Vickie, this conjoined effort is an exercise expressed with a degree of pleasure for the writers and their readers -- erotic and revealing two who created a rendering with a great deal of finesse --a very fine effort by both of you - peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael
I'm kinda speechless Victoria.
This is as real as it gets. It actually
gave me a surge of hope for the dismal world of poetry!
I read both of the confections three times, and each time the layers and nuances of interplay blossomed a little bit more. The characters seem uncannily real as the feelings and expressions develop and envelope the reader.
And I love how your friend set the scene.
I could visualize every stroke of the brush like it was a movie.
I'll have to admit, in all honesty, that it's, by far, the best romantic scene that I've ever read anywhere. This may well be your masterwork!
My Dear Victoria, I will be spending alot of time in the shower,w/ice cold water. Your expressions w/Jack gives
one hope that romance is alive and kicking between all
that believe in 'love,'lust,and relationships.
"Ocean Front" is your top runner in your erotica... Most Excellent!!
Reviewed by Jonah Jameson
"Ocean Front", parts 1 & 2, is a magnificent pairing of forces feting the mysteries of human attraction and expression. I am stunned and emboldened at the recherché ingenuousness that flows between the two writers as they develop this compelling scene of sultry beauty for the readers. To say that my heart was moved upon mightily would be a consummate understatement. I must admit that, in a world consumed by sexual exploitation, I am refreshed to find here that there are still some that treat the love between a man and a woman with such olympian respectfulness.
I bow to the writers for sharing this sublime poetic prose of human intimacy. I am eagerly looking forward to the conclusion.
In reverent admiration
Margarita Caligaris Litt.D., Ph.D.
Nothing in the world can man do better to give pleasure as when he knows how to eat "the" butterfly.
Probably one of the most erotic and tender poems from the author, as the reader wished it didn't came to an end.