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You Deserve Nothing!!
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Tuesday, September 27, 2011

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A girl leaves her boyfriend after he mistreats her. She writes a letter to him telling him just what she thinks of him.

Image (c) 2009, by Karla Dorman.


I have decided that we cannot simply go on like this.  We have to stop pretending or beating around the bush and come to the realization that we just weren't made for one another.

The way you treated me at the school dance last week was a prime example.  The way you kept ogling those popular girls (cheerleaders) hurt me more than you will ever know.  Don't I matter?  Or am I just your personal slave to do your bidding?

I'm sorry.  I'm a person too, just like you are.  I am not going to be treated like second-class fodder; I should be at the top of your interests!  What happened to our relationship?  Why don't you treat me like the way you did when we first met and/or decided to go steady?  Did I do something to  hurt you?  If so, I hope you find it in your heart to forgive me.  I am truly sorry!

This isn't the first time you have spurned me for someone else.  More than once I have caught you liplocked with another girl by the lockers after school, the latest incident two weeks ago, just right after school started.  I thought we had something in common!  It now seems apparent that I don't even seem to be on your mind unless you want something.

Well, Jude, I have news for you.  I am not going to be your little slave girl any longer.  I have had it up way past my eyebrows!  I am going to look for someone else who will treat me with respect and/or dignity!  I certainly deserve more than a second glance or being an afterthought in your life!

If you can't handle it, I can understand, but I know I can't!  I didn'I bring this on myself.  YOU did.  It's all your fault, NOT mine!  

I need to take a break from being with you!  I want something better for my life!  Maybe I will come back to you, but only if you change your ways or start treating me the way I should be treated!!

So you can kiss your sweet little cheerleader friends.  This is goodbye!  I can't take any more of this!!  I need some space!!  I hope you have a nice life 'cause you sure have ruined mine!  In my eyes, you deserve nothing: you're nothing but a selfish, self-conceited jerk!!

~Unsincerely, your (ex) girlfriend, Elaura.  :(  

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Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 9/29/2011
Actually this is kind of a wishy-washy letter because she's telling him she may come back to him. This doesn't mean that your writing here is bad, no, the quality is as always. I just do not get the feeling that Elaura means what she says or will stick to her guns.
Your friend from Southern California; Mark
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 9/28/2011
Well told story Karen, though a bit sad, but sounds like she needs to leave this jerk!!! Keep up the great writing
In Christs Love
Reviewed by Paul Berube 9/28/2011
Touching and very well done, Karen. Nice piece indeed.
Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle 9/27/2011
Being a teenager is tough stuff. Another great story Karen. Thanks.

With Love,
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/27/2011
Three sad stories today ... well penned, Karen. Hope tomorrow's are happier.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

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