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A Criminal Life - Chapter one
By sarah a playle
Sunday, April 18, 2010

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This is an experimental graphic novel I'm working on,using the medium of the Sims video game. It takes place in a user made fictional town of Saskan Harbour and follows young Anna London after her famiy's flight from their old home. This is a complete experiment so all feedback is welcome.

Anna Lisa London, famed author of Saskan Harbour, sat down at her computer in her studio overlooking the ocean. It had been many years since her arrival at Saskan and many years since the events that had lead up to her arrival as a young child and the subsequent events that had followed. Since then, she had built a good life for herself, writing many novels and making a name for herself that reached beyond her infamous father. Now though, she could feel herself growing old and through all the books she had written and stories she had told, one was still left untold. The story of her. Staring out over the sparkling water she decided that now was the time to tell it. She had thought for many days now about how she would tell it, and decided that she would tell it just as if any other one of her novels. She stretched out aged muscle, clicked on her computer and wrote on the top of the page.

A criminal life.
Chapter one

She began writing....

http://acriminallife.wordpress.com/2010/04/18/chapter-one/

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Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/18/2010
Definately has some possibilities but should try and watch out for run on sentences and punctuation. Also more details of her surroundings to draw the reader in to the room to see what she sees around her. Looking forward to more...
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