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The Shower: Caution, R Rated
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Caution. "The Shower" contains an explicitly descriptive sexual scene

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The Shower

Seagate, New York

June 20, 1956 


Lying nude on the open, sleep ready sofa-bed, he’d been waiting for her to come out and now, coming off the bed, going to the closed door, he listened to the sound of running water...


Opening the door, assailed by a cloud of steam, standing a moment looking at the defused hair and flesh tones of Marsha’s body behind the translucent shower curtain, “Marcie.”


In deep thought, the sound of his voice startling her, “Mitchie?” Then seeing the skin toned shadow on the other side of the frost colored curtain, she poked her head through.


“Hi, baby. Thought maybe you’d like some company. Like maybe you’d like your back scrubbed.”


His unexpected entry into the bathroom coinciding with what she had been thinking; thinking that, Maybe I can make ‘it’ happen now.  Surprising him by drawing the curtain open, “Sure,” she said, becoming somewhat aroused herself, “come on in.”


Mitchell’s chest was hard and covered with fine, dark-brown hair. Though not noticeably muscled, his arms were solid, his stomach flat, his buttocks firm, his calves and thighs somewhat muscled and, jutting from within the tangle of pubic hair, his penis stood rigidly forward.


Before meeting Mitchell – again, because they had met six years earlier – keeping all boys hands away from where she knew they shouldn’t be, Marsha Goldman had held herself in tight rein on so many occasions when she had been in passionate situations with young men whom she’d liked, and one who she thought she loved, when she had wanted, on so many occasions, to let the boy touch her breasts and her crotch and for her to touch the boy, too. To feel it, and yes, to see it, too...  But she hadn’t, and even now, after almost six months of marriage and the intimacy of marriage, though she kept it well hidden,  Marsha Lipensky still felt a sense of excitement when she saw her aroused husband nude.


When not aroused, leaving less than three inches exposed, Mitchell’s penis all but disappeared

within his pubic hair. When in a state of erection, though, it swelled to about six and a half  inches, and Marsha constantly enjoyed watching as, magically, the small nub came out of hiding, jerked to life and engorged, and she was always, always thrilled  to know that – sometimes by doing nothing more than merely looking at him, watching it, that – she was the reason for this erotic metamorphosis.


While menstruating, and for the few days preceding her menstrual cycle, intercourse was called off and, although it was he that requested it, twice in the six months of their marriage – even though she would never tell him – Marsha did enjoy sitting bare chested between his spread legs, knowing he was looking at her breasts as she held his penis in her hand and ‘took care of him’... And she always marveled at the projected power of the first bursts of semen.


Putting his leg over the rim, stepping into the tub, looking at his wives wet, nude body, becoming even more impassioned...


From the rear, Marsha could easily pass for a slight boy: Her torso was thin, bordering on skinny. She had broad shoulders, no hips, a straight waist and small, very tight buttocks. From the front, though, there was no mistaking Marsha Lipensky for anything but a woman.  The size of her breasts fell within the smaller end of medium, but because she had a wide rib-cage, appearing larger then they actually were, her breasts would tend to fill out at the sides giving Marsha attractive, wide cleavage.  About the size of half-dollars, the areolae of her nipples were domed and dark pink in color.  Marsha’s stomach was solid and concave. Her legs were long and slender with well defined calves. Her pubic hair pitch black and silky fine.


Mitchell’s idea of the perfect girl had always been the Coca-Cola ad, ‘girl next door’ face on a big-busted, slightly meaty body with solid thighs and buttocks with , maybe, a ‘cute little tummy’.


Generally what he liked were sunny-faced girls with  a little ‘meat on their bones’.


When he thought back – or when he was angry at Marsha, usually because she was angry at him – he wondered how and why he ever fell in love with a slightly Semitic looking, to say the least, moderate busted, all but skinny girl. And yet he truly did love Marsha, and did think of her as beautiful.


As much as Mitchell enjoyed looking at her dressed, he – big surprise – especially loved looking at her naked, and of all he loved looking at – big surprise again – were Marsha’s breasts, and because he’d never imagined – and, oh, yeah, Mitchell had spent a lot of time imagining, but not – that any breasts could ever be quite as lovely as Marsha’s, what he absolutely  loved to look at above all else were the beautiful, dusky-pink areolae of his wife’s nipples.


Mitchell was not a sound sleeper whereas his wife was and, when occasionally she would sleep without a pajama top; usually awaking before her, he would lay waiting till a streamer of light from the part in the drapes – that he would usually part a wee bit wider – would lay across the bed, then, if Marsha were laying in the right direction, he would carefully lower the blanket from over her shoulder, then, with his head propped in the palm of his hand,  just look at her, and...


