
“I hate you! I hate you!” Briana screamed. Debbie saw the shiny, raised blade of the kitchen steak knife in Briana’s hand but she didn’t feel it as her sister plunged it briskly into her thorax again and again. The sheen was the last flicker of light Debbie ever saw.



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Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 9/20/2008
A shocking awakening to read this, but not all too far-fetched, Randal. Young people are exposed to so much violence, nowadays, precipitating action (violence?) rather than thought...and that is not restricted just to the young! Good, but tragic, story.
Blessings and Love - Micke
Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins 9/17/2008
I read the title and thought, this mght be something to read to the urban children at the community meeting tomorrow............I don't think so :)
Reviewed by Bonnie May 9/17/2008
Oh my God Randall, what the world brought this out of you. Is it true, did this happen? How horrible and you described it like you were there and took us with you. Holy Cow Randall, are you all okay? I sure hope this was fiction. Fantastic job in shocking me completely awake this morning my friend, never expected that ending. Love ya, hair on end Bonnie
Reviewed by Stan Grimes 9/16/2008
Bit of a darkside, eh? I like it.

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