Shouldn't this be in the poetry section of the horror website? All in all you did a good job with this one and I will be keeping an eye on what you do in the horror genre. I've written a lot of poetry myself but short stories is my main territory along with doing novels now and novelettes.
The side of life, of ourselves, we often avoid exploring and dare not admit ... But we must explore what lies on the underside for it is the other half that makes us whole. Noxious or not ... Excellent exploration in well chosen words!
the passion of dark light has you immersed in the dungeon with the mystic's pen in hand -- this is intense Vickie -- you put a tremendous amount of effort into its creation -- may peace, love and joy elope with your heart -- JMW
Vicky, I welcome you to my world, how you knew? Fee is a child of the light, me?...should I say more? not only a fantastic well written poem but "The Stars Align" of Nox Arcana gives the whole another dimension.
Very well done, and if there's more in your ink-tank...
Oh my goodness! the music alone is quite disconcerting to me. I agree that there is nothing more inhuman than for one to show contempt for another. I think that the opposite may be true as well; that we become much better human beings when we demonstrate love toward another.
Much blessings, J'nia