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A Beautiful Village Under Water
By Deep Rajvansh
Tuesday, August 25, 2009

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This story is from one intresting chapter from my mystery fiction in which mystery under water. The name of the chapter is "A Beautiful Village Under Water"


       A Beautiful Village under











                          The place was lonely; there was not any population far too far at that place. It was evening time and night was coming to close, but in place of darkness the sparkling of lights was coming from the sea surface. The outer sides were darker due to the darkness of night. At mid-night the whole sea surface was full of brightness of light. Group was watching eagerly what is going on at this lonely place.

            The sea water now seems like crystal and there were wide stairs going down in the sea sides. To see the marvelous scene into the water their curiosity was increasing to know all about they were viewing. There was a very big ground seems  down the stairs and so many people  including young, children and woman were busy in their work.                  

           Group children were thinking, is it true or only our imagination?     

Graham said, “Is it live we are watching?”

            Cupper said with surprise, “It is live but unbelievable, a natural life under the water. We should go down from the down stairs.”                                                     

             Some of them said, “No, we shouldn’t go down. It can be risky. May be it is another trouble for us.

We should keep away from this marvelous but strange place because those people can’t be simple people.

             Night was becoming darker but some light was coming from the sea one sea shores. All children were lying down on sandy earth but their curiosity was still going on about the sea people. It was a fear inside every one to be entrapped by the sea people. Cruelty of Sandy was still in their mind. They wanted to sleep but they couldn’t sleep. All were disturbed.

               Marry said to them, “we should do something to go from this place.”   

            “Let it be morning, we will find out any way to go from here.” Right answered, suddenly Graham said; “Listen………..... Let we see their activities inside the sea till we are awaking.” Group agreed with him and was started watching their activities into the sea.

                  There was a festive atmosphere in the see. So many girls were going with candles in their hands wearing beautiful embroidered dresses. There was a group of boys behind the girls having flower basket in their hands. All were talking and making fun with each other.        

                Cupper and the group was stood at seashore and it was seems that sea people were walking in a beautiful valley and the group was watching from a hill. Every one has a desire to go into the sea and know all about them, enjoy with them but there was a fear inside all of them.

                 Mat said, “I am hungry are you not? But there is not anything to eat except this sea water. Let us drink this water in place of food,” and he dip his hands into sea water, but it was again a surprise for them. As well as he puts his hands again into the water he said, “Impossible! It seems only water but actually there is only impression of water.” Nobody was hearing him.  

               Group was still watching the activities of sea people. Five boys and three girls were talking with each other.

With the voice of Mat every one attracted to him, because Mate was repeating his words see this is only impression of water not originally water. Every one had their hands in the water yes…………... Mat is right, sea water was changed into transparent gel or flexible rubber which was seems like water. It became a transparent flexible floor.”              

               “This water is like floor ,we can walk on it.” Kate said, and stepped on the sea water by walking freely on the sea. To see Kate both Right and Marry were also being with her to walk on the sea. Surface of the sea was looking like original sea with its waving water layers but all children were walking and enjoying.

              Mat was stepping on down stairs with jumping but his jump was become too high in comparison to normal jump. It was seems that he was jumping on springs and Mat was enjoying in the air with laughing. Group was surprised to see his condition because he was jumping too high in the air without fear. Suddenly Mat was come down on the sea water and his feet were going deep into the sea, he was going down and down. Mat started to shout for help. Group run to words him for help by giving their hands to Mat for help, but their try become failed. He was going deep into the water, within minutes Mat was falling down with his group. Children on the ground in the sea were feeling something different.      

                As well as boys and girls who were sitting on stairs saw them, they had a great surprise, by heaving a look to the stairs from where Krolin and his group were coming down..............................  















Read full chapter from the book ....................."Krolin Group........and post your comments about my work. It's my first published fiction and your comments are very important for me.


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