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Things Change
By D L Johnson
Wednesday, November 17, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
More micro fiction
Things Change
Dan Johnson
© November, 2010
Diana Schuur was singing “How About Me?” as I was thinking about you. You said we were through, I thought, what will I ever do? The answer came the next day, on the plaza, by the fountain, he was holding a drink, about to sip from the cup, I bumped into him, bought him a new drink, and now he is the new you.
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
11/29/2010 |
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| Dan, a clever twist here my friend. Ab is now norm and norm is now ab. "Things" do indeed change my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
11/27/2010 |
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| How cleverly clumsy of you. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/19/2010 |
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Such is life and how events lead to others; cleverly expressed, Dan. Love, peace, and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
11/18/2010 |
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Very interesting twist,Dan....clever write.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
11/17/2010 |
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Interesting writing, Mr.Johnson. I think it would get more exposure had you placed it into the poetry section and declared it a prose. Very nicely written.
Namaste
Tony |
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