In these quiet times his heart would swell with love – and restrained passion – and he would wonder how he was ever able to live without this gift given him by God...


Marsha, his Marsha.


Hot water streaming onto him, onto her, their bodies tightly encircled by arms, with hands clasped onto the other’s buttocks.


“Marcie,” Feeling the soft push of soap slicked breasts onto his chest, “God, how I love you!”


“Mitchie,” Feeling the probe of her husband’s penis against her thigh, holding him, sensing the

heat within her hand, “I love you, too!”


Mouths tightening, tongues twining.


Exploring the soapy-slick valley between, his left hand, gliding over the twin mounds of Marsha’s small, hard buttocks. His right hand, rubbing over her vulva... probing... parting the petals, his finger, sliding into the so warm, so lubricious channel...


Straining into the probe of his finger, slowly moving the one hand fore and back along the warm, hard shaft. The nails of the other hand tightening into the flesh of his buttock, urging Mitchell even closer....


Breaking the kiss, lowering his head, holding a breast from beneath, bringing it to his lips, along with the streaming water he drew Marsha’s excited, now elongated , tightly constricted nipple deeply into his mouth.


When with a girl, the revered moment for Mitchell had always been the first time he’d been allowed to taste her. To put his tongue onto, and run it over and around the areola of her nipple. To draw the nipple into his mouth. To taste the sweet, salt tang of her flesh. And every girl he knew – that would allow this – had tasted differently. Or maybe, really, the girls had all tasted the same, but being different girls, what he had really tasted was the excitement of their newness.


Pulling from her hand, bending at the knees, crotched before her, running his mouth and tongue over Marsha’s streaming flesh... To over, and around the tiny projection of her ‘outie’ navel... and down. And because the mat of her pubic hair was wet and lay flat, her vulva was fully visible through the thinly wet hair and the projection of her mound was seemingly more pronounced... And he drew the hard, soft mound fully into his mouth, and bit softly, but not too softly onto the hairy flesh.


Feeling the delicious pain of the bite, placing one hand on his head, the other hand, tightening, till her knuckles became white, around the steel shower curtain rod, as, biting her lower lip, Marsha waited for what she knew, for what she expected, what she wanted to come next, as...


Parting the fleshy folds with his tongue, turning his face to the side so the water would channel over his lips rather than into his mouth, touching his tongue to the upper cleft of her vagina, Mitchell licked the budding tip of Marsha’s clitoris, as...


Arching her pelvis forward, widening her thighs, holding the back of his head, pressing his mouth onto, and his tongue into her vagina, savoring the dual erotic sensations of a clitoral caress and the in and out motion of his tongue, closing her eyes...


Rather than just ejaculating into a prophylactic, Mitchell truly loved doing ‘this’ to Marsha. To taste Marsha... To really taste Marsha. To literally take the sweet fluid of her sex, of her body into his and thus, so he did believe, the two became more a part of one...


Besides, rapidly excited, once actual intercourse began he was prone to quick ejaculation.


Also, always quiet during foreplay and intercourse, at times such as this Marsha would usually show some sort of response and...  at least at these times, Mitchell felt he was able to give her, he sincerely hoped, as much pleasure as she always gave him.


And, Oh, yeah! He’d love to have Marsha do ‘the same’ for, and to him, but, as she’d told him...


“Do not expect me to do that to you, Mitchell! Nice Jewish girls don’t of ‘round giving their husband’s ‘blow jobs’.”


“How,” he had asked, “do you know?”


“Well,” Marsha answered, “I’m sure your mother doesn’t do ‘that’ to your father.”


Yes, he thought, that’s true !  Because, as most progeny, he could not imagine his mother and father having, even, simple intercourse  let alone his mother giving his father a ‘blow Job.’


“And,” Marsha had continued, “I’m sure my mother has never done ‘it’ to my father.”  Yes, of that Marsha was rather sure. But to other men? That, she was not too sure of.


Her feet braced against the sides of the tub, her back pressed against the tiled wall, straining her pelvis even further, opening her thighs even wider, holding Mitchell’s head, moving it in a tight circle... Sensing the approach of orgasm,  the volume of air being drawn into her lungs and rapidly exhaled increasing...  feeling the sharp sweetness begin, twisting her fingers in his hair, forcing his mouth even harder onto, and his tongue even deeper into...  “Mmmm!”


He’d truly love to have been aware of it, but unfortunately the distance from Marsha’s mouth, along with running water having covered the sound of her moan, but going with the urging of her hands...


