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A Night On the Town
By Sarah M Petru
Friday, March 20, 2009

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Two best friends on a night out on the town in New York city.

It was a beautiful night in New York City. She was in her apartment, tired of typing reports, and was looking forward to going to dinner with her best friend from the office, Barb. It was going to be lobster! So she looks out of her bedroom window, at the beautiful night skyline. The sky was all rainbow hued,--Very breathtaking! So Barb calls her on her cell phone, about sevenish, and asked, "Are you ready to go?" Ashley replied, "Yes. I'm ready." And she's like, "OK, see you when you get out here." So she grabs her purse, and headed out the door

At Shellfish Paradise, they had quite a wait before they got seated. Finally, after about twenty minutes, a waitor named Ryan got them to a booth, and asked, "What would you like to drink?" Ashley said, "I'd love a margarita." Barb chimed in, "Me too!" So about fifteen minutes later, Ryan came out with their drinks. and also asked them, "May I take your order?" And they both ordered a huge lobster that they could share. So when they got done, they got a to-go box and save the rest for later, or the next day. Ryan gave them their ticket, and also his phone number. Ashley had a feeling that he really liked her, and she felt the same.

Bright and early the next day, Ashley and Barb headed to the beach. The sky was clear and blue--a perfect day for a picnic, and who do they run into? Ryan, the waitor from last night. So then, Ashley asks Ryan if he wants to join them for a lunch, and he accepts their invitation. So the three have sandwiches, vegetables, and all kinds of good food. Then Ryan and Ashley wander off on their own for awhile, just hanging out, the two of them. So they go under a palm tree, right then and there, Ryan asked if he could buy her a drink. So she said, "Sure, I'd love one. I could use a cold smoothie right about now." So he goes to the juice bar and orders two ice cold smoothies. And they stand there, walking and talking, he finallly asks her out. She says yes. And they decide to go swimming for a little bit. Well the sun started setting, and this has been one of the best days of Ashley's life. So he asks if he could take her to his place, for dinner. She accepts.

So then she gets in his car with his arm around her, and they drive off into the sunset, going to his place. She calls Barb and tells her what's going on, and tells her she may be staying at his place for the night. Barb replied, "Oooh, you go girl! Good luck with him and see you tomorrow maybe. I'm planning on going to the mall, if you want to come tomorrow evening, let me know." Ahsley replied, "I'll go ahead and ask him. Do you mind if I bring him along?" Barb then remarked, "Not at all, the more the merrier!" So then they have a nice, romantic candlelit dinner at his place. Then they sat down, with a romantic comedy, snuggling and kissing. It was like she was in love with the guy. So he kissed her neck, leaving some hickies on her. This was true romance right here that she had. And the rest of the night, they hung out, then went to his bedroom, and she fell asleep right beside him.

So the next day, she wakes up in his arms. She couldn't be any happier if she tried to. So feeling generous, she made him some breakfast. And that afternoon, they went to the mall and went shopping. That was a lot of fun! It was her, Barb, and Ryan all together just having fun, joking around, and bullshitting. Then they went and had lunch at this cafe` shop, had cappucino and a salad, shared some chips. They then left the mall and decided to go dancing, so they went to a night club. Dressed at her best, she went to this dance club called Viva Vegas. It was all lit up with neon lights! So then they go inside, and start dancing, even belly dancing. So then Ryan orders them a few drinks, feeling tipsy already, she goes and dances dirty with him. So then Ryan and Ashley, after a few hours or so of being at the dance club, they both were getting tired. So right then and there, Ryan got Ashley in his car, drove her to a nice park and watched the sunset with her. He put his arm around her, saying, "I love you, Ashley. Thanks for a wonderful night. I've had the best time with you. You're fun to be around." Then, Ashley, leaning on his shoulder/chest, replied back to him, "I love you too, Ryan. And your welcome, I'm so glad you had about as much fun as I did." And right then and there, they looked into each other's eyes, and passionately kissed. She felt a spark when they kissed. This was true love.





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