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An Endless Loop
By Lonnie Hicks
Posted: Tuesday, June 07, 2011
Last edited: Tuesday, June 14, 2011
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Deep in the Night

Over and over again
you come to my mind
especially at night;

I replay our scenes,
I tell myself it is not right
to obsess.

But telling me this
only makes; you
for a longer visit
than if
I had said nothing at all
to myself.

I try to think of something else
but not to think of you
is to intensify
thinking of you,
and I get frightened
that I will flip again
into the endless loop
called thinking of you.

I am torn,
partly wanting to
even if part too
does not want to.

I hear my final sigh,
gentle excitement grows
and I can feel
that sweet surrender glow
and I give in,
I give in,
 I give in,

its exhilirating

to give myself
even if
I first

And I take you in
like summer rain

drenched to my soul

 I splash you

with both


my joy

for time

with you and I

is this

endless loop.

My feet hit the cold floor
in the morning time
and I dress in the dark
having only the glow

of you

for light.

To be continued.


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Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 6/15/2011
I have always had Sunday night loops. Not about a loved one. Just mundane stuff like work and reliving conversations, the "I should have said this" conversation with myself. Makes for a long Monday. Patrick
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 6/9/2011
Some very nice phrasing here, Lonnie...especially loved "only the glow
of you for light"...that's beautiful!


Reviewed by Christine Tsen 6/8/2011
A delightful story, from a divine inner world.

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