Knowing herself, from the times he’d done ‘this’ before, knowing she was capable of a second orgasm within minutes, or was it seconds from the first. But truly loving the feel of Mitchell within her body, wanting him.. Oh, yes! Wanting him there, “Stand up, baby!” Prompting him upward, taking hold of him, standing on tip-toes, guiding him into her vagina... When she was sure he was as deeply implanted as the length of his penis and the upright angle of their bodies would allow...


Oh, God! Not knowing if he’d thought or said the words.


“Oh, God!” Feeling the lubricious, wonderfully warm tightness surround ‘him’.


Feeling the lubricious, wonderfully warm tightness that encompassed not just the length and breadth of his penis, but all of Mitchell, as though his entire physical and mental being was fully engulfed within the marvelous, sweet sheath of Marsha.


Bringing her hands onto his buttocks again, again prodding her nails into the soft flesh, again forcing their bodies close.. closer. Urging his pelvis to move in a tight circle in rhythm with hers,  “Mitchie,”  The sweetness beginning again, “I love you!”


Moving within the rhythm of Marsha’s rotation, holding her buttocks as she held his, their closely held genitalia swaying in concert within the tight circle...




Once again... Or possibly the sweet pain had never ended and now was but one continuous orgasm, “Mitchie,” breathing her warm breath in his ear, “Oh, Mitchie!”


“Marcie!” Brought to an even higher plane of excitement, not only because of where ‘they’ were, but also due to Marsha’s uncharacteristic show of passion.


Pushing deeper, his motion changing...


Grinding their bodies even closer...


Now, changing her circular rhythm to his pumping rhythm.


Moving his pelvis only. Push... retract... push... retract... push... Nearing!


Nearing... his motion changing... faster, harder, fore and back. Fore and back... His pelvis and penis, jerking forward, jerking backward...




Standing perfectly still, actually feeling the penile contractions within her vagina... within her body. 


Her heart lurching, knowing where his semen now flowed.


“I love you!” Their words mixing with running water, “I love you!” Their mouths coming tightly together, each breathing their hard, ragged breath into the mouth of the other, till...


The fingers of their four hands relaxed, the twenty indentions in their two sets of buttocks turning from white to normal...


Their lips loosening, their heads moved back, their eyes opening, each looked into the half opened eyes of the other, till...


Their breathing slowed...  Marsha’s breasts moved from Mitchell’s chest...  Mitchell’s retracted  penis slipped from Marsha’s vagina, and... The two stood, without words, but yet together.


Outwardly, the look on Marsha’s face appearing serious, “Mitchie,” out of sight, inwardly smiling,  her heart pounding, “we didn’t use a rubber.”


“Yeah, I know.” Standing back, looking at his wife, placing both hand onto her shoulders, “But you know sometimes people try for years without having a baby and this is the first time we’ve ever done ‘it’ without a rubber, so don’t worry about it, nothing’ll happen.”


Marsha was not worried, she was not worried at all.


And this was not “the first time they did ‘it’ without a rubber”.


The very first time they had intercourse, at 3:56 a.m. on December 25, 1955, Christmas morning, seven days after their second marriage, their “in the eyes of God”, not yet consummated marriage, when after waiting for Marsha’s early, excitement induced period to end, when after three days of trying and failing due to Mitchell’s mind induced failure to maintain an erection long enough for insertion, when finally, with the help of a bottle of “Carter’s Indelible Blue/ Black Ink”, they were able, finally, to consummate their marriage, when they had intercourse... in their sleep.


And they didn’t use a rubber then and nothing happened...




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Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 4/17/2014
Very sensual write Mark. Just a normal sexual encounter between married people. I do like writing erotic stories as you know and I do not think this is offensive at all. I really enjoyed the read.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout 6/25/2009
Hotttttttt write here Mark, Wow I write like that but I only share it with one person and I too will be found in the shower and yes Georg nice girls do it. VERY WELL done Mark. With Hubby away should I be thanking you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 6/23/2009 this is a torrid, steaming and delicious shower scene, I, like Karen think a cold shower is in order!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/17/2009
Mark, I think you melted my GLASSES! WOW, this is a hot little number! Holysmokes! Think I need a cold shower now; thank you very much! LOL Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :) *Sweatin' bullets* LOL
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/17/2009
Nice Jewish girls don't do it? well, OK, it was 1956, when the world had a shred of innocence left...
R rated for the "prude's squad" nothing here that can be considered offensive, but an erotic adventure between a married couple, just wed, exploring all the tabu places which couldn't be explored before because...someone tell me why?
Nice girls don't do it? the author most be kidding, around here are lots and lots of nice girls, should I ask around? :-) LOL


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