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Rhyming tales of Victor Thomas
by Helen Vandepeer

Rhyming stories about a small boy in Australia. His adventures at the zoo at the beach and on a cold winter day. Children, universal treasure...  
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My Small Safe World
By Donnatella Thompson
Sunday, February 20, 2011

Rated "G" by the Author.

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After reading this very tolerant letter to a friend (who actually read it all), as my first "short story", I realize how much I NEED A LIFE!!! This email was exciting to me then. Reading it back is pathetic, but true . I have no life. I must expound on the little things and create more color, even if there IS NO real content. IT'S NOT WHAT YOU SAY, IT'S HOW YOU SAY IT....

Tip: I am an over-medicated agoraphobic who makes pill cocktails for deep sleep to erase my feelings of insignificance after losing my ability to play the flute due to dentures. Now I have no life, or a very small one. Please critique this as it is my first "short story" that I got from an old email I sent a friend. I have several very long rambling thoughts in every writing. I need help creating a special feeling from a silly little experience. Anybody got any ideas?

 

 

 

 

 

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